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单元写作要求
本单元以“奇幻故事”为话题，谈论不同文化背景下的奇幻传说、中外经典故事、文学作品等。写作任务通常是要求学生根据文字提示或图片提示用英语讲故事。
写作方法策略 如何用英语讲故事
写这类文章时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇要交代背景，介绍故事的主人公以及发生的时间和地点；主体部分要详细介绍故事的起因、经过、结果；结尾要阐明个人启发，总结全文。
思路导引
佳作展示
Wait for Windfalls
Once upon a time, there was a farmer ①who worked hard in his fields every day, hoping to harvest a good crop.
One day, ②while the farmer was working on the farm, a rabbit suddenly appeared. ③The rabbit ran so fast that it bumped into the tree stump and died. The farmer got a rabbit without any effort. From that day on, instead of working hard, the farmer sat by the tree stump every day, waiting for more rabbits to come. Days turned into weeks, but no more rabbits appeared. Finally, all his crops died due to lack of care.
The story tells us that we can't always depend on luck. ④Only if we work harder will we become luckier.
高分词句
①运用 who 引导的定语从句。
②运用 while 引导的时间状语从句。
③运用 so...that...构成结果状语从句，意为“如此……以至于……”。
④运用 only if 引导的条件状语从句；且 only if 位于句首，主句采用部分倒装。
话题写作积累
1. 使愿望成真
2. 经过
3. 着地
4. 逃跑；离开
5. 失败；未做成
6. 一套……的作品集
7. 令所有人惊讶的是，丑小鸭(the ugly duckling)决定离开，去寻找一个新家。
8. 精卫填海的故事告诉我们面对困难应该永不放弃。
9. 这两座山太过庞大，愚公和他的家人无法自己搬动。
10. 有志者事竟成。
单元写作要求
本单元以“奇幻故事”为话题，谈论不同文化背景下的奇幻传说、中外经典故事、文学作品等。写作任务通常是要求学生根据文字提示或图片提示用英语讲故事。
写作方法策略 如何用英语讲故事
写这类文章时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇要交代背景，介绍故事的主人公以及发生的时间和地点；主体部分要详细介绍故事的起因、经过、结果；结尾要阐明个人启发，总结全文。
思路导引
佳作展示
Wait for Windfalls
Once upon a time, there was a farmer ①who worked hard in his fields every day, hoping to harvest a good crop.
One day, ②while the farmer was working on the farm, a rabbit suddenly appeared. ③The rabbit ran so fast that it bumped into the tree stump and died. The farmer got a rabbit without any effort. From that day on, instead of working hard, the farmer sat by the tree stump every day, waiting for more rabbits to come. Days turned into weeks, but no more rabbits appeared. Finally, all his crops died due to lack of care.
The story tells us that we can't always depend on luck. ④Only if we work harder will we become luckier.
高分词句
①运用 who 引导的定语从句。
②运用 while 引导的时间状语从句。
③运用 so...that...构成结果状语从句，意为“如此……以至于……”。
④运用 only if 引导的条件状语从句；且 only if 位于句首，主句采用部分倒装。
话题写作积累
1. 使愿望成真
make wishes come true
2. 经过
pass by
3. 着地
hit the ground
4. 逃跑；离开
get away
5. 失败；未做成
fail to do sth
6. 一套……的作品集
a collection of
7. 令所有人惊讶的是，丑小鸭(the ugly duckling)决定离开，去寻找一个新家。
To everyone's surprise, the ugly duckling decided to leave and find a new home.
8. 精卫填海的故事告诉我们面对困难应该永不放弃。
The story of "Jingwei Filling the Sea" teaches us that we should never give up in the face of difficulties.
9. 这两座山太过庞大，愚公和他的家人无法自己搬动。
The two mountains were too huge for Yu Gong and his family to move by themselves.
10. 有志者事竟成。
Where there is a will, there is a way.
