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请你根据以下要点，以“My Role Model”为主题，写一篇不少于90词的英语短文。
【要点】(1) Who is a role model to you? (2) How has he / she influenced you? (3) What does he/she encourage you to do?
【审题要领】
| 主题 | 人称 | 时态 |
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
|
|
【写作框架】
列提纲
1. 开篇点题，介绍自己的榜样及其特点 → In my life, there is one person who has...
2. 详述榜样的具体表现及对自己的影响 → (1) She spends countless hours... (2) Her
ility to balance... (3) Her positive attitude and strong willpower...
3. 总结全文，表达向榜样学习的决心 → I hope to become...
【素材积累】
重点短语
1. 成就感
2. 承担责任
3. 号召某人做某事
重点句子
开头句：When it comes to my youth, I often imagine what I want to be in the future. 说到我的青春，我经常想象我将来想成为什么。
中间句：I choose this job because it will let me help others and gain precious experience. 我选择这份工作是因为它可以让我帮助别人并获得宝贵的经验。
结尾句：I believe as long as we take action, we will make the country more energetic and stronger. 我相信只要我们采取行动，我们将使国家更有活力和强大。
【美文欣赏】
In my life, there is one person who has always been my role model — my mother. She is not only a loving parent but also a hard-working and determined individual. Her dedication to her family and her career has always inspired me.
My mother works as a teacher, and she is passionate about her job. She spends countless hours preparing lessons and helping her students. Despite her busy schedule, she always finds time to take care of our family. Her ability to balance work and family life is something I truly admire.
Moreover, my mother is a very kind and patient person. She always listens to others and offers help whenever needed. Her positive attitude and strong willpower have taught me to face challenges with courage and optimism.
In conclusion, my mother is my role model because of her hard work, kindness, and determination. I hope to become as successful and caring as her in the future.
请你根据以下要点，以“My Role Model”为主题，写一篇不少于90词的英语短文。
【要点】(1) Who is a role model to you? (2) How has he / she influenced you? (3) What does he/she encourage you to do?
【审题要领】
| 主题 | 人称 | 时态 |
| ---- | ---- | ---- |
|
榜样介绍
| | 一般现在时
|【写作框架】
列提纲
1. 开篇点题，介绍自己的榜样及其特点 → In my life, there is one person who has...
2. 详述榜样的具体表现及对自己的影响 → (1) She spends countless hours... (2) Her
ility to balance... (3) Her positive attitude and strong willpower...3. 总结全文，表达向榜样学习的决心 → I hope to become...
【素材积累】
重点短语
1. 成就感
a sense of achievement
2. 承担责任
shoulder the responsibility
3. 号召某人做某事
call on sb to do sth
重点句子
开头句：When it comes to my youth, I often imagine what I want to be in the future. 说到我的青春，我经常想象我将来想成为什么。
中间句：I choose this job because it will let me help others and gain precious experience. 我选择这份工作是因为它可以让我帮助别人并获得宝贵的经验。
结尾句：I believe as long as we take action, we will make the country more energetic and stronger. 我相信只要我们采取行动，我们将使国家更有活力和强大。
【美文欣赏】
In my life, there is one person who has always been my role model — my mother. She is not only a loving parent but also a hard-working and determined individual. Her dedication to her family and her career has always inspired me.
My mother works as a teacher, and she is passionate about her job. She spends countless hours preparing lessons and helping her students. Despite her busy schedule, she always finds time to take care of our family. Her ability to balance work and family life is something I truly admire.
Moreover, my mother is a very kind and patient person. She always listens to others and offers help whenever needed. Her positive attitude and strong willpower have taught me to face challenges with courage and optimism.
In conclusion, my mother is my role model because of her hard work, kindness, and determination. I hope to become as successful and caring as her in the future.
答案
【审题要领】
榜样介绍;第三人称;一般现在时
【素材积累】
1.a sense of achievement 2.shoulder the responsibility
3.call on sb to do sth
榜样介绍;第三人称;一般现在时
【素材积累】
1.a sense of achievement 2.shoulder the responsibility
3.call on sb to do sth
解析
【分析】本题为英语写作题，主题是“My Role Model”，需围绕三个核心要点（介绍榜样、说明榜样的影响、阐述榜样鼓励自己做的事）完成不少于90词的短文。解题思路：首先审题确定写作的主题、人称和时态；其次按照给定的写作框架搭建文章结构；最后运用积累的短语和句子丰富内容，确保覆盖所有要点，语言通顺流畅。
【解析】1. 审题：主题为“My Role Model”，人称使用第三人称介绍榜样，时态以一般现在时为主（描述榜样的常态及影响）。2. 结构搭建：①开篇点题，引出自己的榜样（如母亲）；②中间详述榜样的具体表现（如花时间备课、平衡工作与家庭）及对自己的影响（教会自己积极面对挑战）；③结尾总结，表达向榜样学习的决心。3. 语言运用：结合给定的重点短语（a sense of achievement、shoulder the responsibility等）和句子，使文章内容充实，符合词数要求。
【答案】In my life, there is one person who has always been my role model — my mother. She is not only a loving parent but also a hard-working and determined individual. Her dedication to her family and career inspires me. My mother is a teacher, spending countless hours preparing lessons and helping students. Despite her busy schedule, she balances work and family well, which I admire. Her positive attitude and strong willpower teach me to face challenges with courage. She encourages me to shoulder the responsibility for my own choices and pursue my dreams. I hope to become as caring and determined as her in the future.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语常用短语、英语时态运用
【点评】本题考查学生的英语写作综合能力，要求学生准确审题、搭建篇章结构并运用积累的语言素材完成短文，是英语学习中常见的基础写作题型，注重对学生语言运用能力的考查。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 审题：主题为“My Role Model”，人称使用第三人称介绍榜样，时态以一般现在时为主（描述榜样的常态及影响）。2. 结构搭建：①开篇点题，引出自己的榜样（如母亲）；②中间详述榜样的具体表现（如花时间备课、平衡工作与家庭）及对自己的影响（教会自己积极面对挑战）；③结尾总结，表达向榜样学习的决心。3. 语言运用：结合给定的重点短语（a sense of achievement、shoulder the responsibility等）和句子，使文章内容充实，符合词数要求。
【答案】In my life, there is one person who has always been my role model — my mother. She is not only a loving parent but also a hard-working and determined individual. Her dedication to her family and career inspires me. My mother is a teacher, spending countless hours preparing lessons and helping students. Despite her busy schedule, she balances work and family well, which I admire. Her positive attitude and strong willpower teach me to face challenges with courage. She encourages me to shoulder the responsibility for my own choices and pursue my dreams. I hope to become as caring and determined as her in the future.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语常用短语、英语时态运用
【点评】本题考查学生的英语写作综合能力，要求学生准确审题、搭建篇章结构并运用积累的语言素材完成短文，是英语学习中常见的基础写作题型，注重对学生语言运用能力的考查。
【难度系数】0.6
