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十、书面表达(共2小题;A部分满分5分,B部分满分10分,共15分)
A
请用英语介绍你的校园:它是什么样的?它有哪些场所?你最喜欢哪个场所?为什么?要求:条理清楚,表达准确,语句通顺,意思连贯。5句话左右。
My school is
A
请用英语介绍你的校园:它是什么样的?它有哪些场所?你最喜欢哪个场所?为什么?要求:条理清楚,表达准确,语句通顺,意思连贯。5句话左右。
My school is
答案
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:说明文。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体描述学校情况(小但漂亮);第二步,分别列出主要场所;第三步,介绍自己最喜欢的地方是图书馆,并说明原因(有很多有趣的书、能了解世界并享受安静时光)。
[词句积累]
①dining hall 餐厅 ②playground 操场 ③library 图书馆④classroom buildings 教学楼 ⑤quiet 安静的
⑥My favourite place is the library because there are many interesting books in it. (because 引导原因状语从句)
⑦I can read all kinds of books and learn more about the world. (and 连接并列句)
A One possible version:
My school is small but beautiful. There is a dining hall, a playground, a library and 2 classroom buildings. My favourite place is the library because there are many interesting books in it. I can read all kinds of books and learn more about the world. I can also enjoy some quiet time there after school.
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[审题步骤]
①体裁:说明文。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏信息,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体描述学校情况(小但漂亮);第二步,分别列出主要场所;第三步,介绍自己最喜欢的地方是图书馆,并说明原因(有很多有趣的书、能了解世界并享受安静时光)。
[词句积累]
①dining hall 餐厅 ②playground 操场 ③library 图书馆④classroom buildings 教学楼 ⑤quiet 安静的
⑥My favourite place is the library because there are many interesting books in it. (because 引导原因状语从句)
⑦I can read all kinds of books and learn more about the world. (and 连接并列句)
A One possible version:
My school is small but beautiful. There is a dining hall, a playground, a library and 2 classroom buildings. My favourite place is the library because there are many interesting books in it. I can read all kinds of books and learn more about the world. I can also enjoy some quiet time there after school.
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解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先明确写作要求：需要用5句左右的英语介绍校园，必须覆盖三个核心要点：1. 校园的整体样貌 2. 校内包含的各类场所 3. 你最喜爱的场所+对应的原因，时态统一用一般现在时即可。解题思路可以按三步走：第一步先顺着题干给出的开头补全第一句，总述学校的整体特点，比如小而美、干净整洁这类常见描述；第二步用there be句型列举校内的教学楼、操场、餐厅、图书馆等常见场所，覆盖第二个要点；第三步用剩下的3句话左右，先点明自己最喜欢的场所，再用原因状语从句说明理由，补充细节让语句通顺连贯，确保所有题干要求的信息都不遗漏，控制总句数在5句左右就符合要求。
【解析】
按照审题搭建的写作框架逐句完成：
1. 开篇顺着题干给出的开头补全总述句：My school is small but beautiful，直接点明学校整体小巧美观的特征，完成第一个写作要点。
2. 第二句用there be句型列举校内的各类场所：There is a dining hall, a playground, a library and 2 classroom buildings，清晰列出校内的配套设施，覆盖“有哪些场所”的要求。
3. 第三句点明自己最喜爱的场所，用because引导原因状语从句说明基础原因：My favourite place is the library because there are many interesting books in it，点出核心的个人偏好，逻辑通顺。
4. 第四句补充在图书馆的收获：I can read all kinds of books and learn more about the world，进一步说明喜欢图书馆的理由，内容更充实。
5. 第五句补充额外的细节：I can also enjoy some quiet time there after school，收尾自然，刚好凑够5句话，所有要点全部覆盖，语句连贯没有语法错误。
【答案】
One possible version:
My school is small but beautiful. There is a dining hall, a playground, a library and 2 classroom buildings. My favourite place is the library because there are many interesting books in it. I can read all kinds of books and learn more about the world. I can also enjoy some quiet time there after school.
