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来自英国的John一直期待能够到北京旅行，以更好地了解这座城市。请你写一篇短文介绍他通过在线旅游网站了解到的信息。
【注意】1. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数90左右，开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、网站名等信息。
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing. He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
【注意】1. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数90左右，开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、网站名等信息。
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing. He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
Beijing, the capital of China, is a good place to visit. It is a city with a long history.
It's also one of the biggest cities in China. People in Beijing are kind and friendly.
They are always glad to help others.
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold in spring. It's a good season to visit Beijing.
There are many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City.
As for food, Beijing Roast Duck is the most famous and it is very delicious.
He is sure that he will have a great vacation
if he comes to Beijing in person.
答案
One possible version:
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing. He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
Beijing, the capital of China, is a good place to visit. It is a city with a long history. It's also one of the biggest cities in China. People in Beijing are kind and friendly. They are always glad to help others.
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold in spring. It's a good season to visit Beijing. There are many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City. As for food, Beijing Roast Duck is the most famous and it is very delicious.
He is sure that he will have a great vacation if he comes to Beijing in person.
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing. He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
Beijing, the capital of China, is a good place to visit. It is a city with a long history. It's also one of the biggest cities in China. People in Beijing are kind and friendly. They are always glad to help others.
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold in spring. It's a good season to visit Beijing. There are many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City. As for food, Beijing Roast Duck is the most famous and it is very delicious.
He is sure that he will have a great vacation if he comes to Beijing in person.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到题目先明确写作任务：给计划来北京旅行的英国友人John介绍北京的相关旅游信息，需要覆盖表格里的全部三个要点，词数控制在90左右，不能出现真实人名、网站名。解题时可以按三个要点分层构思：第一步先完成城市概况部分，先点明北京是中国首都，从历史悠久、当地居民友善的人文角度展开介绍；第二步写最佳旅行时间，选择春季，说明春季气温不冷不热、体感舒适的原因；第三步列举北京的代表性知名景点，还可以适当补充北京特色美食的内容让介绍更真实完整，最后收尾表达对旅行的美好期待，全程使用一般现在时为主的时态，保证行文流畅符合旅游介绍的语境。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开头，首先介绍北京的基础属性：作为中国的首都，它拥有悠久的历史，是中国规模最大的城市之一，补充当地居民友善好客的人文特点，完成城市概况的全部要求。
2. 接下来说明最佳旅行时间为春季，解释春季的天气既不炎热也不寒冷，非常适合出行游览，完成最佳旅行时间及对应原因的表述。
3. 之后列举北京的多处知名景点，比如长城、颐和园、故宫，还补充了北京特色美食北京烤鸭的相关内容，丰富介绍内容，符合旅游介绍的场景逻辑。
4. 最后收尾点明John相信亲自到访北京一定会拥有非常愉快的假期，全文所有要点全部覆盖，词数符合要求，没有出现违规的真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing. He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
Beijing, the capital of China, is a good place to visit. It is a city with a long history. It's also one of the biggest cities in China. People in Beijing are kind and friendly. They are always glad to help others.
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold in spring. It's a good season to visit Beijing. There are many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City. As for food, Beijing Roast Duck is the most famous and it is very delicious.
He is sure that he will have a great vacation if he comes to Beijing in person.
【知识点】
旅游类英文写作，一般现在时运用，要点式写作
【点评】
本题属于初中英语基础应用类写作，给定的写作要点清晰明确，学生只需要按要求分层组织内容，保证信息完整、语句通顺即可拿到合格分数，适当补充符合旅游场景的合理拓展内容可以让短文更生动自然，更符合给外国游客做旅行介绍的语境。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到题目先明确写作任务：给计划来北京旅行的英国友人John介绍北京的相关旅游信息，需要覆盖表格里的全部三个要点，词数控制在90左右，不能出现真实人名、网站名。解题时可以按三个要点分层构思：第一步先完成城市概况部分，先点明北京是中国首都，从历史悠久、当地居民友善的人文角度展开介绍；第二步写最佳旅行时间，选择春季，说明春季气温不冷不热、体感舒适的原因；第三步列举北京的代表性知名景点，还可以适当补充北京特色美食的内容让介绍更真实完整，最后收尾表达对旅行的美好期待，全程使用一般现在时为主的时态，保证行文流畅符合旅游介绍的语境。
【解析】
1. 承接题目给出的开头，首先介绍北京的基础属性：作为中国的首都，它拥有悠久的历史，是中国规模最大的城市之一，补充当地居民友善好客的人文特点，完成城市概况的全部要求。
2. 接下来说明最佳旅行时间为春季，解释春季的天气既不炎热也不寒冷，非常适合出行游览，完成最佳旅行时间及对应原因的表述。
3. 之后列举北京的多处知名景点，比如长城、颐和园、故宫，还补充了北京特色美食北京烤鸭的相关内容，丰富介绍内容，符合旅游介绍的场景逻辑。
4. 最后收尾点明John相信亲自到访北京一定会拥有非常愉快的假期，全文所有要点全部覆盖，词数符合要求，没有出现违规的真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
John is looking forward to coming and visiting Beijing. He learnt something about Beijing on an online tour website.
Beijing, the capital of China, is a good place to visit. It is a city with a long history. It's also one of the biggest cities in China. People in Beijing are kind and friendly. They are always glad to help others.
The weather is neither too hot nor too cold in spring. It's a good season to visit Beijing. There are many places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City. As for food, Beijing Roast Duck is the most famous and it is very delicious.
He is sure that he will have a great vacation if he comes to Beijing in person.
【知识点】
旅游类英文写作，一般现在时运用，要点式写作
【点评】
本题属于初中英语基础应用类写作，给定的写作要点清晰明确，学生只需要按要求分层组织内容，保证信息完整、语句通顺即可拿到合格分数，适当补充符合旅游场景的合理拓展内容可以让短文更生动自然，更符合给外国游客做旅行介绍的语境。
【难度系数】
0.7
