典例分析
某英语学习网站正在开展以“让历史活起来”为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，以“A New Way to Keep Traditional Culture Alive”为题，写一篇不少于90词的短文投稿。
【要点】(1) What is the new way? (2) How does it work? (3) What are its advantages? (4) What do you think of it?
【审题要领】

【写作框架】
列提纲

【素材积累】
重点短语
1. 自……传承
2. 风行一时的事物
3. 变得生动
重点句子
开头句：When it comes to learning history, I often think of traditional culture shows. 说到学习历史，我经常想到传统文化节目。
中间句：I choose this way because it makes history so interesting that we love it more. 我选择这种方式，因为它使历史如此有趣，我们更喜欢它。
结尾句：I love traditional culture so much that I will inherit our cultural heritage in the future. 我如此热爱传统文化，将来我会继承我们的文化遗产。
【美文欣赏】
A New Way to Keep Traditional Culture Alive
Everyone wants to know our history better, and so do I. I want to introduce traditional culture shows as a new way to learn history because they can bring history alive in our daily life.
These shows use music, dance and pictures to show ancient stories. The shows are so vivid and interesting that students can remember history easily so that they will take great pride in our cultural heritage. For example, we can watch a show about the Tang Dynasty and see how people lived at that time.
For me, learning history is filled with difficulties but is also filled with fun. I believe these new ways will make history more vivid and attractive to young people.
小试牛刀
请你根据以下要点，以“The Terracotta Warriors and Horses”为题，写一篇短文介绍兵马俑。
【要点】(1) The status（地位）and geographical location of the Terracotta Warriors and Horses；(2) Its historical background or characteristics；(3) Your views on protecting such cultural heritage.
【要求】(1) 须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；(2) 不得出现与你相关的真实信息；(3) 不少于90词。
The Terracotta Warriors and Horses

【审题要领】
历史文化;第一人称和第三人称;一般现在时
【素材积累】
1.come down from 2.a big hit 3.come to life
【小试牛刀】
The Terracotta Warriors and Horses
As a precious cultural heritage of China, the Terracotta Warriors and Horses are one of the world's greatest wonders. Located in Xi'an, Shaanxi Province, they are so famous that millions of visitors come to admire them every year.
Built over 2,000 years ago for Emperor Qinshihuang, it has thousands of life-sized warriors with unique faces and postures. This amazing scene helps bring ancient history alive so that we can deeply feel the wisdom of ancient craftsmen.
We should take action to protect such cultural heritage so that it can be passed on to future generations.It makes us take pride in our history and reminds us to cherish the treasures left by our ancestors.(共114词)

【分析】首先明确写作任务：以“The Terracotta Warriors and Horses”为题写短文，需包含三个核心要点：①兵马俑的地位与地理位置；②其历史背景或特点；③对保护这类文化遗产的看法。解题思路：第一步审题确定时态（以一般现在时为主）、人称（介绍用第三人称，谈看法用第一人称）；第二步搭建写作结构：开头点明兵马俑的地位和位置，中间阐述其历史背景与独特特点，结尾表达保护文化遗产的观点；第三步运用积累的短语和句式，确保内容完整、字数达标（不少于90词），无真实个人信息。
【解析】1. 开头段：直接点明兵马俑是中国珍贵文化遗产、世界奇迹之一，位于陕西西安，每年吸引大量游客，覆盖要点①；2. 中间段：介绍其历史背景（为秦始皇建造，距今2000多年），特点（数千个真人大小、面容姿态各异的俑），说明其展现古代工匠智慧，覆盖要点②；3. 结尾段：提出保护文化遗产的做法，表达对历史的自豪，呼吁珍惜祖先留下的宝藏，覆盖要点③。
【答案】The Terracotta Warriors and Horses
As a precious cultural heritage of China, the Terracotta Warriors and Horses are one of the world's greatest wonders. Located in Xi'an, Shaanxi Province, they are so famous that millions of visitors come to admire them every year.
Built over 2,000 years ago for Emperor Qinshihuang, it has thousands of life-sized warriors with unique faces and postures. This amazing scene helps bring ancient history alive so that we can deeply feel the wisdom of ancient craftsmen.
We should take action to protect such cultural heritage so that it can be passed on to future generations. It makes us take pride in our history and reminds us to cherish the treasures left by our ancestors.
【知识点】英语说明文写作、传统文化英语表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】本文紧扣题目所有要求，结构清晰，语言流畅，既完整介绍了兵马俑的核心信息，又传递了保护文化遗产的积极态度，符合英语写作的规范。
【难度系数】0.6