(2025·江苏泰州·调研)假如你是李梅,目前是英国一所中学的一名八年级学生。请你写一封电子邮件给你的中国好友王丽,向她介绍一下你的新朋友Helen以及你目前丰富多彩的学校生活。

【要求】1.文章必须包含所提供的所有信息,并作适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3.90词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Wang Li,
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Mei
【要求】1.文章必须包含所提供的所有信息,并作适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
3.90词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Wang Li,
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Mei
答案
I have a new friend here called Helen. She is a pretty girl with a round face and two big smiling eyes. She has a good sense of humour, and she always tells funny jokes to make me laugh when I feel upset. She is also very helpful. When I first arrived here, I was not good at English, so she often helps me practise my spoken English after class.
My school life is really colourful. We have many different kinds of clubs to join after school, and we also have fun trips every month. I love my life here so much.
My school life is really colourful. We have many different kinds of clubs to join after school, and we also have fun trips every month. I love my life here so much.
解析
【分析】本题要求以李梅的身份写电子邮件介绍新朋友Helen和学校生活,需先梳理给定信息:Helen的外貌(pretty, round face)、幽默感(举例)、乐于助人(举例),学校生活(colourful)。写作时要先引出Helen,依次描写她的外貌、性格特点并补充具体事例,再介绍学校生活的丰富多彩及事例,最后表达感受,确保覆盖所有信息,适当发挥,符合词数要求。
【解析】1. 开头点明有新朋友Helen;2. 描写Helen外貌:pretty,round face,补充细节让内容更生动;3. 写她的幽默感,举例说明(讲笑话让自己开心);4. 写她乐于助人,举例(帮自己练英语);5. 介绍学校生活是colourful,举例(俱乐部、每月旅行);6. 表达对学校生活的喜爱,完成写作。
【答案】I have a new friend here called Helen. She is a pretty girl with a round face and two big smiling eyes. She has a good sense of humour, and she always tells funny jokes to make me laugh when I feel upset. She is also very helpful. When I first arrived here, I was not good at English, so she often helps me practise my spoken English after class.
My school life is really colourful. We have many different kinds of clubs to join after school, and we also have fun trips every month. I love my life here so much.
【知识点】英语书信写作;人物描写;校园生活表达
【点评】本文完整覆盖题目要求的所有信息,对Helen的性格特点和学校生活都补充了具体事例,语言流畅自然,符合八年级学生的英语水平,完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 开头点明有新朋友Helen;2. 描写Helen外貌:pretty,round face,补充细节让内容更生动;3. 写她的幽默感,举例说明(讲笑话让自己开心);4. 写她乐于助人,举例(帮自己练英语);5. 介绍学校生活是colourful,举例(俱乐部、每月旅行);6. 表达对学校生活的喜爱,完成写作。
【答案】I have a new friend here called Helen. She is a pretty girl with a round face and two big smiling eyes. She has a good sense of humour, and she always tells funny jokes to make me laugh when I feel upset. She is also very helpful. When I first arrived here, I was not good at English, so she often helps me practise my spoken English after class.
My school life is really colourful. We have many different kinds of clubs to join after school, and we also have fun trips every month. I love my life here so much.
【知识点】英语书信写作;人物描写;校园生活表达
【点评】本文完整覆盖题目要求的所有信息,对Helen的性格特点和学校生活都补充了具体事例,语言流畅自然,符合八年级学生的英语水平,完成了写作任务。
【难度系数】0.5
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