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时代在发展，我们也在发展中悄然改变。假设你的学校正在开展以“Changes in my life”为题的征文活动，请你根据以下要点并结合自己的生活实际，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文进行投稿。
写作要点：
1. What changes have taken place? (your lifestyle,study,habits)
2. What do you think of these changes?
Changes in my life
Now that I am in middle school,I can see many changes in my life.
写作要点：
1. What changes have taken place? (your lifestyle,study,habits)
2. What do you think of these changes?
Changes in my life
Now that I am in middle school,I can see many changes in my life.
In the past, my life was simple. After school, I played with my friends in the park. Now, there are many kinds of activities. I join lots of clubs. I used to look up new words by using a dictionary. But now, I can learn new things on the Internet. There are also some changes in my study. I used to get poor grades in English and wanted to give up. With the support of my English teacher, I find it interesting to learn English and study well. I used to listen to stories from my grandma before going to bed. Now I listen to them by using my phone. But I still miss my grandma's stories. These changes greatly improve my life. And I believe there will be more changes in the future.
答案
Changes in my life
Now that I am in middle school, I can see many changes in my life.
In the past, my life was simple. After school, I played with my friends in the park. Now, there are many kinds of activities. I join lots of clubs. I used to look up new words by using a dictionary. But now, I can learn new things on the Internet. There are also some changes in my study. I used to get poor grades in English and wanted to give up. With the support of my English teacher, I find it interesting to learn English and study well. I used to listen to stories from my grandma before going to bed. Now I listen to them by using my phone. But I still miss my grandma's stories.
These changes greatly improve my life. And I believe there will be more changes in the future.
Now that I am in middle school, I can see many changes in my life.
In the past, my life was simple. After school, I played with my friends in the park. Now, there are many kinds of activities. I join lots of clubs. I used to look up new words by using a dictionary. But now, I can learn new things on the Internet. There are also some changes in my study. I used to get poor grades in English and wanted to give up. With the support of my English teacher, I find it interesting to learn English and study well. I used to listen to stories from my grandma before going to bed. Now I listen to them by using my phone. But I still miss my grandma's stories.
These changes greatly improve my life. And I believe there will be more changes in the future.
解析
【分析】
本次征文主题为“Changes in my life”，需围绕两个核心写作要点展开：一是列举生活、学习、习惯方面的具体变化，二是表达对这些变化的看法。写作时需采用“过去-现在”的对比结构，让内容清晰具体，结合自身实际避免空泛，控制词数在100左右，语言要通顺自然，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 开头：直接点题，说明进入中学后生活发生了诸多变化；
2. 主体部分：分三个维度呈现具体变化：①课余活动：过去放学后和朋友在公园玩耍，现在参加各类俱乐部；②学习方式：过去查新单词用字典，现在通过网络学习新知识；③睡前习惯：过去睡前听奶奶讲故事，现在用手机听故事；
3. 结尾：表达对变化的积极评价，认为变化提升了生活质量，同时期待未来有更多变化。
【答案】
Changes in my life
Now that I am in middle school, I can see many changes in my life.
In the past, my life was simple. After school, I played with my friends in the park. Now, there are many kinds of activities. I join lots of clubs. I used to look up new words by using a dictionary. But now, I can learn new things on the Internet. There are also some changes in my study. I used to get poor grades in English and wanted to give up. With the support of my English teacher, I find it interesting to learn English and study well. I used to listen to stories from my grandma before going to bed. Now I listen to them by using my phone. But I still miss my grandma's stories.
These changes greatly improve my life. And I believe there will be more changes in the future.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，通过具体的“过去-现在”对比，生动展现了生活中的变化，内容充实、情感真挚，结构清晰、语言流畅，准确完成了写作要求，符合征文的规范。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次征文主题为“Changes in my life”，需围绕两个核心写作要点展开：一是列举生活、学习、习惯方面的具体变化，二是表达对这些变化的看法。写作时需采用“过去-现在”的对比结构，让内容清晰具体，结合自身实际避免空泛，控制词数在100左右，语言要通顺自然，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
1. 开头：直接点题，说明进入中学后生活发生了诸多变化；
2. 主体部分：分三个维度呈现具体变化：①课余活动：过去放学后和朋友在公园玩耍，现在参加各类俱乐部；②学习方式：过去查新单词用字典，现在通过网络学习新知识；③睡前习惯：过去睡前听奶奶讲故事，现在用手机听故事；
3. 结尾：表达对变化的积极评价，认为变化提升了生活质量，同时期待未来有更多变化。
【答案】
Changes in my life
Now that I am in middle school, I can see many changes in my life.
In the past, my life was simple. After school, I played with my friends in the park. Now, there are many kinds of activities. I join lots of clubs. I used to look up new words by using a dictionary. But now, I can learn new things on the Internet. There are also some changes in my study. I used to get poor grades in English and wanted to give up. With the support of my English teacher, I find it interesting to learn English and study well. I used to listen to stories from my grandma before going to bed. Now I listen to them by using my phone. But I still miss my grandma's stories.
These changes greatly improve my life. And I believe there will be more changes in the future.
【知识点】
英语话题作文、英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，通过具体的“过去-现在”对比，生动展现了生活中的变化，内容充实、情感真挚，结构清晰、语言流畅，准确完成了写作要求，符合征文的规范。
【难度系数】
0.6
