单元写作训练
写作赏析
【写作主题】本单元的话题是“爱好”，要求学生学会运用本单元所学知识及语法写一篇介绍自己的爱好的文章。
【范文赏析】
Hobbies bring joy to our lives. My hobby is playing basketball.（开篇介绍自己的爱好）
At first, I don’t play basketball very well. So I decide to join the basketball club in our school.（背景）In the club, I know a boy called Simon. He can play basketball very well. He offers to practise playing basketball with me.（经过）With the help of him, my basketball skills improve a lot. At last, we become good friends.（结果）
In my view, basketball can not only help me keep healthy but also make me happy. What’s more, playing basketball teaches me the importance of teamwork.（表达对爱好的看法）
☑体裁： ☑人称： ☑时态：
☑佳句佳句积累：
1. 给……带来愉悦 2. 决定做某事
3. 加入篮球俱乐部 4. 主动提出做某事
5. 练习做某事 6. 在某人的帮助下
7. 很多，许多 8. 最后
9. 在某人看来 10. 不仅……而且……
11. 此外；更重要的是 12. ……的重要性
13. 在我看来，篮球不仅能帮助我保持健康，而且能让我开心。
14. 此外，打篮球教会了我团队合作的重要性。
☑写作提升：使用所给短语并参考其在范文中的句子，根据中文提示，翻译句子。
1. 我决定学习跳舞。(decide to do sth)

2. 在音乐老师的帮助下，我能弹好吉他了。(with the help of sb)

体裁：记叙文
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
佳词佳句积累：
1. bring joy to ...
2. decide to do sth
3. join the basketball club
4. offer to do sth
5. practise doing sth
6. with the help of sb
7. a lot
8. at last
9. in one's view
10. not only ... but also ...
11. what's more
12. the importance of ...
13. In my view, basketball can not only help me keep healthy but also make me happy.
14. What's more, playing basketball teaches me the importance of teamwork.
写作提升：
1. I decide to learn to dance.
2. With the help of the music teacher, I can play the guitar well.

【分析】本题是围绕“爱好”话题的单元写作赏析题，需从范文中提取体裁、人称、时态，积累常用英语短语，再运用给定短语完成汉译英。解题时，先分析范文的文体特征（叙事性内容）、叙述视角（第一人称）、所用时态（一般现在时）；再将中文短语与范文中的英文固定搭配对应；翻译句子时，需准确使用给定短语，注意语法细节（如乐器前加定冠词the）。
【解析】1. 体裁：范文以叙述个人爱好篮球的经历为主，属于记叙文；2. 人称：全文以第一人称“I”展开叙述，故为第一人称；3. 时态：范文描述爱好及日常情况，采用一般现在时；4. 佳词积累：对应中文短语提取范文中的英文固定搭配；5. 写作提升翻译：①使用“decide to do sth”结构，结合“学习跳舞”译为“I decide to learn to dance”；②使用“with the help of sb”结构，结合“音乐老师”“弹吉他”译为“With the help of the music teacher, I can play the guitar well”。
【答案】体裁：记叙文
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
佳词佳句积累：
1. bring joy to ...
2. decide to do sth
3. join the basketball club
4. offer to do sth
5. practise doing sth
6. with the help of sb
7. a lot
8. at last
9. in one's view
10. not only ... but also ...
11. what's more
12. the importance of ...
13. In my view, basketball can not only help me keep healthy but also make me happy.
14. What's more, playing basketball teaches me the importance of teamwork.
写作提升：
1. I decide to learn to dance.
2. With the help of the music teacher, I can play the guitar well.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、英语常用短语积累、汉译英运用
【点评】本题贴合单元“爱好”话题，通过范文赏析帮助学生掌握介绍爱好类记叙文的核心要素，积累实用短语，提升语言运用能力，是基础的写作训练题。
【难度系数】0.3