六、书面表达。
上周日你们班组织了一次学校旅行。请你用英语写一篇日记,记录一下此次学校旅行。日记内容包括旅行地点、所见所闻、个人感受等。
注意:1.包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.70 词左右(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Sunday, 25th May
Our class went on a school trip last Sunday.
上周日你们班组织了一次学校旅行。请你用英语写一篇日记,记录一下此次学校旅行。日记内容包括旅行地点、所见所闻、个人感受等。
注意:1.包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.70 词左右(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Sunday, 25th May
Our class went on a school trip last Sunday.
答案
Sunday, 25th May
Our class went on a school trip last Sunday. We visited the City Museum. We saw many interesting old things there and learned a lot about Chinese history. We had a nice lunch in a park near the museum. I felt tired but really happy. It was a wonderful day for all of us.
Our class went on a school trip last Sunday. We visited the City Museum. We saw many interesting old things there and learned a lot about Chinese history. We had a nice lunch in a park near the museum. I felt tired but really happy. It was a wonderful day for all of us.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求:写一篇英语日记,需包含旅行地点、所见所闻、个人感受,70词左右,开头已给出。解题思路:1. 承接开头点明旅行地点;2. 描述博物馆内的所见(老物件)与所学(历史知识);3. 补充旅行细节(附近公园的午餐);4. 表达个人感受并总结,确保涵盖所有要点且符合词数要求。
【解析】按照日记结构依次展开:1. 承接开头说明地点:We visited the City Museum.;2. 描述所见所学:We saw many interesting old things there and learned a lot about Chinese history.;3. 补充细节:We had a nice lunch in a park near the museum.;4. 表达感受与总结:I felt tired but really happy. It was a wonderful day for all of us. 整体符合词数要求,覆盖所有规定要点。
【答案】Sunday, 25th May
Our class went on a school trip last Sunday. We visited the City Museum. We saw many interesting old things there and learned a lot about Chinese history. We had a nice lunch in a park near the museum. I felt tired but really happy. It was a wonderful day for all of us.
【知识点】英语日记写作、一般过去时运用、英语应用文表达
【点评】本题考查学生用英语记录校园活动的书面表达能力,要求明确,要点清晰,需准确运用一般过去时,兼顾内容完整性与语言流畅性,是初中阶段常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照日记结构依次展开:1. 承接开头说明地点:We visited the City Museum.;2. 描述所见所学:We saw many interesting old things there and learned a lot about Chinese history.;3. 补充细节:We had a nice lunch in a park near the museum.;4. 表达感受与总结:I felt tired but really happy. It was a wonderful day for all of us. 整体符合词数要求,覆盖所有规定要点。
【答案】Sunday, 25th May
Our class went on a school trip last Sunday. We visited the City Museum. We saw many interesting old things there and learned a lot about Chinese history. We had a nice lunch in a park near the museum. I felt tired but really happy. It was a wonderful day for all of us.
【知识点】英语日记写作、一般过去时运用、英语应用文表达
【点评】本题考查学生用英语记录校园活动的书面表达能力,要求明确,要点清晰,需准确运用一般过去时,兼顾内容完整性与语言流畅性,是初中阶段常见的书面表达题型。
【难度系数】0.5
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