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(2025·江苏宿迁期中改编)成长的道路漫长曲折,沿途有美丽的风景,也有困惑与烦恼。回首这两个月的初三时光,你的好朋友 Simon 有一些困惑,请根据思维导图的内容介绍 Simon,并根据相应的问题给出你的建议。
【注意】1. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 内容须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,条理清楚,语句连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
Simon is my best friend.
【注意】1. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 内容须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,条理清楚,语句连贯。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
Simon is my best friend.
答案
One possible version
Simon is my best friend. Born in the Year of the Tiger, he's always been confident and hard-working. His favourite colour is yellow because it makes him feel energetic and bright, like the warmth of the sunshine.
However, these two months in Grade 9 have been really difficult for him. He's unhappy with too much homework, leaving him little time to rest, and he often doesn't get enough sleep.
I suggest he can manage time wisely, do homework efficiently, and take short breaks to unwind, which will surely help him sleep better at night and stay focused in daytime.
Simon is my best friend. Born in the Year of the Tiger, he's always been confident and hard-working. His favourite colour is yellow because it makes him feel energetic and bright, like the warmth of the sunshine.
However, these two months in Grade 9 have been really difficult for him. He's unhappy with too much homework, leaving him little time to rest, and he often doesn't get enough sleep.
I suggest he can manage time wisely, do homework efficiently, and take short breaks to unwind, which will surely help him sleep better at night and stay focused in daytime.
解析
【分析】本题要求根据思维导图内容介绍好友Simon并给出建议，开头已提供。解题思路：1. 梳理思维导图中的所有要点：基本信息（生肖虎、名字Simon）、喜欢的颜色（黄色，原因是代表阳光和温暖）、个人品质（自信、勤奋）、烦恼（作业过多、睡眠不足）、建议（合理规划时间、平衡学习与休息、空闲时放松）；2. 以开头句为基础，将要点用连贯的英语语句串联，适当补充细节使内容流畅，控制词数在90左右，避免真实信息，符合写作要求。
【解析】首先承接开头“Simon is my best friend.”，介绍其基本信息与个人品质：Born in the Year of the Tiger, he's always been confident and hard-working. 接着说明喜欢的颜色及原因：His favourite colour is yellow because it stands for sunshine and warmth. 然后阐述他的烦恼：However, these two months in Grade 9, he has too much homework, leaving him little time to rest and often doesn't get enough sleep. 最后给出合理建议：I suggest he plan time wisely, keep a balance between study and rest, and relax in free time, which will help him improve his condition.
【答案】One possible version
Simon is my best friend. Born in the Year of the Tiger, he's always been confident and hard-working. His favourite colour is yellow because it makes him feel energetic and bright, like the warmth of the sunshine.
However, these two months in Grade 9 have been really difficult for him. He's unhappy with too much homework, leaving him little time to rest, and he often doesn't get enough sleep.
I suggest he can manage time wisely, do homework efficiently, and take short breaks to unwind, which will surely help him sleep better at night and stay focused in daytime.
【知识点】英语写作、人物介绍、建议表达
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查英语书面表达能力，要求学生准确提取信息并合理组织语言，兼顾基础语言运用与逻辑连贯性，是初三阶段常见的写作题型，能有效考查学生的综合英语能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先承接开头“Simon is my best friend.”，介绍其基本信息与个人品质：Born in the Year of the Tiger, he's always been confident and hard-working. 接着说明喜欢的颜色及原因：His favourite colour is yellow because it stands for sunshine and warmth. 然后阐述他的烦恼：However, these two months in Grade 9, he has too much homework, leaving him little time to rest and often doesn't get enough sleep. 最后给出合理建议：I suggest he plan time wisely, keep a balance between study and rest, and relax in free time, which will help him improve his condition.
【答案】One possible version
Simon is my best friend. Born in the Year of the Tiger, he's always been confident and hard-working. His favourite colour is yellow because it makes him feel energetic and bright, like the warmth of the sunshine.
However, these two months in Grade 9 have been really difficult for him. He's unhappy with too much homework, leaving him little time to rest, and he often doesn't get enough sleep.
I suggest he can manage time wisely, do homework efficiently, and take short breaks to unwind, which will surely help him sleep better at night and stay focused in daytime.
【知识点】英语写作、人物介绍、建议表达
【点评】本题结合思维导图考查英语书面表达能力，要求学生准确提取信息并合理组织语言，兼顾基础语言运用与逻辑连贯性，是初三阶段常见的写作题型，能有效考查学生的综合英语能力。
【难度系数】0.5
