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Ⅳ. 书面表达。
人因梦想而伟大，也因梦想而成长。近期，你校将举办以“我的梦想”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你的梦想是成为一名宇航员，请你根据以下提示，以“My Space Dream”为题写一篇英语演讲稿参加比赛。
| Time | What to do |
| --- | --- |
| When I was a little child | made model planes, visited science museums to
more about space |
| From now on | read more books about space, do exercise, study hard, ... |
要求：
1. 短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：be curious about 对……感到好奇
My Space Dream
Hello, everyone! It's an honour to talk with you about my dream. My dream is to be an astronaut.
人因梦想而伟大，也因梦想而成长。近期，你校将举办以“我的梦想”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如你的梦想是成为一名宇航员，请你根据以下提示，以“My Space Dream”为题写一篇英语演讲稿参加比赛。
| Time | What to do |
| --- | --- |
| When I was a little child | made model planes, visited science museums to
more about space || From now on | read more books about space, do exercise, study hard, ... |
要求：
1. 短文须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：be curious about 对……感到好奇
My Space Dream
Hello, everyone! It's an honour to talk with you about my dream. My dream is to be an astronaut.
答案
One possible version:
My Space Dream
Hello, everyone! It's an honour to talk with you about my dream. My dream is to be an astronaut.
When I was a little child, I was always curious about the stars in the sky. I often made model planes and visited science museums. Those experiences made me learn more about space and love it even more. From now on, I will read more books about space and astronomy. I will also do exercise regularly to keep healthy, because astronauts need strong bodies. Moreover, I will study hard, especially in science and maths, to get ready for my future dream.
I believe I can make my dream come true one day.
Thank you for listening!
My Space Dream
Hello, everyone! It's an honour to talk with you about my dream. My dream is to be an astronaut.
When I was a little child, I was always curious about the stars in the sky. I often made model planes and visited science museums. Those experiences made me learn more about space and love it even more. From now on, I will read more books about space and astronomy. I will also do exercise regularly to keep healthy, because astronauts need strong bodies. Moreover, I will study hard, especially in science and maths, to get ready for my future dream.
I believe I can make my dream come true one day.
Thank you for listening!
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My Space Dream”为题写一篇英语演讲稿，需覆盖两个时间节点的提示内容：童年时制作模型飞机、参观科技馆了解太空；未来要读太空相关书籍、锻炼、努力学习。解题思路：1. 承接已给开头，用一般过去时描述童年与太空相关的经历，结合参考词汇丰富内容；2. 用一般将来时阐述未来为实现宇航员梦想的具体准备，补充合理细节让内容连贯；3. 结尾表达对梦想的信心，加上演讲的礼貌用语，确保行文流畅、符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头后，用一般过去时描述童年经历：When I was a little child, I was always curious about the stars in the sky. I often made model planes and visited science museums. Those experiences made me learn more about space and love it even more.
2. 用一般将来时描述未来计划：From now on, I will read more books about space and astronomy. I will also do exercise regularly to keep healthy, because astronauts need strong bodies. Moreover, I will study hard, especially in science and maths, to get ready for my future dream.
3. 结尾表达信念并礼貌致谢：I believe I can make my dream come true one day. Thank you for listening!
【答案】
One possible version:
My Space Dream
Hello, everyone! It's an honour to talk with you about my dream. My dream is to be an astronaut.
When I was a little child, I was always curious about the stars in the sky. I often made model planes and visited science museums. Those experiences made me learn more about space and love it even more. From now on, I will read more books about space and astronomy. I will also do exercise regularly to keep healthy, because astronauts need strong bodies. Moreover, I will study hard, especially in science and maths, to get ready for my future dream.
I believe I can make my dream come true one day.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去时、一般将来时
【点评】
本题是结合个人理想的英语写作题，要求根据提示完成演讲稿，既考查学生对不同时态的运用能力，又考查语言组织与连贯表达的能力，贴近学生生活，是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“My Space Dream”为题写一篇英语演讲稿，需覆盖两个时间节点的提示内容：童年时制作模型飞机、参观科技馆了解太空；未来要读太空相关书籍、锻炼、努力学习。解题思路：1. 承接已给开头，用一般过去时描述童年与太空相关的经历，结合参考词汇丰富内容；2. 用一般将来时阐述未来为实现宇航员梦想的具体准备，补充合理细节让内容连贯；3. 结尾表达对梦想的信心，加上演讲的礼貌用语，确保行文流畅、符合字数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头后，用一般过去时描述童年经历：When I was a little child, I was always curious about the stars in the sky. I often made model planes and visited science museums. Those experiences made me learn more about space and love it even more.
2. 用一般将来时描述未来计划：From now on, I will read more books about space and astronomy. I will also do exercise regularly to keep healthy, because astronauts need strong bodies. Moreover, I will study hard, especially in science and maths, to get ready for my future dream.
3. 结尾表达信念并礼貌致谢：I believe I can make my dream come true one day. Thank you for listening!
【答案】
One possible version:
My Space Dream
Hello, everyone! It's an honour to talk with you about my dream. My dream is to be an astronaut.
When I was a little child, I was always curious about the stars in the sky. I often made model planes and visited science museums. Those experiences made me learn more about space and love it even more. From now on, I will read more books about space and astronomy. I will also do exercise regularly to keep healthy, because astronauts need strong bodies. Moreover, I will study hard, especially in science and maths, to get ready for my future dream.
I believe I can make my dream come true one day.
Thank you for listening!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般过去时、一般将来时
【点评】
本题是结合个人理想的英语写作题，要求根据提示完成演讲稿，既考查学生对不同时态的运用能力，又考查语言组织与连贯表达的能力，贴近学生生活，是初中英语常见的写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5
