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四、书面表达
收红包是中国孩子过春节的重要活动之一。为更好地了解目前初中生对零花钱的管理，阳光中学邀请全校学生投稿介绍自己压岁钱的使用情况。假设你是李华，参与了本次调查，请你根据以下思维导图，写一篇不少于60词的征文。
What to do with my lucky money
收红包是中国孩子过春节的重要活动之一。为更好地了解目前初中生对零花钱的管理，阳光中学邀请全校学生投稿介绍自己压岁钱的使用情况。假设你是李华，参与了本次调查，请你根据以下思维导图，写一篇不少于60词的征文。
What to do with my lucky money
答案
One possible version:
What to do with my lucky money
I get my lucky money from my parents and relatives at the Spring Festival.
I spend most of my lucky money buying school things, such as pens and notebooks. I also use some to do something helpful, like helping people in need. Then, I also ask my mum to save the rest for me.
I always make a budget for my lucky money. It helps me learn how to manage my money well.
What to do with my lucky money
I get my lucky money from my parents and relatives at the Spring Festival.
I spend most of my lucky money buying school things, such as pens and notebooks. I also use some to do something helpful, like helping people in need. Then, I also ask my mum to save the rest for me.
I always make a budget for my lucky money. It helps me learn how to manage my money well.
解析
【分析】本题要求以李华的身份写一篇关于压岁钱使用情况的英语征文，需结合思维导图的三个核心问题（获取时间、用途、是否做预算及原因），满足不少于60词的要求。解题思路：1. 明确写作主题为“我的压岁钱如何使用”；2. 依次回应思维导图的三个问题：说明压岁钱获取的时间（春节）、具体用途（学习用品、帮助他人、储蓄）、是否做预算及原因（做预算，帮助管理钱）；3. 用正确的英语句型组织内容，确保语句通顺、要点完整。
【解析】首先点明写作主题，说明压岁钱在春节从父母和亲戚处获得；接着阐述具体用途：大部分购买学习用品，部分用于帮助有需要的人，剩余部分让妈妈帮忙储蓄；最后说明会为压岁钱做预算，原因是能帮助自己学会管理钱财。写作时使用一般现在时，词汇准确，语句连贯，覆盖所有要求要点，达到词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
What to do with my lucky money
I get my lucky money from my parents and relatives at the Spring Festival.
I spend most of my lucky money buying school things, such as pens and notebooks. I also use some to do something helpful, like helping people in need. Then, I also ask my mum to save the rest for me.
I always make a budget for my lucky money. It helps me learn how to manage my money well.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作
【点评】本题贴近学生生活实际，考查学生围绕特定话题组织英语语言、完成书面表达的能力，要求结合思维导图要点写作，难度适中，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】首先点明写作主题，说明压岁钱在春节从父母和亲戚处获得；接着阐述具体用途：大部分购买学习用品，部分用于帮助有需要的人，剩余部分让妈妈帮忙储蓄；最后说明会为压岁钱做预算，原因是能帮助自己学会管理钱财。写作时使用一般现在时，词汇准确，语句连贯，覆盖所有要求要点，达到词数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
What to do with my lucky money
I get my lucky money from my parents and relatives at the Spring Festival.
I spend most of my lucky money buying school things, such as pens and notebooks. I also use some to do something helpful, like helping people in need. Then, I also ask my mum to save the rest for me.
I always make a budget for my lucky money. It helps me learn how to manage my money well.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题写作
【点评】本题贴近学生生活实际，考查学生围绕特定话题组织英语语言、完成书面表达的能力，要求结合思维导图要点写作，难度适中，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
