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Ⅴ. 书面表达。
本周英语角的主题是畅想20年以后的生活。假如你是李华,请从20年后你所从事的职业、居住环境、交通方式、日常生活等方面进行畅想,写一篇短文,为此次活动做准备。
注意:
1. 关于未来从事的职业,可以选择所给选项中的一个进行写作;
2. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm very glad to be here to talk about my life in 20 years.
本周英语角的主题是畅想20年以后的生活。假如你是李华,请从20年后你所从事的职业、居住环境、交通方式、日常生活等方面进行畅想,写一篇短文,为此次活动做准备。
注意:
1. 关于未来从事的职业,可以选择所给选项中的一个进行写作;
2. 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm very glad to be here to talk about my life in 20 years.
答案
One possible version:
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm very glad to be here to talk about my life in 20
years.
I think my life will be comfortable. I will be a famous scientist. I will have computers
and robots. They will help me do most of the housework. I will have more free time because
I will work just three days a week. Besides, I will live in a beautiful apartment near the sea
and enjoy the fresh air. I can often take a walk on the beach after dinner.
In the future, I will have my own plane so that I can fly to work. Maybe I will even go
to the moon for a holiday. How amazing it is!
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm very glad to be here to talk about my life in 20
years.
I think my life will be comfortable. I will be a famous scientist. I will have computers
and robots. They will help me do most of the housework. I will have more free time because
I will work just three days a week. Besides, I will live in a beautiful apartment near the sea
and enjoy the fresh air. I can often take a walk on the beach after dinner.
In the future, I will have my own plane so that I can fly to work. Maybe I will even go
to the moon for a holiday. How amazing it is!
解析
【分析】
这是一道话题类英语书面表达题，要求围绕“20年后的生活”展开写作，需结合给定思维导图的四个核心方向（职业、环境、交通、日常生活），开头已提供，需补充内容，词数控制在100左右。解题思路：1. 从思维导图的职业选项中确定写作职业（如科学家）；2. 对应各方向补充细节：日常生活用电脑、机器人帮忙减少家务，缩短工作时间；环境选海边公寓，享受新鲜空气；交通用私人飞机，甚至去月球度假；3. 用一般将来时组织语言，衔接自然，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头，点明未来生活舒适，确定职业为科学家；2. 描述日常生活：电脑和机器人帮忙做家务，每周仅工作三天，拥有更多空闲时间；3. 描述居住环境：住在海边的漂亮公寓，享受新鲜空气，饭后可在沙滩散步；4. 描述交通：拥有私人飞机，可飞往工作地，甚至去月球度假；5. 检查词数，确保语言通顺、语法正确，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm very glad to be here to talk about my life in 20 years.
I think my life will be comfortable. I will be a famous scientist. I will have computers and robots. They will help me do most of the housework. I will have more free time because I will work just three days a week. Besides, I will live in a beautiful apartment near the sea and enjoy the fresh air. I can often take a walk on the beach after dinner.
In the future, I will have my own plane so that I can fly to work. Maybe I will even go to the moon for a holiday. How amazing it is!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般将来时、话题词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“未来生活”主题，围绕思维导图的职业、日常生活、环境、交通四个要点展开，结构清晰，内容具体，运用一般将来时准确，语言流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一道话题类英语书面表达题，要求围绕“20年后的生活”展开写作，需结合给定思维导图的四个核心方向（职业、环境、交通、日常生活），开头已提供，需补充内容，词数控制在100左右。解题思路：1. 从思维导图的职业选项中确定写作职业（如科学家）；2. 对应各方向补充细节：日常生活用电脑、机器人帮忙减少家务，缩短工作时间；环境选海边公寓，享受新鲜空气；交通用私人飞机，甚至去月球度假；3. 用一般将来时组织语言，衔接自然，符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 承接开头，点明未来生活舒适，确定职业为科学家；2. 描述日常生活：电脑和机器人帮忙做家务，每周仅工作三天，拥有更多空闲时间；3. 描述居住环境：住在海边的漂亮公寓，享受新鲜空气，饭后可在沙滩散步；4. 描述交通：拥有私人飞机，可飞往工作地，甚至去月球度假；5. 检查词数，确保语言通顺、语法正确，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm very glad to be here to talk about my life in 20 years.
I think my life will be comfortable. I will be a famous scientist. I will have computers and robots. They will help me do most of the housework. I will have more free time because I will work just three days a week. Besides, I will live in a beautiful apartment near the sea and enjoy the fresh air. I can often take a walk on the beach after dinner.
In the future, I will have my own plane so that I can fly to work. Maybe I will even go to the moon for a holiday. How amazing it is!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般将来时、话题词汇运用
【点评】
本文紧扣“未来生活”主题，围绕思维导图的职业、日常生活、环境、交通四个要点展开，结构清晰，内容具体，运用一般将来时准确，语言流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
