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(2025·江苏淮安期中改编)假设你是英语校报的编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据思维导图写一封回信,说明Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。词数90左右(信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter, you said that
Good luck with everything!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter, you said that
Good luck with everything!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
you had few friends and often felt lonely, and you also had trouble learning English because it was difficult for you to remember new words.
To solve these problems, I think you can join some school clubs first, where you can meet more peers and make new friends. You can also talk to people around you actively to get closer to them and feel less lonely. For English, reading more English stories and news helps you remember words better in the context. What's more, try to memorize words in small daily time and review them in time, which will help you fight forgetting and improve your English step by step.
To solve these problems, I think you can join some school clubs first, where you can meet more peers and make new friends. You can also talk to people around you actively to get closer to them and feel less lonely. For English, reading more English stories and news helps you remember words better in the context. What's more, try to memorize words in small daily time and review them in time, which will help you fight forgetting and improve your English step by step.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，需根据思维导图提取关键信息完成回信。首先明确Ben的两个问题：朋友少、感到孤独；英语单词难记、学习英语有困难。接着对应提取解决两类问题的建议及理由，最后结合书信格式，将信息组织成符合词数要求的通顺内容，注意衔接自然。
【解析】
首先点明Ben的问题：you had few friends and often felt lonely, and you also had trouble learning English because it was difficult for you to remember new words. 针对孤独问题给出建议：join some school clubs first, where you can meet more peers and make new friends；also talk to people around you actively to get closer to them and feel less lonely. 针对英语学习问题给出建议：reading more English stories and news helps you remember words better in the context；try to memorize words in small daily time and review them in time, which will help you fight forgetting and improve your English step by step. 最后补充书信结尾，确保语句连贯、符合词数要求。
【答案】
you had few friends and often felt lonely, and you also had trouble learning English because it was difficult for you to remember new words.
To solve these problems, I think you can join some school clubs first, where you can meet more peers and make new friends. You can also talk to people around you actively to get closer to them and feel less lonely. For English, reading more English stories and news helps you remember words better in the context. What's more, try to memorize words in small daily time and review them in time, which will help you fight forgetting and improve your English step by step.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类英语表达、信息整合写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查学生的应用文写作能力，要求学生准确提取信息并合理组织语言，贴近学生实际生活，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作题，需根据思维导图提取关键信息完成回信。首先明确Ben的两个问题：朋友少、感到孤独；英语单词难记、学习英语有困难。接着对应提取解决两类问题的建议及理由，最后结合书信格式，将信息组织成符合词数要求的通顺内容，注意衔接自然。
【解析】
首先点明Ben的问题：you had few friends and often felt lonely, and you also had trouble learning English because it was difficult for you to remember new words. 针对孤独问题给出建议：join some school clubs first, where you can meet more peers and make new friends；also talk to people around you actively to get closer to them and feel less lonely. 针对英语学习问题给出建议：reading more English stories and news helps you remember words better in the context；try to memorize words in small daily time and review them in time, which will help you fight forgetting and improve your English step by step. 最后补充书信结尾，确保语句连贯、符合词数要求。
【答案】
you had few friends and often felt lonely, and you also had trouble learning English because it was difficult for you to remember new words.
To solve these problems, I think you can join some school clubs first, where you can meet more peers and make new friends. You can also talk to people around you actively to get closer to them and feel less lonely. For English, reading more English stories and news helps you remember words better in the context. What's more, try to memorize words in small daily time and review them in time, which will help you fight forgetting and improve your English step by step.
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类英语表达、信息整合写作
【点评】
本题结合思维导图考查学生的应用文写作能力，要求学生准确提取信息并合理组织语言，贴近学生实际生活，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
