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四、交流是我们收获珍贵友谊的重要途径之一。那么，我们平常应该如何与朋友交流，让友谊长存呢？请根据下面的图示和写作要求，以“How to Communicate with Our Friends”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
写作要求：
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现学生的真实姓名、学校名称等信息；
3. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to Communicate with Our Friends
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It's important for us to communicate with our friends.
写作要求：
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现学生的真实姓名、学校名称等信息；
3. 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to Communicate with Our Friends
A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. It's important for us to communicate with our friends.
答案
Here is some advice.
First, we should trust our friends. It's a good idea to share happiness and sadness with our friends, especially when we have problems. They are always there to listen to us. Second, we should help each other. When our friends are in trouble, we should try to help them to solve problems. Third, we should be sincere when talking with our friends. If we make mistakes or know nothing about a subject, we had better be honest and tell the truth. Fourth, we should put ourselves in our friends' shoes. This can help us understand each other better.
In a word, we should communicate better with our friends. It will make our friendship stronger and last longer.
First, we should trust our friends. It's a good idea to share happiness and sadness with our friends, especially when we have problems. They are always there to listen to us. Second, we should help each other. When our friends are in trouble, we should try to help them to solve problems. Third, we should be sincere when talking with our friends. If we make mistakes or know nothing about a subject, we had better be honest and tell the truth. Fourth, we should put ourselves in our friends' shoes. This can help us understand each other better.
In a word, we should communicate better with our friends. It will make our friendship stronger and last longer.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题写作题，要求以“How to Communicate with Our Friends”为题，结合图示给出的“信任（trust）、真诚（be sincere）、帮助（help）”三个核心要点，适当补充合理内容，词数80左右，开头已提供。写作时需用First、Second等连接词梳理要点，确保内容紧扣主题，语言准确，避免出现真实个人信息，符合初中英语写作的基本规范。
【解析】
首先承接已给开头引出建议；第一点对应“trust”：强调信任朋友，分享喜怒哀乐，遇到问题时朋友会倾听；第二点对应“help”：说明朋友有困难时主动帮忙解决问题；第三点对应“be sincere”：指出与朋友交流要真诚，犯错或不懂时需诚实；适当补充换位思考的内容丰富文章；最后总结，点明良好交流能让友谊更牢固长久，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Here is some advice.
First, we should trust our friends. It's a good idea to share happiness and sadness with our friends, especially when we have problems. They are always there to listen to us. Second, we should help each other. When our friends are in trouble, we should try to help them to solve problems. Third, we should be sincere when talking with our friends. If we make mistakes or know nothing about a subject, we had better be honest and tell the truth. Fourth, we should put ourselves in our friends' shoes. This can help us understand each other better.
In a word, we should communicate better with our friends. It will make our friendship stronger and last longer.
【知识点】
英语话题写作；应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，全面覆盖图示所有提示要点，结构清晰，连接词使用恰当，语言准确流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语话题写作题，要求以“How to Communicate with Our Friends”为题，结合图示给出的“信任（trust）、真诚（be sincere）、帮助（help）”三个核心要点，适当补充合理内容，词数80左右，开头已提供。写作时需用First、Second等连接词梳理要点，确保内容紧扣主题，语言准确，避免出现真实个人信息，符合初中英语写作的基本规范。
【解析】
首先承接已给开头引出建议；第一点对应“trust”：强调信任朋友，分享喜怒哀乐，遇到问题时朋友会倾听；第二点对应“help”：说明朋友有困难时主动帮忙解决问题；第三点对应“be sincere”：指出与朋友交流要真诚，犯错或不懂时需诚实；适当补充换位思考的内容丰富文章；最后总结，点明良好交流能让友谊更牢固长久，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Here is some advice.
First, we should trust our friends. It's a good idea to share happiness and sadness with our friends, especially when we have problems. They are always there to listen to us. Second, we should help each other. When our friends are in trouble, we should try to help them to solve problems. Third, we should be sincere when talking with our friends. If we make mistakes or know nothing about a subject, we had better be honest and tell the truth. Fourth, we should put ourselves in our friends' shoes. This can help us understand each other better.
In a word, we should communicate better with our friends. It will make our friendship stronger and last longer.
【知识点】
英语话题写作；应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，全面覆盖图示所有提示要点，结构清晰，连接词使用恰当，语言准确流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
