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俗话说，“健康饮食就是健康人生。”不良的饮食习惯不利于青少年的成长。假设你是李华，你校的英文报社正在举行主题为“饮食与健康”的征文活动，现面向全校学生征稿。请你根据内容提示，写一篇英语短文向报社投稿。
【内容提示】
1. 简要介绍你所了解的不良饮食习惯及其产生的影响。
2. 谈谈健康饮食的好处。
3. 对如何保持健康，提出至少两点你的建议。
【写作要求】
1. 不要在作文中出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
2. 语句连贯。词数70左右。作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Today, many students have some bad eating habits.
俗话说，“健康饮食就是健康人生。”不良的饮食习惯不利于青少年的成长。假设你是李华，你校的英文报社正在举行主题为“饮食与健康”的征文活动，现面向全校学生征稿。请你根据内容提示，写一篇英语短文向报社投稿。
【内容提示】
1. 简要介绍你所了解的不良饮食习惯及其产生的影响。
2. 谈谈健康饮食的好处。
3. 对如何保持健康，提出至少两点你的建议。
【写作要求】
1. 不要在作文中出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
2. 语句连贯。词数70左右。作文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Today, many students have some bad eating habits.
答案
Today, many students have some bad eating habits. Many of them love eating junk food a lot, and some often go to school without breakfast. These bad habits make them easy to get fat or fall ill, and are bad for their growth.
A healthy diet gives us enough energy and helps us stay energetic to study well. To keep healthy, first we should eat more fresh vegetables and fruit, and eat less sweet food. Second, we can do exercise for a while every day to keep fit.
A healthy diet gives us enough energy and helps us stay energetic to study well. To keep healthy, first we should eat more fresh vegetables and fruit, and eat less sweet food. Second, we can do exercise for a while every day to keep fit.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以学生身份向学校英文报社投稿，主题为“饮食与健康”。解题思路需紧扣三个核心内容提示：① 列举常见不良饮食习惯（如吃垃圾食品、不吃早饭）并说明其对成长的影响；② 阐述健康饮食的好处；③ 提出至少两点保持健康的建议。同时需注意：承接给定开头，词数控制在70左右，不得出现真实姓名和学校，语句连贯。需按“不良习惯及影响→健康饮食好处→具体建议”的逻辑组织内容，确保覆盖所有要求。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，先列举学生中常见的不良饮食习惯（如大量食用垃圾食品、不吃早餐），再说明这些习惯的危害（易发胖、生病，不利于成长）；
2. 接着阐述健康饮食的益处（提供充足能量，保持精力以良好学习）；
3. 最后提出两点具体建议：一是多吃新鲜果蔬、少吃甜食，二是每天坚持锻炼。全程注意语句连贯，词数符合要求，无真实信息。
【答案】
Today, many students have some bad eating habits. Many of them love eating junk food a lot, and some often go to school without breakfast. These bad habits make them easy to get fat or fall ill, and are bad for their growth.
A healthy diet gives us enough energy and helps us stay energetic to study well. To keep healthy, first we should eat more fresh vegetables and fruit, and eat less sweet food. Second, we can do exercise for a while every day to keep fit.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、健康话题英语表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有内容提示，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以学生身份向学校英文报社投稿，主题为“饮食与健康”。解题思路需紧扣三个核心内容提示：① 列举常见不良饮食习惯（如吃垃圾食品、不吃早饭）并说明其对成长的影响；② 阐述健康饮食的好处；③ 提出至少两点保持健康的建议。同时需注意：承接给定开头，词数控制在70左右，不得出现真实姓名和学校，语句连贯。需按“不良习惯及影响→健康饮食好处→具体建议”的逻辑组织内容，确保覆盖所有要求。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，先列举学生中常见的不良饮食习惯（如大量食用垃圾食品、不吃早餐），再说明这些习惯的危害（易发胖、生病，不利于成长）；
2. 接着阐述健康饮食的益处（提供充足能量，保持精力以良好学习）；
3. 最后提出两点具体建议：一是多吃新鲜果蔬、少吃甜食，二是每天坚持锻炼。全程注意语句连贯，词数符合要求，无真实信息。
【答案】
Today, many students have some bad eating habits. Many of them love eating junk food a lot, and some often go to school without breakfast. These bad habits make them easy to get fat or fall ill, and are bad for their growth.
A healthy diet gives us enough energy and helps us stay energetic to study well. To keep healthy, first we should eat more fresh vegetables and fruit, and eat less sweet food. Second, we can do exercise for a while every day to keep fit.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、健康话题英语表达
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖所有内容提示，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合要求的优秀英语短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
写作指导
1.本文是一篇说明文。 2.时态为“一般现在时”。
3.写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
写作模板
开篇点题 → Bad eating habits are still very common among us students...
↓
详细介绍 → To keep fit, we should eat healthy food...
↓
收篇结尾 → In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits...
1.本文是一篇说明文。 2.时态为“一般现在时”。
3.写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
写作模板
开篇点题 → Bad eating habits are still very common among us students...
↓
详细介绍 → To keep fit, we should eat healthy food...
↓
收篇结尾 → In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits...
