实战演练
随着5月20日"全国学生营养日"的到来,《21世纪英文报》正在开展对中学生早餐情况的调查。请你根据以下调查结果,用英语写一篇短文进行投稿,倡导大家吃营养早餐。

要求:
1.必须包含表格内所有信息;
2.文中不得出现与你相关的信息;
3.词数不少于80(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Breakfast Is Important
There is no doubt that breakfast is
important. Recently we did a survey about
breakfast in our school. Here are the results.
随着5月20日"全国学生营养日"的到来,《21世纪英文报》正在开展对中学生早餐情况的调查。请你根据以下调查结果,用英语写一篇短文进行投稿,倡导大家吃营养早餐。
要求:
1.必须包含表格内所有信息;
2.文中不得出现与你相关的信息;
3.词数不少于80(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Breakfast Is Important
There is no doubt that breakfast is
important. Recently we did a survey about
breakfast in our school. Here are the results.
To our surprise, only about 55 percent of the students have wonderful meals for breakfast every day. They always keep healthy and are full of energy.
25 percent of the students just have junk food. They don't have a balanced diet. Their eating habits are so bad that they sometimes get ill.
20 percent of the students go to school without eating breakfast. As a result, these students often feel hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully. They even get ill easily.
It's necessary for us to have breakfast and eat healthy food. We should have breakfast on time.
It's necessary for us to have breakfast and eat healthy food. We should have breakfast on time.
答案
【高分范文】
Breakfast Is Important
There is no doubt that breakfast is important.
Recently we did a survey about breakfast in our
school. Here are the results.
To our surprise, only about 55 percent of the
students have wonderful meals for breakfast every
day. They always keep healthy and are full of energy.
25 percent of the students just have junk food. They
don't have a balanced diet. Their eating habits are so
bad that they sometimes get ill. 20 percent of the
students go to school without eating breakfast. As a
result, these students often feel hungry in class and
can't listen to teachers carefully. They even get ill
easily.
It's necessary for us to have breakfast and eat
healthy food. We should have breakfast on time.
Breakfast Is Important
There is no doubt that breakfast is important.
Recently we did a survey about breakfast in our
school. Here are the results.
To our surprise, only about 55 percent of the
students have wonderful meals for breakfast every
day. They always keep healthy and are full of energy.
25 percent of the students just have junk food. They
don't have a balanced diet. Their eating habits are so
bad that they sometimes get ill. 20 percent of the
students go to school without eating breakfast. As a
result, these students often feel hungry in class and
can't listen to teachers carefully. They even get ill
easily.
It's necessary for us to have breakfast and eat
healthy food. We should have breakfast on time.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务:根据调查表格的结果,用英语写短文倡导学生吃营养早餐。第一步需准确提取表格中的三类关键信息:55%的学生每天吃丰富早餐,身体健康精力充沛;25%的学生吃垃圾食品,偶尔生病;20%的学生不吃早餐,饥饿、上课无法认真听讲、经常生病。第二步结合已给开头,将这些信息用规范英语表达,确保包含所有表格内容,词数达标,最后补充倡导吃营养早餐的结尾,符合投稿要求。
【解析】
承接开头依次描述调查结果:
1. 55%的学生每天吃丰富早餐,对应“身体健康,精力充沛”,译为“55 percent of the students have wonderful breakfast every day, keeping healthy and full of energy”;
2. 25%的学生吃垃圾食品,对应“偶尔生病”,译为“25 percent of students eat junk food, leading to occasional illness”;
3. 20%的学生不吃早餐,对应“饥饿、上课无法认真听讲、经常生病”,译为“20 percent go to school without breakfast, often feeling hungry in class, unable to listen carefully and getting ill easily”;
最后补充倡导内容:“It's necessary for us to have nutritious breakfast and form good eating habits.”
【答案】
Breakfast Is Important
There is no doubt that breakfast is important. Recently we did a survey about breakfast in our school. Here are the results.
To our surprise, only about 55 percent of the students have wonderful meals for breakfast every day. They always keep healthy and are full of energy. 25 percent of the students just have junk food. They don't have a balanced diet. Their eating habits are so bad that they sometimes get ill. 20 percent of the students go to school without eating breakfast. As a result, these students often feel hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully. They even get ill easily.
It's necessary for us to have breakfast and eat healthy food. We should have breakfast on time.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、数据描述、健康话题英语表达
【点评】
本题是根据调查表格进行英语短文写作,要求包含所有表格信息,结构清晰,语言准确,结尾有明确的倡导,符合投稿要求,能考查学生的信息提取和英语表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作任务:根据调查表格的结果,用英语写短文倡导学生吃营养早餐。第一步需准确提取表格中的三类关键信息:55%的学生每天吃丰富早餐,身体健康精力充沛;25%的学生吃垃圾食品,偶尔生病;20%的学生不吃早餐,饥饿、上课无法认真听讲、经常生病。第二步结合已给开头,将这些信息用规范英语表达,确保包含所有表格内容,词数达标,最后补充倡导吃营养早餐的结尾,符合投稿要求。
【解析】
承接开头依次描述调查结果:
1. 55%的学生每天吃丰富早餐,对应“身体健康,精力充沛”,译为“55 percent of the students have wonderful breakfast every day, keeping healthy and full of energy”;
2. 25%的学生吃垃圾食品,对应“偶尔生病”,译为“25 percent of students eat junk food, leading to occasional illness”;
3. 20%的学生不吃早餐,对应“饥饿、上课无法认真听讲、经常生病”,译为“20 percent go to school without breakfast, often feeling hungry in class, unable to listen carefully and getting ill easily”;
最后补充倡导内容:“It's necessary for us to have nutritious breakfast and form good eating habits.”
【答案】
Breakfast Is Important
There is no doubt that breakfast is important. Recently we did a survey about breakfast in our school. Here are the results.
To our surprise, only about 55 percent of the students have wonderful meals for breakfast every day. They always keep healthy and are full of energy. 25 percent of the students just have junk food. They don't have a balanced diet. Their eating habits are so bad that they sometimes get ill. 20 percent of the students go to school without eating breakfast. As a result, these students often feel hungry in class and can't listen to teachers carefully. They even get ill easily.
It's necessary for us to have breakfast and eat healthy food. We should have breakfast on time.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、数据描述、健康话题英语表达
【点评】
本题是根据调查表格进行英语短文写作,要求包含所有表格信息,结构清晰,语言准确,结尾有明确的倡导,符合投稿要求,能考查学生的信息提取和英语表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
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