2026年阳光学业评价九年级英语上册沪教版第50页答案
学校英文报专栏《生活小妙招》正在征稿。请你根据以下问题提示,写一篇文章参与投稿,讲述一次你用创意想法解决生活问题的经历。字数不少于80。
1. What problem did you have in your daily life?
2. How did you solve the problem?
3. What can you learn from this experience?
My dog Max loves chewing shoes. He has already destroyed three pairs of my shoes. Last week, I bought a new pair, and he started to chew them. One day, when I got home, I found them with fresh bite marks under the sofa. I felt so angry and helpless.

That evening, I watched Max playing with his toy ball. I found that he loved the squeaky sound it made. Suddenly a thought hit me: what if I put a small squeaker inside an old shoe? Max might prefer the noisy shoe to my new ones.

I tried it right away. I put a squeaker into an old shoe and left it on the floor. Then I saw Max run to it and bite it immediately. How excited he was when he heard the squeaky sound from the shoe! He kept playing with it. From that day on, he never touched my new shoes again. What a simple but clever trick!

From this experience, I have learnt that great ideas often come from careful observation.

答案

My dog Max loves chewing shoes. He has already destroyed three pairs of my shoes. Last week, I bought a new pair, and he started to chew them. One day, when I got home, I found them with fresh bite marks under the sofa. I felt so angry and helpless.
That evening, I watched Max playing with his toy ball. I found that he loved the squeaky sound it made. Suddenly a thought hit me: what if I put a small squeaker inside an old shoe? Max might prefer the noisy shoe to my new ones.
I tried it right away. I put a squeaker into an old shoe and left it on the floor. Then I saw Max run to it and bite it immediately. How excited he was when he heard the squeaky sound from the shoe! He kept playing with it. From that day on, he never touched my new shoes again. What a simple but clever trick!
From this experience, I have learnt that great ideas often come from careful observation.

解析

【分析】本题为英语记叙文写作题,要求围绕“用创意解决生活问题”的主题,结合三个核心问题(遇到的日常问题、解决方法、感悟)完成投稿。解题思路:首先确定具体的生活问题(如宠物咬鞋),补充细节让内容真实可感;其次思考创意解决办法,结合对问题相关事物的观察(如宠物的喜好);最后提炼从经历中得到的感悟,确保内容紧扣“生活小妙招”的征稿主题,字数达标。
【解析】写作时需遵循“问题呈现-解决过程-感悟总结”的结构:1. 描述具体问题:点明宠物咬坏鞋子的情况,体现自身的困扰;2. 阐述解决过程:通过观察宠物的喜好(如喜欢发声玩具),设计创意方案(将发声器放入旧鞋),说明方案的实施和实际效果;3. 总结感悟:点明创意源于细心观察,呼应征稿主题。注意语言通顺,有细节支撑,符合英语写作的表达规范。
【答案】My dog Max loves chewing shoes. He has already destroyed three pairs of my shoes. Last week, I bought a new pair, and he started to chew them. One day, when I got home, I found them with fresh bite marks under the sofa. I felt so angry and helpless.
That evening, I watched Max playing with his toy ball. I found that he loved the squeaky sound it made. Suddenly a thought hit me: what if I put a small squeaker inside an old shoe? Max might prefer the noisy shoe to my new ones.
I tried it right away. I put a squeaker into an old shoe and left it on the floor. Then I saw Max run to it and bite it immediately. How excited he was when he heard the squeaky sound from the shoe! He kept playing with it. From that day on, he never touched my new shoes again. What a simple but clever trick!
From this experience, I have learnt that great ideas often come from careful observation.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、生活话题表达、创意解决问题的英语表述
【点评】本文紧扣《生活小妙招》的征稿主题,以宠物咬鞋的真实经历为素材,结构清晰,细节生动,从发现问题到创意解决再到感悟,层次分明,语言流畅自然,符合投稿要求。
【难度系数】0.5