答案
写作提优
话题写作积累
1. make wishes come true
2. pass by
3. hit the ground
4. get away
5. fail to do sth
6. a collection of
7. To everyone's surprise, the ugly duckling decided to leave and find a new home.
8. The story of "Jingwei Filling the Sea" teaches us that we should never give up in the face of difficulties.
9. The two mountains were too huge for Yu Gong and his family to move by themselves.
10. Where there is a will, there is a way.
话题写作积累
1. make wishes come true
2. pass by
3. hit the ground
4. get away
5. fail to do sth
6. a collection of
7. To everyone's surprise, the ugly duckling decided to leave and find a new home.
8. The story of "Jingwei Filling the Sea" teaches us that we should never give up in the face of difficulties.
9. The two mountains were too huge for Yu Gong and his family to move by themselves.
10. Where there is a will, there is a way.
解析
【分析】
这是英语奇幻故事写作配套的语料积累题，解题时首先要结合写作场景回忆对应中文释义的课标要求常用英语固定搭配，确保短语符合故事叙述的使用习惯；翻译句子时要优先选用贴合英语表达逻辑的常用句式，比如固定介词短语、too...to...结构等，涉及中国传统神话和经典谚语的内容要使用通用的标准译法，完成后核对所有表达的语法正确性，避免出现中式英语错误。
【解析】
我们逐题推导对应表达：
1. 表达“使愿望成真”，使用使役动词make加宾语加不带to的不定式结构，对应短语为make wishes come true；
2. 表示“经过（路过）”的常用动词短语为pass by；
3. 表示接触地面、着地的常用表达为hit the ground；
4. 表示“逃跑、离开脱身”的常用短语为get away；
5. 表示“做某事失败、没能完成某事”的固定搭配为fail to do sth；
6. 表示“一套……的作品集/收藏”的固定搭配为a collection of；
7. 翻译句子时，“令所有人惊讶的是”使用固定结构To everyone's surprise，“决定做某事”用decide to do的结构，串联后得到对应译文；
8. 翻译该神话相关句子，“精卫填海的故事”译为The story of "Jingwei Filling the Sea"，后面接宾语从句说明道理，“面对困难”用固定搭配in the face of difficulties，得到对应译文；
9. 该句使用英语常用的too...to...（太……而不能）结构来翻译，逻辑通顺符合表达习惯，得到对应译文；
10. 经典谚语“有志者事竟成”的通用标准英译是固定的Where there is a will, there is a way。
【答案】
1. make wishes come true
2. pass by
3. hit the ground
4. get away
5. fail to do sth
6. a collection of
7. To everyone's surprise, the ugly duckling decided to leave and find a new home.
8. The story of "Jingwei Filling the Sea" teaches us that we should never give up in the face of difficulties.
9. The two mountains were too huge for Yu Gong and his family to move by themselves.
10. Where there is a will, there is a way.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配，英汉互译，英语谚语识记
【点评】
本题属于奇幻主题英语写作的基础语料积累训练，覆盖了故事叙述常用的动作类短语、中外经典神话相关的句式表达和通用励志谚语，能够帮助学生储备写作可用的地道表达，减少写作时中式英语的问题，同时巩固常用句式的应用能力，为后续完整故事写作打下基础。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是英语奇幻故事写作配套的语料积累题，解题时首先要结合写作场景回忆对应中文释义的课标要求常用英语固定搭配，确保短语符合故事叙述的使用习惯；翻译句子时要优先选用贴合英语表达逻辑的常用句式，比如固定介词短语、too...to...结构等，涉及中国传统神话和经典谚语的内容要使用通用的标准译法，完成后核对所有表达的语法正确性，避免出现中式英语错误。
【解析】
我们逐题推导对应表达：
1. 表达“使愿望成真”，使用使役动词make加宾语加不带to的不定式结构，对应短语为make wishes come true；
2. 表示“经过（路过）”的常用动词短语为pass by；
3. 表示接触地面、着地的常用表达为hit the ground；
4. 表示“逃跑、离开脱身”的常用短语为get away；
5. 表示“做某事失败、没能完成某事”的固定搭配为fail to do sth；
6. 表示“一套……的作品集/收藏”的固定搭配为a collection of；
7. 翻译句子时，“令所有人惊讶的是”使用固定结构To everyone's surprise，“决定做某事”用decide to do的结构，串联后得到对应译文；
8. 翻译该神话相关句子，“精卫填海的故事”译为The story of "Jingwei Filling the Sea"，后面接宾语从句说明道理，“面对困难”用固定搭配in the face of difficulties，得到对应译文；
9. 该句使用英语常用的too...to...（太……而不能）结构来翻译，逻辑通顺符合表达习惯，得到对应译文；
10. 经典谚语“有志者事竟成”的通用标准英译是固定的Where there is a will, there is a way。
【答案】
1. make wishes come true
2. pass by
3. hit the ground
4. get away
5. fail to do sth
6. a collection of
7. To everyone's surprise, the ugly duckling decided to leave and find a new home.
8. The story of "Jingwei Filling the Sea" teaches us that we should never give up in the face of difficulties.
9. The two mountains were too huge for Yu Gong and his family to move by themselves.
10. Where there is a will, there is a way.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配，英汉互译，英语谚语识记
【点评】
本题属于奇幻主题英语写作的基础语料积累训练，覆盖了故事叙述常用的动作类短语、中外经典神话相关的句式表达和通用励志谚语，能够帮助学生储备写作可用的地道表达，减少写作时中式英语的问题，同时巩固常用句式的应用能力，为后续完整故事写作打下基础。
【难度系数】
0.7
