2026年仁爱英语同步练习册八年级英语上册仁爱版第76页答案
三、书面表达。
假如你是汤姆(Tom),你的好友莉莉(Lily)给你写信向你征询意见。她下个月即将参加钢琴比赛,但是现在她在一家咖啡馆的兼职工作却让她没时间去练琴,她很困惑,请你给她写封回信并给她一些建议。
提示:
1. Make a plan for part-time job and piano practice.
2. Ask someone for help.
3. Be positive and confident.
参考词汇:piano-playing competition(钢琴比赛);part-time job(兼职);have trouble with...(在……有困难)
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含针对莉莉所面临问题的建议,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现本人的真实姓名或校名;
3. 词数70个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Lily,
Glad to receive your letter. I know you’re having trouble with your piano-playing competition.










Yours,
Tom

答案

Dear Lily,
Glad to receive your letter. I know you're having trouble with your piano-playing competition. Don't worry! Here are some ideas for you.
First, make a plan and follow it. Spend more time practicing the piano and less time on your part-time job. Second, talk to your piano teacher. Teachers are always ready to help students. They can give you good advice. Third, be positive. Believe in yourself. You have good skills. If you play with confidence, you'll do well.
I hope I can hear some good news from you very soon.
Yours,
Tom

解析

【分析】本题为英语建议类书信写作题,要求以汤姆的身份给好友莉莉回信,针对她因咖啡馆兼职占用时间无法准备钢琴比赛的困惑提出合理建议。解题思路:先承接给定开头安抚莉莉,再围绕题目提示的三个要点(制定计划、求助他人、保持自信)展开具体建议,结合实际调整兼职与练琴时间,最后表达鼓励与期待,确保词数符合要求、语言通顺。
【解析】写作时,首先用“Don't worry!”承接开头安抚莉莉,引出建议;接着分三点:1. 制定计划,合理分配时间,减少兼职时间、增加练琴时间;2. 向钢琴老师求助,获取专业建议;3. 保持积极自信,相信自身能力;最后表达期待好消息,完成书信,注意词数约70词,符合要求。
【答案】Dear Lily,
Glad to receive your letter. I know you're having trouble with your piano-playing competition. Don't worry! Here are some ideas for you.
First, make a plan and follow it. Spend more time practicing the piano and less time on your part-time job. Second, talk to your piano teacher. Teachers are always ready to help students. They can give you good advice. Third, be positive. Believe in yourself. You have good skills. If you play with confidence, you'll do well.
I hope I can hear some good news from you very soon.
Yours,
Tom
【知识点】英语书信写作、建议类书面表达、时间规划表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力,要求结合具体生活问题给出合理建议,既考查语言运用的准确性,又考查逻辑思维能力,贴近学生实际,是初中英语常见写作题型。
【难度系数】0.5