答案
Bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Many of us love eating all kinds of snacks instead of proper meals. Some students never have breakfast before going to school, and some are very picky about food, they only eat their favourite meat but never eat vegetables. These bad habits are really bad for our body.
To keep fit, we should eat healthy food. We need to eat different kinds of food every day. Fresh vegetables and fruit give us enough vitamins, so we can eat them for both lunch and dinner. We also need to eat a little meat or fish to get protein. Having milk and bread for breakfast is a good choice, it can give us enough energy for the whole morning's study. We should not eat too much sweet food or fried junk food.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits. Good eating habits help us stay away from illness, make us strong and energetic, and we can also get better grades in our study with a healthy body.
To keep fit, we should eat healthy food. We need to eat different kinds of food every day. Fresh vegetables and fruit give us enough vitamins, so we can eat them for both lunch and dinner. We also need to eat a little meat or fish to get protein. Having milk and bread for breakfast is a good choice, it can give us enough energy for the whole morning's study. We should not eat too much sweet food or fried junk food.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits. Good eating habits help us stay away from illness, make us strong and energetic, and we can also get better grades in our study with a healthy body.
解析
【分析】
本题是一篇关于学生健康饮食的说明文，要求按照给定的三段结构（开篇点题、详细介绍、收篇结尾）写作，时态统一为一般现在时。解题思路：第一步，开篇点题需点明学生中不良饮食习惯普遍，列举具体的不良习惯（如吃零食代替正餐、不吃早餐、挑食）；第二步，详细介绍围绕“保持健康要吃健康食物”展开，说明不同健康食物的作用及健康饮食的具体做法；第三步，收篇结尾表达观点，说明养成健康饮食习惯的好处，确保不遗漏要点，适当添加细节丰富内容。
【解析】
按照给定结构和要求写作：1. 开篇点题：先点明学生中不良饮食习惯普遍，列举具体不良习惯；2. 详细介绍：围绕健康饮食展开，说明需吃不同种类的食物，具体阐述蔬菜水果、肉鱼、早餐的作用，同时指出要避免的不健康食物；3. 收篇结尾：表达养成健康饮食习惯的观点，说明其带来的好处，全程使用一般现在时，符合要求。
【答案】
Bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Many of us love eating all kinds of snacks instead of proper meals. Some students never have breakfast before going to school, and some are very picky about food, they only eat their favourite meat but never eat vegetables. These bad habits are really bad for our body.
To keep fit, we should eat healthy food. We need to eat different kinds of food every day. Fresh vegetables and fruit give us enough vitamins, so we can eat them for both lunch and dinner. We also need to eat a little meat or fish to get protein. Having milk and bread for breakfast is a good choice, it can give us enough energy for the whole morning's study. We should not eat too much sweet food or fried junk food.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits. Good eating habits help us stay away from illness, make us strong and energetic, and we can also get better grades in our study with a healthy body.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作；一般现在时运用；健康话题英语表达
【点评】
本文严格遵循给定的写作结构，要点明确，内容充实，通过列举具体事例和健康食物的作用，清晰阐述了不良饮食习惯的危害及健康饮食的方法，结尾点明养成健康习惯的好处，符合说明文的写作要求，语言表达准确。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题是一篇关于学生健康饮食的说明文，要求按照给定的三段结构（开篇点题、详细介绍、收篇结尾）写作，时态统一为一般现在时。解题思路：第一步，开篇点题需点明学生中不良饮食习惯普遍，列举具体的不良习惯（如吃零食代替正餐、不吃早餐、挑食）；第二步，详细介绍围绕“保持健康要吃健康食物”展开，说明不同健康食物的作用及健康饮食的具体做法；第三步，收篇结尾表达观点，说明养成健康饮食习惯的好处，确保不遗漏要点，适当添加细节丰富内容。
【解析】
按照给定结构和要求写作：1. 开篇点题：先点明学生中不良饮食习惯普遍，列举具体不良习惯；2. 详细介绍：围绕健康饮食展开，说明需吃不同种类的食物，具体阐述蔬菜水果、肉鱼、早餐的作用，同时指出要避免的不健康食物；3. 收篇结尾：表达养成健康饮食习惯的观点，说明其带来的好处，全程使用一般现在时，符合要求。
【答案】
Bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Many of us love eating all kinds of snacks instead of proper meals. Some students never have breakfast before going to school, and some are very picky about food, they only eat their favourite meat but never eat vegetables. These bad habits are really bad for our body.
To keep fit, we should eat healthy food. We need to eat different kinds of food every day. Fresh vegetables and fruit give us enough vitamins, so we can eat them for both lunch and dinner. We also need to eat a little meat or fish to get protein. Having milk and bread for breakfast is a good choice, it can give us enough energy for the whole morning's study. We should not eat too much sweet food or fried junk food.
In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits. Good eating habits help us stay away from illness, make us strong and energetic, and we can also get better grades in our study with a healthy body.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作；一般现在时运用；健康话题英语表达
【点评】
本文严格遵循给定的写作结构，要点明确，内容充实，通过列举具体事例和健康食物的作用，清晰阐述了不良饮食习惯的危害及健康饮食的方法，结尾点明养成健康习惯的好处，符合说明文的写作要求，语言表达准确。
【难度系数】
0.6
