【写作导引】
本单元以“规则”为话题,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及:①谈论班级与学校规则、家庭规则、交通规则、公共场所规则及安全规则等;②谈论遵守规则的重要性;③制定日常生活中常见的公共场所规则。
【写作任务】
孟子说“不以规矩,不能成方圆。”假如你是李华,你在家和学校需要遵守一些规则。你的笔友Susan想了解这些规则。请根据提示,给她写一封email,词数80左右。

Dear Susan,
I want to tell you about the rules I have to follow at home and school.
What about you? What rules do you have to follow?
Yours,
Li Hua
本单元以“规则”为话题,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及:①谈论班级与学校规则、家庭规则、交通规则、公共场所规则及安全规则等;②谈论遵守规则的重要性;③制定日常生活中常见的公共场所规则。
【写作任务】
孟子说“不以规矩,不能成方圆。”假如你是李华,你在家和学校需要遵守一些规则。你的笔友Susan想了解这些规则。请根据提示,给她写一封email,词数80左右。
Dear Susan,
I want to tell you about the rules I have to follow at home and school.
What about you? What rules do you have to follow?
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
At home, I have to help with the dishes after dinner every day, and I can only use my smartphone for an hour every week. Also, I must finish my homework carefully before going to bed.
At school, I need to arrive by 7:50 in the morning and listen to the teachers carefully in class. We also can't run in the hallways and have to wear school uniforms on school days.
I think these rules are a little strict but helpful, they help me develop good living and learning habits.
At school, I need to arrive by 7:50 in the morning and listen to the teachers carefully in class. We also can't run in the hallways and have to wear school uniforms on school days.
I think these rules are a little strict but helpful, they help me develop good living and learning habits.
解析
【分析】
这是一封给笔友Susan的邮件,需围绕“规则”话题,介绍自己在家和学校遵守的规则,补充合理内容并表达感受。首先结合插图提示的家、学校规则,补充符合日常的规则,最后说明对规则的看法,确保邮件结构完整、内容连贯,满足词数要求。
【解析】
Dear Susan,
I want to tell you about the rules I have to follow at home and school.
At home, I have to help with the dishes after dinner every day, and I can only use my smartphone for an hour every week. Also, I must finish my homework carefully before going to bed.
At school, I need to arrive by 7:50 in the morning and listen to the teachers carefully in class. We also can't run in the hallways and have to wear school uniforms on school days.
I think these rules are a little strict but helpful, they help me develop good living and learning habits.
What about you? What rules do you have to follow?
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
At home, I have to help with the dishes after dinner every day, and I can only use my smartphone for an hour every week. Also, I must finish my homework carefully before going to bed.
At school, I need to arrive by 7:50 in the morning and listen to the teachers carefully in class. We also can't run in the hallways and have to wear school uniforms on school days.
I think these rules are a little strict but helpful, they help me develop good living and learning habits.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题作文(规则)
【点评】
作文紧扣“规则”话题,结合提示补充合理的日常规则,结构清晰,内容连贯,准确表达了对规则的看法,符合写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一封给笔友Susan的邮件,需围绕“规则”话题,介绍自己在家和学校遵守的规则,补充合理内容并表达感受。首先结合插图提示的家、学校规则,补充符合日常的规则,最后说明对规则的看法,确保邮件结构完整、内容连贯,满足词数要求。
【解析】
Dear Susan,
I want to tell you about the rules I have to follow at home and school.
At home, I have to help with the dishes after dinner every day, and I can only use my smartphone for an hour every week. Also, I must finish my homework carefully before going to bed.
At school, I need to arrive by 7:50 in the morning and listen to the teachers carefully in class. We also can't run in the hallways and have to wear school uniforms on school days.
I think these rules are a little strict but helpful, they help me develop good living and learning habits.
What about you? What rules do you have to follow?
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
At home, I have to help with the dishes after dinner every day, and I can only use my smartphone for an hour every week. Also, I must finish my homework carefully before going to bed.
At school, I need to arrive by 7:50 in the morning and listen to the teachers carefully in class. We also can't run in the hallways and have to wear school uniforms on school days.
