Ⅴ.书面表达
兴趣是最好的老师。你有哪些兴趣爱好呢？假设你所在的英语俱乐部下周要举办一场以“My hobby”为主题的分享会，请你用英文写一篇短文介绍你的爱好。要点如下：
（1）介绍你的爱好；
（2）说明你喜欢该爱好的原因（至少3点）；
（3）谈谈你的愿望。
注意：（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】（以下部分仅供参考，希望同学们可以多动脑筋、发散思维）

【实战演练】
My hobby
Different people have different hobbies.





【写作评价】（评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页）

分 项 自评分 互评分 老师评分
内 介绍爱好（1分）
容 说明原因（5分）
分 谈谈愿望（1分）
语言分（8分）
总分（15分）

One possible version：
My hobby
Different people have different hobbies.
As for me, my hobby is swimming.
I like it because it makes me feel free and relaxed in the water. When I swim, I forget all my worries and just enjoy the moment. Swimming also helps me stay healthy and strong. What's more, swimming is more than just fun—it teaches me to work hard and never give up.
I hope to become a great swimmer in the future!

【分析】本题为英语话题书面表达题，主题是“My hobby”，需完成三个核心要点：介绍个人爱好、说明至少3点喜欢该爱好的原因、谈谈未来愿望，且开头已给出，要求词数60左右。解题时先明确具体爱好，再围绕原因选取3个易表达且合理的角度，最后结合爱好谈愿望，需注意语句连贯、避免真实信息、符合词数要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，明确介绍自身爱好（如游泳）；2. 从“放松身心、保持健康、培养意志”三个角度说明喜欢的原因；3. 结合爱好表达未来愿望；4. 调整语句使连贯自然，控制词数符合要求，确保无真实信息。
【答案】My hobby
Different people have different hobbies.
As for me, my hobby is swimming.
I like it because it makes me feel free and relaxed in the water. When I swim, I forget all my worries and just enjoy the moment. Swimming also helps me stay healthy and strong. What's more, swimming is more than just fun—it teaches me to work hard and never give up.
I hope to become a great swimmer in the future!
【知识点】英语话题写作、英文短文创作
【点评】该范文紧扣主题，涵盖所有要求要点，原因清晰合理，语句连贯自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合评分标准的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.6