语句通顺,书写规范,不少于50词。

Our school event for the old people
Last year, we went to an old people's home at the Double Ninth Festival.
Our school event for the old people
Last year, we went to an old people's home at the Double Ninth Festival.
答案
Our school event for the old people
Last year, we went to an old people's home at the Double Ninth Festival. We cleaned the rooms together. Mike and John pasted the paper cuttings on the windows. Chen Jie and I read newspapers for the old people.
This year, we will invite our grandparents to our school. Mike and John will do some kung fu. At last we will see old photos together. It will be a warm day!
Last year, we went to an old people's home at the Double Ninth Festival. We cleaned the rooms together. Mike and John pasted the paper cuttings on the windows. Chen Jie and I read newspapers for the old people.
This year, we will invite our grandparents to our school. Mike and John will do some kung fu. At last we will see old photos together. It will be a warm day!
解析
【分析】
这是一道根据思维导图提示完成英语写作的题目。解题思路:1. 明确文章主题是“学校为老人举办的活动”,分为去年和今年两部分;2. 去年的活动用一般过去时,对应思维导图中Last year的三个短语:cleaned the rooms、pasted the paper cuttings、read newspapers,将其组织成通顺句子;3. 今年的活动用一般将来时,对应This year的三个短语:invite grandparents to school、do kung fu、see old photos,补充完整句子;4. 最后添加一句总结性语句,让文章连贯,满足字数要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头“Last year, we went to an old people's home at the Double Ninth Festival.”,接着用一般过去时描述去年的活动:We cleaned the rooms together. Mike and John pasted the paper cuttings on the windows. Chen Jie and I read newspapers for the old people. 然后转换到今年,用一般将来时描述活动:This year, we will invite our grandparents to our school. Mike and John will do some kung fu. At last we will see old photos together. 最后补充一句总结“It will be a warm day!”,使文章完整通顺。
【答案】
Our school event for the old people
Last year, we went to an old people's home at the Double Ninth Festival. We cleaned the rooms together. Mike and John pasted the paper cuttings on the windows. Chen Jie and I read newspapers for the old people.
This year, we will invite our grandparents to our school. Mike and John will do some kung fu. At last we will see old photos together. It will be a warm day!
【知识点】
英语写作、一般过去时、一般将来时
【点评】
本题结合思维导图提示写作,贴近生活场景,考查学生运用时态组织语言的能力,只要将给定短语合理串联,注意时态变化即可完成,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一道根据思维导图提示完成英语写作的题目。解题思路:1. 明确文章主题是“学校为老人举办的活动”,分为去年和今年两部分;2. 去年的活动用一般过去时,对应思维导图中Last year的三个短语:cleaned the rooms、pasted the paper cuttings、read newspapers,将其组织成通顺句子;3. 今年的活动用一般将来时,对应This year的三个短语:invite grandparents to school、do kung fu、see old photos,补充完整句子;4. 最后添加一句总结性语句,让文章连贯,满足字数要求。
【解析】
首先承接开头“Last year, we went to an old people's home at the Double Ninth Festival.”,接着用一般过去时描述去年的活动:We cleaned the rooms together. Mike and John pasted the paper cuttings on the windows. Chen Jie and I read newspapers for the old people. 然后转换到今年,用一般将来时描述活动:This year, we will invite our grandparents to our school. Mike and John will do some kung fu. At last we will see old photos together. 最后补充一句总结“It will be a warm day!”,使文章完整通顺。
【答案】
Our school event for the old people
Last year, we went to an old people's home at the Double Ninth Festival. We cleaned the rooms together. Mike and John pasted the paper cuttings on the windows. Chen Jie and I read newspapers for the old people.
This year, we will invite our grandparents to our school. Mike and John will do some kung fu. At last we will see old photos together. It will be a warm day!
【知识点】
英语写作、一般过去时、一般将来时
【点评】
本题结合思维导图提示写作,贴近生活场景,考查学生运用时态组织语言的能力,只要将给定短语合理串联,注意时态变化即可完成,难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
登录