典例观摩
健康的饮食习惯对我们的健康非常重要，它能够帮助人们预防很多疾病。请你根据以下提示，以"Eat Healthily"为题，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍如何养成健康的饮食习惯。

要求:
1.包括提示中所有的写作要点;
2.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
3.稿件中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
4.词数80左右(题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Eat Healthily
Healthy eating habits are important for
us. So how can we form good eating habits?




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Eat Healthily
Healthy eating habits are important for
us. So how can we form good eating habits?
First of all, we need to know what
food is healthy and what food is unhealthy.
Usually fruit and vegetables are healthy
and the food with too much sugar and fat is
unhealthy. Then we must eat less sweet
food and less salt. They may cause many
diseases. A balanced diet is important. We
should eat not only vegetables, but also
meat. Besides, we must have breakfast
every day. Last but not least, we must
have our meals on time.
I believe everyone can have healthy
eating habits if we follow the rules above.
【名师点评】
作者按照题目要求,运用所学词汇和句式,通过提炼加工把提示信息有机地整合成为一篇短文。短文包含了题目所有要点,结构严谨、文笔流畅、语言准确,详尽地介绍了健康的饮食习惯并提出了合理的建议。
在本文写作中,作者能够运用本单元所学词汇和句式,将饮食与健康进行准确描述。如:eating habits、too much、sugar、fat、salt、cause、balanced等词语的运用,体现了作者善于运用所学知识进行表达,达到学以致用的目的。同时作者在文末用"I believe everyone can have healthy eating habits if we follow the rules above."等句式体现了"全民健康"的理念。

Eat Healthily
Healthy eating habits are important for us. So how can we form good eating habits?
First of all, we need to know what food is healthy. Vegetables and fruit are healthy choices. Then, we should eat less sweet food like cakes, as they are bad for our health. We need a balanced diet, so we should eat both meat and vegetables. Besides, we must have breakfast every day to get enough energy. Last but not least, we have to have our meals on time.
If we follow these rules, we can keep healthy easily.

【分析】本题要求以"Eat Healthily"为题写一篇英语短文，需根据图片提示的5个核心要点（知道健康食物、少吃甜食、荤素搭配、每天吃早餐、按时吃饭）完成写作。解题思路为：先明确写作任务与要求，梳理图片中的所有要点；再采用"开头（已给）+分点阐述建议+结尾总结"的结构，使用first、then等连接词让文章条理清晰；最后确保行文连贯、词数符合要求，无真实人名地名。
【解析】1. 审题：确定文体为说明文，主题是健康饮食，必须覆盖图片的全部5个要点；2. 结构：开头引出问题后，分点说明建议：首先点明要区分健康与不健康食物，接着建议少吃甜食，再说明要荤素搭配，之后强调每天吃早餐，最后提醒按时吃饭；3. 语言：用简单句和常用短语，借助连接词使逻辑连贯，词数控制在80左右；4. 检查：确认要点无遗漏，符合所有要求。
【答案】Eat Healthily
Healthy eating habits are important for us. So how can we form good eating habits?
First of all, we need to know what food is healthy. Vegetables and fruit are healthy choices. Then, we should eat less sweet food like cakes, as they are bad for our health. We need a balanced diet, so we should eat both meat and vegetables. Besides, we must have breakfast every day to get enough energy. Last but not least, we have to have our meals on time.
If we follow these rules, we can keep healthy easily.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、健康话题表达、连接词运用
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖了图片中的所有写作要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，使用恰当的连接词使文章条理分明，语言简洁准确，符合词数要求，很好地完成了介绍健康饮食习惯的写作任务。
【难度系数】0.6