典例赏析
假如你是李华，你校英文报正在开展以“My Role Model”为主题的征文活动，请你根据提示写一篇短文，介绍你敬佩的当代杰出人物并分享你的体会。

要求：1. 可在提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80~100。
审题指导：
1. 体裁：记叙文 2. 时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 3. 人称：第一人称、第三人称
写作框架：

优秀范文：

My Role Model
Role models push us to become better people. My role model of our time is Yuan Longping.
Yuan Longping is known as the "Father of Hybrid Rice". He devoted his life to researching hybrid rice, which has greatly increased rice production. His work helps feed plenty of people not only in China but also across the world, making a great contribution to solving the global food problem.
From him, I learn the spirit of perseverance. His devotion inspires me to work hard and try to contribute to society in my own way.

【分析】本次任务为英文征文，主题是“My Role Model”，要求介绍当代杰出人物并分享个人体会。解题思路：①明确体裁为记叙文，时态以一般现在时、一般过去时为主，人称结合第一人称与第三人称；②选取符合“当代杰出人物”的袁隆平，其贡献明确易展开；③按框架写作：开篇点出榜样，中间介绍人物身份与贡献，结尾分享感悟；④控制词数在80-100之间，适当拓展不超要求。
【解析】采用三段式结构写作：第一段开篇点明榜样的作用，引出袁隆平；第二段介绍袁隆平“杂交水稻之父”的身份，说明他毕生研究杂交水稻，大幅提升水稻产量，助力解决全球粮食问题；第三段结合自身，表达从他身上学到的坚持与奉献精神，激励自己努力为社会做贡献，符合词数要求。
【答案】My Role Model
Role models push us to become better people. My role model of our time is Yuan Longping.
Yuan Longping is known as the "Father of Hybrid Rice". He devoted his life to researching hybrid rice, which has greatly increased rice production. His work helps feed plenty of people not only in China but also across the world, making a great contribution to solving the global food problem.
From him, I learn the spirit of perseverance. His devotion inspires me to work hard and try to contribute to society in my own way.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、人物介绍类作文、时态运用
【点评】范文紧扣征文主题，结构清晰，内容充实，准确介绍了袁隆平的杰出贡献，同时结合自身感悟，语言流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的征文作品。
【难度系数】0.6