登录
七、书面表达(满分 25 分)
为了推进国际社区的建设,你所在的社区 Sunshine Community 将开展一系列提升居民幸福感和关心国际友人的活动。你班上的英国交换生 Justin 对中国的社区生活非常感兴趣,请结合以下社区海报,给 Justin 写一封邀请信。
注意:
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 短文须包括所有内容要点,可以适当发挥;
3. 词数 100 左右,邀请信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Justin,
Our community is going to have some activities this Sunday.
Yours,
Li Hua
为了推进国际社区的建设,你所在的社区 Sunshine Community 将开展一系列提升居民幸福感和关心国际友人的活动。你班上的英国交换生 Justin 对中国的社区生活非常感兴趣,请结合以下社区海报,给 Justin 写一封邀请信。
注意:
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 短文须包括所有内容要点,可以适当发挥;
3. 词数 100 左右,邀请信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Justin,
Our community is going to have some activities this Sunday.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
七、书面表达
One possible version:
Dear Justin,
Our community is going to have some activities this Sunday. I would like to invite you to come and have fun with us. The activities will start at 2 p.m. and finish at 5 p.m. in the community centre.
Volunteers in our community will help the elderly clean their houses. Some engineers will help check and fix machines. If you have something broken, you can bring it here to have it fixed. Moreover, artists will introduce Beijing Opera to foreigners. It's a very good chance to learn more about China and I think you will like it.
I am looking forward to seeing you in our community.
Yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Justin,
Our community is going to have some activities this Sunday. I would like to invite you to come and have fun with us. The activities will start at 2 p.m. and finish at 5 p.m. in the community centre.
Volunteers in our community will help the elderly clean their houses. Some engineers will help check and fix machines. If you have something broken, you can bring it here to have it fixed. Moreover, artists will introduce Beijing Opera to foreigners. It's a very good chance to learn more about China and I think you will like it.
I am looking forward to seeing you in our community.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先明确写作任务是写一封邀请信，收信人是对中国社区生活感兴趣的英国交换生Justin。第一步先梳理需要覆盖的所有内容要点：海报里的活动时间（本周日下午2点到5点）、活动地点（社区中心）、三项核心活动内容：志愿者帮扶老人、工程师检修物品、艺术家介绍京剧。第二步构思行文逻辑：在给定的开头之后，先直接发出邀请，接着清晰告知活动的时间和地点，再逐一介绍三项活动，结合Justin的外国交换生身份做合理补充，比如点明京剧是了解中国传统文化的好机会，最后表达期待对方到来，衔接结尾，全程注意不要出现个人真实信息，控制总词数在100左右，保证语气友好自然。
【解析】
1. 确定文体与时态：本文是邀请类应用文，整体使用一般将来时来描述还未举办的活动，符合语境逻辑。
2. 开篇承接给定开头，直接点明邀请意图：说明想要邀请Justin一同参与本次社区活动。
3. 准确输出海报核心基础信息：明确告知活动的具体时间为周日下午2点到5点，举办地点在社区中心。
4. 逐一展开三个活动要点，做符合逻辑的合理发挥：补充说明志愿者会帮老人打扫房屋，工程师可以帮忙检修损坏的物品，如果Justin有东西坏了也可以带来修理，艺术家会向大家介绍京剧，这是了解中国文化的绝佳机会，贴合Justin对中国文化感兴趣的设定。
5. 收尾表达期待和对方在社区见面，衔接题目给出的落款，调整语句让行文流畅，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Justin,
Our community is going to have some activities this Sunday. I would like to invite you to come and have fun with us. The activities will start at 2 p.m. and finish at 5 p.m. in the community centre.
Volunteers in our community will help the elderly clean their houses. Some engineers will help check and fix machines. If you have something broken, you can bring it here to have it fixed. Moreover, artists will introduce Beijing Opera to foreigners. It's a very good chance to learn more about China and I think you will like it.
I am looking forward to seeing you in our community.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
邀请信写作，要点信息整合，一般将来时
【点评】
本题属于初中英语常见的应用文写作题型，给定的提示信息清晰明确，既考查学生提取整合图文要点的基础能力，也要求学生结合写作对象的身份做适当的内容拓展，避免行文生硬，难度适中，只要覆盖全部要点、语句通顺就可以拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道题首先明确写作任务是写一封邀请信，收信人是对中国社区生活感兴趣的英国交换生Justin。第一步先梳理需要覆盖的所有内容要点：海报里的活动时间（本周日下午2点到5点）、活动地点（社区中心）、三项核心活动内容：志愿者帮扶老人、工程师检修物品、艺术家介绍京剧。第二步构思行文逻辑：在给定的开头之后，先直接发出邀请，接着清晰告知活动的时间和地点，再逐一介绍三项活动，结合Justin的外国交换生身份做合理补充，比如点明京剧是了解中国传统文化的好机会，最后表达期待对方到来，衔接结尾，全程注意不要出现个人真实信息，控制总词数在100左右，保证语气友好自然。
【解析】
1. 确定文体与时态：本文是邀请类应用文，整体使用一般将来时来描述还未举办的活动，符合语境逻辑。
2. 开篇承接给定开头，直接点明邀请意图：说明想要邀请Justin一同参与本次社区活动。
3. 准确输出海报核心基础信息：明确告知活动的具体时间为周日下午2点到5点，举办地点在社区中心。
4. 逐一展开三个活动要点，做符合逻辑的合理发挥：补充说明志愿者会帮老人打扫房屋，工程师可以帮忙检修损坏的物品，如果Justin有东西坏了也可以带来修理，艺术家会向大家介绍京剧，这是了解中国文化的绝佳机会，贴合Justin对中国文化感兴趣的设定。
5. 收尾表达期待和对方在社区见面，衔接题目给出的落款，调整语句让行文流畅，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Justin,
Our community is going to have some activities this Sunday. I would like to invite you to come and have fun with us. The activities will start at 2 p.m. and finish at 5 p.m. in the community centre.
Volunteers in our community will help the elderly clean their houses. Some engineers will help check and fix machines. If you have something broken, you can bring it here to have it fixed. Moreover, artists will introduce Beijing Opera to foreigners. It's a very good chance to learn more about China and I think you will like it.
I am looking forward to seeing you in our community.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
邀请信写作，要点信息整合，一般将来时
【点评】
本题属于初中英语常见的应用文写作题型，给定的提示信息清晰明确，既考查学生提取整合图文要点的基础能力，也要求学生结合写作对象的身份做适当的内容拓展，避免行文生硬，难度适中，只要覆盖全部要点、语句通顺就可以拿到不错的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