【知识点】
1. there be句型
2. 原因状语从句
3. 校园主题写作
【点评】
本题是基础类的应用写作题，题干已经明确给出全部写作要点，不需要学生自行拓展复杂内容，只需要按照提示逐点覆盖，积累常见的校园相关英语词汇就可以顺利完成，写作时注意控制句数在5句左右，避免出现时态错误、主谓不一致等基础语法问题，就很容易拿到满分，学生也可以根据自己的真实校园情况替换场所和理由，灵活调整内容。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先明确写作要求：需要用5句左右的英语介绍校园，必须覆盖三个核心要点：1. 校园的整体样貌 2. 校内包含的各类场所 3. 你最喜爱的场所+对应的原因，时态统一用一般现在时即可。解题思路可以按三步走：第一步先顺着题干给出的开头补全第一句，总述学校的整体特点，比如小而美、干净整洁这类常见描述；第二步用there be句型列举校内的教学楼、操场、餐厅、图书馆等常见场所，覆盖第二个要点；第三步用剩下的3句话左右，先点明自己最喜欢的场所，再用原因状语从句说明理由，补充细节让语句通顺连贯，确保所有题干要求的信息都不遗漏，控制总句数在5句左右就符合要求。
【解析】
按照审题搭建的写作框架逐句完成：
1. 开篇顺着题干给出的开头补全总述句：My school is small but beautiful，直接点明学校整体小巧美观的特征，完成第一个写作要点。
2. 第二句用there be句型列举校内的各类场所：There is a dining hall, a playground, a library and 2 classroom buildings，清晰列出校内的配套设施，覆盖“有哪些场所”的要求。
3. 第三句点明自己最喜爱的场所，用because引导原因状语从句说明基础原因：My favourite place is the library because there are many interesting books in it，点出核心的个人偏好，逻辑通顺。
4. 第四句补充在图书馆的收获：I can read all kinds of books and learn more about the world，进一步说明喜欢图书馆的理由，内容更充实。
5. 第五句补充额外的细节：I can also enjoy some quiet time there after school，收尾自然，刚好凑够5句话，所有要点全部覆盖，语句连贯没有语法错误。
【答案】
One possible version:
My school is small but beautiful. There is a dining hall, a playground, a library and 2 classroom buildings. My favourite place is the library because there are many interesting books in it. I can read all kinds of books and learn more about the world. I can also enjoy some quiet time there after school.
【知识点】
1. there be句型
2. 原因状语从句
3. 校园主题写作
【点评】
本题是基础类的应用写作题，题干已经明确给出全部写作要点，不需要学生自行拓展复杂内容，只需要按照提示逐点覆盖，积累常见的校园相关英语词汇就可以顺利完成，写作时注意控制句数在5句左右，避免出现时态错误、主谓不一致等基础语法问题，就很容易拿到满分，学生也可以根据自己的真实校园情况替换场所和理由，灵活调整内容。
【难度系数】
0.7
B
假如你校向全体学生发起"How do you spend your winter holiday?"的主题投稿活动,请用英文写一篇文章参与投稿,要点如下:
1. 生活方面:饮食、睡眠……
2. 家务方面:扫地,擦窗。
3. 活动方面:过年走亲访友……
要求:1. 所写短文必须包括要点提示内容,并适当发挥;
2. 词数不少于70,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Winter holiday is coming. This is what I do to make it a healthy and happy holiday.
假如你校向全体学生发起"How do you spend your winter holiday?"的主题投稿活动,请用英文写一篇文章参与投稿,要点如下:
1. 生活方面:饮食、睡眠……
2. 家务方面:扫地,擦窗。
3. 活动方面:过年走亲访友……
要求:1. 所写短文必须包括要点提示内容,并适当发挥;
2. 词数不少于70,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Winter holiday is coming. This is what I do to make it a healthy and happy holiday.
答案
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:记叙文。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:围绕寒假生活,从健康生活、家务劳动和节日活动三个方面展开,并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,用1~2句承接开头,总述需要保持健康的生活方式;第二步,分述介绍家务劳动和节日活动,使用连接词使结构清晰;第三步,总结全文,表达感受。
[词句积累]
①healthy 健康的 ②housework 家务
③This is what I do to make it a healthy and happy holiday.(动词不定式表目的)
④Every day, I eat different kinds of healthy food, like meat, fish and vegetables. (like 表示举例)
B One possible version:
Winter holiday is coming. This is what I do to make it a healthy and happy holiday.
Every day, I eat different kinds of healthy food, like meat, fish and vegetables. I get 10 hours of sleep every day. I also go running every morning to keep fit.
As a middle school student, I can help my parents with some housework. I sweep the floor every day. I can also keep the window clean.
During the Spring Festival, my family and I visit our friends and relatives. We always have a big dinner together. I even get lots of red packets.
Winter holiday is so much fun!
[审题步骤]
①体裁:记叙文。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:围绕寒假生活,从健康生活、家务劳动和节日活动三个方面展开,并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,用1~2句承接开头,总述需要保持健康的生活方式;第二步,分述介绍家务劳动和节日活动,使用连接词使结构清晰;第三步,总结全文,表达感受。
[词句积累]
①healthy 健康的 ②housework 家务
③This is what I do to make it a healthy and happy holiday.(动词不定式表目的)
④Every day, I eat different kinds of healthy food, like meat, fish and vegetables. (like 表示举例)
B One possible version:
Winter holiday is coming. This is what I do to make it a healthy and happy holiday.
Every day, I eat different kinds of healthy food, like meat, fish and vegetables. I get 10 hours of sleep every day. I also go running every morning to keep fit.
As a middle school student, I can help my parents with some housework. I sweep the floor every day. I can also keep the window clean.
During the Spring Festival, my family and I visit our friends and relatives. We always have a big dinner together. I even get lots of red packets.
