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阳光中学最近开展了一系列“安全教育”主题的班会，假如你是八年级（1）班的班长基蒂，请你写一篇发言稿，给出你的建议。下方问题为写作要点：
1. What should we do when an earthquake happens?
2. Why do we need to follow traffic rules?
注意：1. 发言稿应包含上述要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯；
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello! Dear classmates!
As we all know, safety comes first. It has become a big social problem for middle school students.
阳光中学最近开展了一系列“安全教育”主题的班会，假如你是八年级（1）班的班长基蒂，请你写一篇发言稿，给出你的建议。下方问题为写作要点：
1. What should we do when an earthquake happens?
2. Why do we need to follow traffic rules?
注意：1. 发言稿应包含上述要点，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯；
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello! Dear classmates!
As we all know, safety comes first. It has become a big social problem for middle school students.
答案
Sample writing:
Hello! Dear classmates!
As we all know, safety comes first. It has become a big social problem for middle school students. Safety is important in our lives. Here are some tips we can keep in mind.
When an earthquake happens, stay calm. Hide under a strong desk or table. Don’t run around.
Traffic rules keep us safe on the road. If we don’t follow them, we may get hurt. Always use the crosswalk and look both ways before crossing a road. Don’t look at your mobile phone while walking on the road.
What’s more, when there is a fire, use the stairs instead of the elevator. Cover your nose and mouth with a wet cloth.
That’s all for my talk. Hope all of us can stay safe! Thank you!
Hello! Dear classmates!
As we all know, safety comes first. It has become a big social problem for middle school students. Safety is important in our lives. Here are some tips we can keep in mind.
When an earthquake happens, stay calm. Hide under a strong desk or table. Don’t run around.
Traffic rules keep us safe on the road. If we don’t follow them, we may get hurt. Always use the crosswalk and look both ways before crossing a road. Don’t look at your mobile phone while walking on the road.
What’s more, when there is a fire, use the stairs instead of the elevator. Cover your nose and mouth with a wet cloth.
That’s all for my talk. Hope all of us can stay safe! Thank you!
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇关于安全教育的发言稿，需包含地震应对方法和遵守交通规则的原因两个要点，开头已给出。解题思路：先承接开头点明安全重要性，再分两部分阐述要求的要点，适当补充其他安全小提示使内容更丰富，最后收尾致谢，确保语句通顺、逻辑连贯，符合发言稿的语气和字数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，用过渡句引出安全建议；
2. 阐述地震应对方法：保持冷静，躲在坚固桌下，不慌乱奔跑；
3. 说明遵守交通规则的原因：保障自身安全，举例走斑马线、过马路看两侧、不边走边看手机；
4. 适当补充火灾安全小提示，丰富内容；
5. 收尾致谢，完成发言稿。
【答案】
Hello! Dear classmates!
As we all know, safety comes first. It has become a big social problem for middle school students. Safety is important in our lives. Here are some tips we can keep in mind.
When an earthquake happens, stay calm. Hide under a strong desk or table. Don’t run around.
Traffic rules keep us safe on the road. If we don’t follow them, we may get hurt. Always use the crosswalk and look both ways before crossing a road. Don’t look at your mobile phone while walking on the road.
What’s more, when there is a fire, use the stairs instead of the elevator. Cover your nose and mouth with a wet cloth.
That’s all for my talk. Hope all of us can stay safe! Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、安全话题英语表达
【点评】
本文紧扣安全教育主题，完整覆盖题目要求的两个写作要点，适当补充火灾安全内容使结构更饱满；语句通顺连贯，符合发言稿的正式语气，用词适配八年级学生水平，逻辑清晰，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一篇关于安全教育的发言稿，需包含地震应对方法和遵守交通规则的原因两个要点，开头已给出。解题思路：先承接开头点明安全重要性，再分两部分阐述要求的要点，适当补充其他安全小提示使内容更丰富，最后收尾致谢，确保语句通顺、逻辑连贯，符合发言稿的语气和字数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，用过渡句引出安全建议；
2. 阐述地震应对方法：保持冷静，躲在坚固桌下，不慌乱奔跑；
3. 说明遵守交通规则的原因：保障自身安全，举例走斑马线、过马路看两侧、不边走边看手机；
4. 适当补充火灾安全小提示，丰富内容；
5. 收尾致谢，完成发言稿。
【答案】
Hello! Dear classmates!
As we all know, safety comes first. It has become a big social problem for middle school students. Safety is important in our lives. Here are some tips we can keep in mind.
When an earthquake happens, stay calm. Hide under a strong desk or table. Don’t run around.
Traffic rules keep us safe on the road. If we don’t follow them, we may get hurt. Always use the crosswalk and look both ways before crossing a road. Don’t look at your mobile phone while walking on the road.
What’s more, when there is a fire, use the stairs instead of the elevator. Cover your nose and mouth with a wet cloth.
That’s all for my talk. Hope all of us can stay safe! Thank you!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、安全话题英语表达
【点评】
本文紧扣安全教育主题，完整覆盖题目要求的两个写作要点，适当补充火灾安全内容使结构更饱满；语句通顺连贯，符合发言稿的正式语气，用词适配八年级学生水平，逻辑清晰，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