I think these rules are a little strict but helpful, they help me develop good living and learning habits.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题作文(规则)
【点评】
作文紧扣“规则”话题,结合提示补充合理的日常规则,结构清晰,内容连贯,准确表达了对规则的看法,符合写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
跟踪演练
国法、家规、校规,我们周围处处有规章制度。遵守规章制度,人们才能和谐有序地生活。你校英语社团将举办以“遵守规章制度,自我成长”为主题的征文活动,请结合下面信息,写一篇短文介绍你自己需要遵守的规章制度以及它们给你带来的好处。
要求:1. 介绍该种规则;2. 遵守该种规则的好处。
注意:1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节;2. 词数80左右(开头已写好,不计入总词数)。
Follow Rules, Become Better
Hello, everyone! Do you have rules
国法、家规、校规,我们周围处处有规章制度。遵守规章制度,人们才能和谐有序地生活。你校英语社团将举办以“遵守规章制度,自我成长”为主题的征文活动,请结合下面信息,写一篇短文介绍你自己需要遵守的规章制度以及它们给你带来的好处。
要求:1. 介绍该种规则;2. 遵守该种规则的好处。
注意:1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节;2. 词数80左右(开头已写好,不计入总词数)。
Follow Rules, Become Better
Hello, everyone! Do you have rules
at home? Here are the rules of my family.
I can't go out at night or go home late. On school days, I can't watch TV or listen to music. On weekends, I have to do some reading. I also have to clean my room and sometimes I help my mum cook. And I have to get up early every day.
My family rules are strict, but they are good for me. They keep me safe. They also make me not waste time, so I have more time for my study. I must follow them and try to become better.
I can't go out at night or go home late. On school days, I can't watch TV or listen to music. On weekends, I have to do some reading. I also have to clean my room and sometimes I help my mum cook. And I have to get up early every day.
My family rules are strict, but they are good for me. They keep me safe. They also make me not waste time, so I have more time for my study. I must follow them and try to become better.
答案
Follow Rules, Become Better
Hello, everyone! Do you have rules at home? Here are the rules of my family.
I can't go out at night or go home late. On school days, I can't watch TV or listen to music. On weekends, I have to do some reading. I also have to clean my room and sometimes I help my mum cook. And I have to get up early every day.
My family rules are strict, but they are good for me. They keep me safe. They also make me not waste time, so I have more time for my study. I must follow them and try to become better.
Hello, everyone! Do you have rules at home? Here are the rules of my family.
I can't go out at night or go home late. On school days, I can't watch TV or listen to music. On weekends, I have to do some reading. I also have to clean my room and sometimes I help my mum cook. And I have to get up early every day.
My family rules are strict, but they are good for me. They keep me safe. They also make me not waste time, so I have more time for my study. I must follow them and try to become better.
解析
【分析】首先明确征文主题为“遵守规章制度,自我成长”,需结合给定开头,介绍自身遵守的规章制度(选择贴近学生生活的家规,易展开内容),并阐述规则带来的好处。写作时先承接开头引出家规,列举具体可操作的规则,再对应说明规则的益处,最后点题呼应主题,注意控制词数,语言简洁符合初中英语表达要求。
【解析】1. 承接给定开头,引出要介绍的家庭规则;2. 列举具体家规:晚上不能外出或晚归,上学日不能看电视、听音乐,周末要阅读、打扫房间、有时帮妈妈做饭,每天必须早起;3. 说明家规的好处:虽严格但有益,能保障安全,避免浪费时间,让自己有更多时间学习;4. 点题,表达遵守规则会让自己变得更好。
【答案】Follow Rules, Become Better
Hello, everyone! Do you have rules at home? Here are the rules of my family.
I can't go out at night or go home late. On school days, I can't watch TV or listen to music. On weekends, I have to do some reading. I also have to clean my room and sometimes I help my mum cook. And I have to get up early every day.
My family rules are strict, but they are good for me. They keep me safe. They also make me not waste time, so I have more time for my study. I must follow them and try to become better.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、规章制度话题表达
【点评】短文紧扣主题,列举具体家规清晰,好处阐述明确,符合征文要求,语言简洁流畅,是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】1. 承接给定开头,引出要介绍的家庭规则;2. 列举具体家规:晚上不能外出或晚归,上学日不能看电视、听音乐,周末要阅读、打扫房间、有时帮妈妈做饭,每天必须早起;3. 说明家规的好处:虽严格但有益,能保障安全,避免浪费时间,让自己有更多时间学习;4. 点题,表达遵守规则会让自己变得更好。
【答案】Follow Rules, Become Better
Hello, everyone! Do you have rules at home? Here are the rules of my family.
I can't go out at night or go home late. On school days, I can't watch TV or listen to music. On weekends, I have to do some reading. I also have to clean my room and sometimes I help my mum cook. And I have to get up early every day.
My family rules are strict, but they are good for me. They keep me safe. They also make me not waste time, so I have more time for my study. I must follow them and try to become better.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、规章制度话题表达
【点评】短文紧扣主题,列举具体家规清晰,好处阐述明确,符合征文要求,语言简洁流畅,是符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.7
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