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51. 俗话说，“饭后百步走，活到九十九。”请你就此写一篇文章向学校广播站英语栏目投稿。请你根据以下思维导图的内容提示，用英语写一篇短文。
注意：
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
(2)不能照译原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名；
(3)语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
In our school, many students do not like walking or doing exercise.
注意：
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
(2)不能照译原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名；
(3)语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
In our school, many students do not like walking or doing exercise.
答案
51. 参考范文：
In our school, many students do not like walking or doing exercise. They often sit for a long time every day. When they need to go out, they prefer going by bus or by car to taking a walk.
But I love walking because it keeps me fit. I take a walk twice every day, often in the early morning and after dinner at night. Each time I would walk along the river behind my house for about 20 minutes.
All in all, let's try to take more walks to keep us fit and strong.
In our school, many students do not like walking or doing exercise. They often sit for a long time every day. When they need to go out, they prefer going by bus or by car to taking a walk.
But I love walking because it keeps me fit. I take a walk twice every day, often in the early morning and after dinner at night. Each time I would walk along the river behind my house for about 20 minutes.
All in all, let's try to take more walks to keep us fit and strong.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语短文写作题，要求结合思维导图内容，以“散步”为主题向学校广播站英语栏目投稿。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，先描述同学们的不良习惯（久坐、出行依赖车等），对应思维导图第一部分；2. 介绍自己的散步习惯（时长、路线）及效果，对应思维导图第二部分；3. 最后呼吁大家多散步，对应思维导图第三部分。需注意语句连贯，词数80左右，不能出现真实信息，适当拓展内容，避免直译。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，描述同学们的不良习惯：They often sit for a long time every day. When going out, they prefer taking buses or cars to walking.
2. 过渡到自己的散步习惯及效果：I love walking because it keeps me fit. I take a walk twice every day, in the early morning and after dinner at night. Each time I walk along the river behind my house for about 20 minutes.
3. 结尾呼吁健康生活：All in all, let's try to take more walks to keep us fit and strong.
【答案】
In our school, many students do not like walking or doing exercise. They often sit for a long time every day. When they need to go out, they prefer going by bus or by car to taking a walk.
But I love walking because it keeps me fit. I take a walk twice every day, often in the early morning and after dinner at night. Each time I would walk along the river behind my house for about 20 minutes.
All in all, let's try to take more walks to keep us fit and strong.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；思维导图类作文；健康话题表达
【点评】
本题结合生活健康话题，考查学生的英语语言组织能力与逻辑表达能力，要求根据思维导图提示写作，贴近学生生活，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语短文写作题，要求结合思维导图内容，以“散步”为主题向学校广播站英语栏目投稿。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，先描述同学们的不良习惯（久坐、出行依赖车等），对应思维导图第一部分；2. 介绍自己的散步习惯（时长、路线）及效果，对应思维导图第二部分；3. 最后呼吁大家多散步，对应思维导图第三部分。需注意语句连贯，词数80左右，不能出现真实信息，适当拓展内容，避免直译。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，描述同学们的不良习惯：They often sit for a long time every day. When going out, they prefer taking buses or cars to walking.
2. 过渡到自己的散步习惯及效果：I love walking because it keeps me fit. I take a walk twice every day, in the early morning and after dinner at night. Each time I walk along the river behind my house for about 20 minutes.
3. 结尾呼吁健康生活：All in all, let's try to take more walks to keep us fit and strong.
【答案】
In our school, many students do not like walking or doing exercise. They often sit for a long time every day. When they need to go out, they prefer going by bus or by car to taking a walk.
But I love walking because it keeps me fit. I take a walk twice every day, often in the early morning and after dinner at night. Each time I would walk along the river behind my house for about 20 minutes.
All in all, let's try to take more walks to keep us fit and strong.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；思维导图类作文；健康话题表达
【点评】
本题结合生活健康话题，考查学生的英语语言组织能力与逻辑表达能力，要求根据思维导图提示写作，贴近学生生活，能有效考查学生的英语综合运用能力，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
