六、书面表达。
"青少年志愿者"意味着光荣的责任与使命。为发扬志愿者精神,学校正在举行主题为"帮助别人,成长自己"的征文活动。请以"Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me
要求:1. 补全标题;2. 短文需包含思维导图中的所有信息;3. 重点谈谈你参加的志愿者工作的经历和感受;4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me
"青少年志愿者"意味着光荣的责任与使命。为发扬志愿者精神,学校正在举行主题为"帮助别人,成长自己"的征文活动。请以"Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me
Happy
"为题,结合自身经历,写一篇不少于90词的英语短文投稿至校刊专栏。要求:1. 补全标题;2. 短文需包含思维导图中的所有信息;3. 重点谈谈你参加的志愿者工作的经历和感受;4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me
Happy
答案
One possible version:
Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me Happy
I have done a lot of volunteer work. My most unforgettable volunteering experience was taking part in Waste-sorting Activity in our community with my friend.
First, we introduced the importance of waste sorting in our daily life. Second, we told the grandparents in our community the differences among the dustbins. Third, we told them how to sort out different kinds of waste.
We were busy all afternoon. We were tired but we were happy because we thought we did something meaningful. If we sort out recyclable things before throwing them away, the amount of waste will be reduced.
Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me Happy
I have done a lot of volunteer work. My most unforgettable volunteering experience was taking part in Waste-sorting Activity in our community with my friend.
First, we introduced the importance of waste sorting in our daily life. Second, we told the grandparents in our community the differences among the dustbins. Third, we told them how to sort out different kinds of waste.
We were busy all afternoon. We were tired but we were happy because we thought we did something meaningful. If we sort out recyclable things before throwing them away, the amount of waste will be reduced.
解析
【分析】
首先需补全标题,结合自身经历确定合适的形容词(如happy);其次要覆盖思维导图的四个核心问题:志愿工作类型、一同参与的人、具体做的志愿内容、作为志愿者的感受;最后按照“总-分-总”结构组织内容,确保字数达标且不出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】
1. 补全标题:选择贴合志愿感受的形容词(如happy),使标题完整;
2. 开篇:点明自己的志愿经历(如社区垃圾分类活动)、一同参与的人(如朋友),回应思维导图的两个问题;
3. 主体:分点描述具体工作内容(如宣传垃圾分类重要性、教社区老人分类垃圾),回应“做了什么”;
4. 结尾:表达作为志愿者的感受(累但开心),说明志愿工作的意义,回应“作为志愿者的感受”;
5. 检查:确认覆盖所有要点,字数不少于90词,无真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me Happy
I have done a lot of volunteer work. My most unforgettable volunteering experience was taking part in Waste-sorting Activity in our community with my friend.
First, we introduced the importance of waste sorting in our daily life. Second, we told the grandparents in our community the differences among the dustbins. Third, we told them how to sort out different kinds of waste.
We were busy all afternoon. We were tired but we were happy because we thought we did something meaningful. If we sort out recyclable things before throwing them away, the amount of waste will be reduced.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、志愿话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题,补全标题合理,完整覆盖思维导图的所有信息,结构清晰,语言流畅,准确表达了志愿经历与感受,符合征文要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先需补全标题,结合自身经历确定合适的形容词(如happy);其次要覆盖思维导图的四个核心问题:志愿工作类型、一同参与的人、具体做的志愿内容、作为志愿者的感受;最后按照“总-分-总”结构组织内容,确保字数达标且不出现真实姓名和校名。
【解析】
1. 补全标题:选择贴合志愿感受的形容词(如happy),使标题完整;
2. 开篇:点明自己的志愿经历(如社区垃圾分类活动)、一同参与的人(如朋友),回应思维导图的两个问题;
3. 主体:分点描述具体工作内容(如宣传垃圾分类重要性、教社区老人分类垃圾),回应“做了什么”;
4. 结尾:表达作为志愿者的感受(累但开心),说明志愿工作的意义,回应“作为志愿者的感受”;
5. 检查:确认覆盖所有要点,字数不少于90词,无真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me Happy
I have done a lot of volunteer work. My most unforgettable volunteering experience was taking part in Waste-sorting Activity in our community with my friend.
First, we introduced the importance of waste sorting in our daily life. Second, we told the grandparents in our community the differences among the dustbins. Third, we told them how to sort out different kinds of waste.
We were busy all afternoon. We were tired but we were happy because we thought we did something meaningful. If we sort out recyclable things before throwing them away, the amount of waste will be reduced.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、志愿话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣主题,补全标题合理,完整覆盖思维导图的所有信息,结构清晰,语言流畅,准确表达了志愿经历与感受,符合征文要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
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