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校报英文版在举办主题为“我的成长故事”的征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇文章投稿。
1. What problem did you meet?
2. How did you feel about it?
3. How did you solve it?
4. What did you learn from the experience?
注意：1. 请根据内容提示进行适当拓展；
2. 80词左右。
1. What problem did you meet?
2. How did you feel about it?
3. How did you solve it?
4. What did you learn from the experience?
注意：1. 请根据内容提示进行适当拓展；
2. 80词左右。
Last year, I joined the school basketball team, but I was the shortest player. I could not catch the ball well, and I felt awful and wanted to give up. Late at night, lying in bed, I often thought, “I am not good enough.”
One evening, I decided to talk with my father about it. He said, “Your height is not your choice, but your efforts are.” His words touched me. So I started to watch videos to learn how to move quickly and pass the ball smartly. I also practised shooting every day after school. After every game, I asked my teammates for advice.
Day by day, my skills improved. Three months later, I could shoot from long range better than anyone else. In our last match, I scored 10 points and helped the team win. My teammates cheered for me. How proud and happy I was! This experience taught me that problems are not walls that block us. They are steps to help us grow. When we face difficulties bravely, we often discover hidden strengths within ourselves.
答案
Last year, I joined the school basketball team, but I was the shortest player. I could not catch the ball well, and I felt awful and wanted to give up. Late at night, lying in bed, I often thought, “I am not good enough.”
One evening, I decided to talk with my father about it. He said, “Your height is not your choice, but your efforts are.” His words touched me. So I started to watch videos to learn how to move quickly and pass the ball smartly. I also practised shooting every day after school. After every game, I asked my teammates for advice.
Day by day, my skills improved. Three months later, I could shoot from long range better than anyone else. In our last match, I scored 10 points and helped the team win. My teammates cheered for me. How proud and happy I was!
This experience taught me that problems are not walls that block us. They are steps to help us grow. When we face difficulties bravely, we often discover hidden strengths within ourselves.
One evening, I decided to talk with my father about it. He said, “Your height is not your choice, but your efforts are.” His words touched me. So I started to watch videos to learn how to move quickly and pass the ball smartly. I also practised shooting every day after school. After every game, I asked my teammates for advice.
Day by day, my skills improved. Three months later, I could shoot from long range better than anyone else. In our last match, I scored 10 points and helped the team win. My teammates cheered for me. How proud and happy I was!
This experience taught me that problems are not walls that block us. They are steps to help us grow. When we face difficulties bravely, we often discover hidden strengths within ourselves.
解析
【分析】
本次征文主题为“我的成长故事”，需围绕四个提示要求展开写作：①明确遇到的具体问题（如加入篮球队因身高劣势不适应）；②描述当时的情绪感受；③说明解决问题的具体行动；④总结从经历中获得的成长感悟。写作时需贴合学生真实经历，语言流畅，符合校报英文版的风格，覆盖所有提示要点。
【解析】
按照主题要求，选取加入篮球队的真实经历作为素材：先点明问题（身高矮不适应篮球）与感受（糟糕想放弃），再写解决方法（向父亲请教后坚持训练），最后点明感悟（困难是成长的台阶），组织成连贯的英文短文，完整回应所有提示，符合征文要求。
【答案】
Last year, I joined the school basketball team, but I was the shortest player. I could not catch the ball well, and I felt awful and wanted to give up. Late at night, lying in bed, I often thought, “I am not good enough.” One evening, I decided to talk with my father about it. He said, “Your height is not your choice, but your efforts are.” His words touched me. So I started to watch videos to learn how to move quickly and pass the ball smartly. I also practised shooting every day after school. After every game, I asked my teammates for advice. Day by day, my skills improved. Three months later, I could shoot from long range better than anyone else. In our last match, I scored 10 points and helped the team win. My teammates cheered for me. How proud and happy I was! This experience taught me that problems are not walls that block us. They are steps to help us grow. When we face difficulties bravely, we often discover hidden strengths within ourselves.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作
【点评】
文章紧扣“我的成长故事”主题，完整覆盖所有提示要点，内容真实具体，情感真挚，结尾点明成长感悟，符合校报征文的要求，语言流畅自然，结构清晰。
【难度系数】
0.7
本次征文主题为“我的成长故事”，需围绕四个提示要求展开写作：①明确遇到的具体问题（如加入篮球队因身高劣势不适应）；②描述当时的情绪感受；③说明解决问题的具体行动；④总结从经历中获得的成长感悟。写作时需贴合学生真实经历，语言流畅，符合校报英文版的风格，覆盖所有提示要点。
【解析】
按照主题要求，选取加入篮球队的真实经历作为素材：先点明问题（身高矮不适应篮球）与感受（糟糕想放弃），再写解决方法（向父亲请教后坚持训练），最后点明感悟（困难是成长的台阶），组织成连贯的英文短文，完整回应所有提示，符合征文要求。
【答案】
Last year, I joined the school basketball team, but I was the shortest player. I could not catch the ball well, and I felt awful and wanted to give up. Late at night, lying in bed, I often thought, “I am not good enough.” One evening, I decided to talk with my father about it. He said, “Your height is not your choice, but your efforts are.” His words touched me. So I started to watch videos to learn how to move quickly and pass the ball smartly. I also practised shooting every day after school. After every game, I asked my teammates for advice. Day by day, my skills improved. Three months later, I could shoot from long range better than anyone else. In our last match, I scored 10 points and helped the team win. My teammates cheered for me. How proud and happy I was! This experience taught me that problems are not walls that block us. They are steps to help us grow. When we face difficulties bravely, we often discover hidden strengths within ourselves.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作
【点评】
文章紧扣“我的成长故事”主题，完整覆盖所有提示要点，内容真实具体，情感真挚，结尾点明成长感悟，符合校报征文的要求，语言流畅自然，结构清晰。
【难度系数】
0.7