Winter holiday is so much fun!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道英语写作题，首先第一步先完成审题：明确主题是介绍自己的寒假生活参与投稿，体裁是记叙文，描述自己的寒假日常安排统一用一般现在时，人称使用第一人称I。接下来先把题干给出的三个核心要点标记出来，避免漏写：①生活类的饮食、睡眠安排；②家务类的扫地、擦窗内容；③春节走亲访友的活动。之后顺着逻辑构思行文：首先承接题目已经给出的开头，先写健康生活板块，把饮食、睡眠的内容写出来，还可以适当补充晨练这类小细节让内容更饱满；之后用过渡句转到家务板块，自然带出帮父母分担家务，扫地、擦窗的内容；再之后过渡到春节活动板块，写走亲访友的相关安排，补充聚餐这类符合过年场景的细节，最后收尾抒发对寒假的感受，很容易就能达到70词以上的词数要求，完全符合投稿的生活化风格。
【解析】
写作可按照以下三步完成：
步骤1：开篇承接给定开头，先介绍自己寒假的健康生活安排：写明日常摄入各类健康食物，保证充足的睡眠时间，还可以搭配日常锻炼的内容，覆盖第一个要点，让内容更贴合“健康寒假”的主题。
步骤2：用过渡句衔接家务部分，说明自己主动帮父母分担家务，日常负责扫地，还会帮忙擦窗户，覆盖第二个要点，体现自己的独立意识。
步骤3：再用过渡句衔接春节活动部分，写明春节期间和家人一同走亲访友，大家聚在一起吃大餐，还可以补充收到压岁钱的小细节，覆盖第三个要点，最后收尾总结寒假的愉悦感受，完成全文。
【答案】
One possible version:
Winter holiday is coming. This is what I do to make it a healthy and happy holiday.
Every day, I eat different kinds of healthy food, like meat, fish and vegetables. I get 10 hours of sleep every day. I also go running every morning to keep fit.
As a middle school student, I can help my parents with some housework. I sweep the floor every day. I can also keep the window clean.
During the Spring Festival, my family and I visit our friends and relatives. We always have a big dinner together. I even get lots of red packets.
Winter holiday is so much fun!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般现在时运用，话题作文谋篇布局
【点评】
本题贴近学生的真实寒假生活场景，给出的提示要点清晰明确，难度较低。写作时要注意避免生硬逐句翻译要点的流水账问题，适当补充符合生活逻辑的小细节，用简单的过渡词串联不同板块的内容，就能写出流畅自然、符合投稿要求的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道英语写作题，首先第一步先完成审题：明确主题是介绍自己的寒假生活参与投稿，体裁是记叙文，描述自己的寒假日常安排统一用一般现在时，人称使用第一人称I。接下来先把题干给出的三个核心要点标记出来，避免漏写：①生活类的饮食、睡眠安排；②家务类的扫地、擦窗内容；③春节走亲访友的活动。之后顺着逻辑构思行文：首先承接题目已经给出的开头，先写健康生活板块，把饮食、睡眠的内容写出来，还可以适当补充晨练这类小细节让内容更饱满；之后用过渡句转到家务板块，自然带出帮父母分担家务，扫地、擦窗的内容；再之后过渡到春节活动板块，写走亲访友的相关安排，补充聚餐这类符合过年场景的细节，最后收尾抒发对寒假的感受，很容易就能达到70词以上的词数要求，完全符合投稿的生活化风格。
【解析】
写作可按照以下三步完成：
步骤1：开篇承接给定开头，先介绍自己寒假的健康生活安排：写明日常摄入各类健康食物，保证充足的睡眠时间，还可以搭配日常锻炼的内容，覆盖第一个要点，让内容更贴合“健康寒假”的主题。
步骤2：用过渡句衔接家务部分，说明自己主动帮父母分担家务，日常负责扫地，还会帮忙擦窗户，覆盖第二个要点，体现自己的独立意识。
步骤3：再用过渡句衔接春节活动部分，写明春节期间和家人一同走亲访友，大家聚在一起吃大餐，还可以补充收到压岁钱的小细节，覆盖第三个要点，最后收尾总结寒假的愉悦感受，完成全文。
【答案】
One possible version:
Winter holiday is coming. This is what I do to make it a healthy and happy holiday.
Every day, I eat different kinds of healthy food, like meat, fish and vegetables. I get 10 hours of sleep every day. I also go running every morning to keep fit.
As a middle school student, I can help my parents with some housework. I sweep the floor every day. I can also keep the window clean.
During the Spring Festival, my family and I visit our friends and relatives. We always have a big dinner together. I even get lots of red packets.
Winter holiday is so much fun!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般现在时运用，话题作文谋篇布局
【点评】
本题贴近学生的真实寒假生活场景，给出的提示要点清晰明确，难度较低。写作时要注意避免生硬逐句翻译要点的流水账问题，适当补充符合生活逻辑的小细节，用简单的过渡词串联不同板块的内容，就能写出流畅自然、符合投稿要求的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
