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健康对每个人都很重要,我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以"How to Stay Healthy?"为题,写一篇英语短文,向学校英文报投稿。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息;
2. 词数不少于80,短文的标题已给出,不计入总词数。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称
2. 时态:一般现在时为主
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①喉咙痛
②流鼻涕
③发烧
④吃太多……
⑤肚子疼/头痛/牙痛
⑥受苦;受折磨
⑦给某人量体温
⑧做检查
⑨得流感
⑩戴口罩
⑪从……上掉下来
⑫更为重要的是
⑬对……有害
⑭从现在起
2. 句型仿写
①To protect your eyes, every 20 minutes, you should rest your eyes and look at something far away.
句型:动词不定式作目的状语
仿写:为了保持健康,有很多我们应该做的事情。
②It stops us from passing the flu virus to others easily.
句型:stop ... from doing ...
仿写:我们应该定期锻炼,以防止生病。
③If you take good care of yourself, you'll get better soon.
句型:if引导的条件状语从句
仿写:如果我们患了流感,我们应该戴上口罩以保护他人。
连句成篇
How to Stay Healthy?
健康对每个人都很重要,我们应该学会如何保持健康。请以"How to Stay Healthy?"为题,写一篇英语短文,向学校英文报投稿。
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息;
2. 词数不少于80,短文的标题已给出,不计入总词数。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称
2. 时态:一般现在时为主
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①喉咙痛
②流鼻涕
③发烧
④吃太多……
⑤肚子疼/头痛/牙痛
⑥受苦;受折磨
⑦给某人量体温
⑧做检查
⑨得流感
⑩戴口罩
⑪从……上掉下来
⑫更为重要的是
⑬对……有害
⑭从现在起
2. 句型仿写
①To protect your eyes, every 20 minutes, you should rest your eyes and look at something far away.
句型:动词不定式作目的状语
仿写:为了保持健康,有很多我们应该做的事情。
②It stops us from passing the flu virus to others easily.
句型:stop ... from doing ...
仿写:我们应该定期锻炼,以防止生病。
③If you take good care of yourself, you'll get better soon.
句型:if引导的条件状语从句
仿写:如果我们患了流感,我们应该戴上口罩以保护他人。
连句成篇
How to Stay Healthy?
答案
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①have a sore throat
②have a runny nose
③have a fever
④eat too much/many
⑤have a stomachache/headache/toothache
⑥suffer from
⑦take sb's temperature
⑧do a test
⑨have the flu
⑩wear a mask
⑪fall off ⑫what's more
⑬do harm to/be harmful to
⑭from now on
2. 句型仿写
①To stay healthy, there are many things
we should do.
②We should exercise regularly to stop us
from getting sick.
③If we have the flu, we should wear a
mask to protect others.
【连句成篇】
How to Stay Healthy?
Health is important to everyone.
To stay healthy, there are many things
we should do. First, we should eat more
vegetables and fruit instead of eating too much
junk food, which is harmful to our bodies.
What's more, we should exercise regularly
to stop us from getting sick. When we have a
sore throat, have a runny nose, or have a
fever, we'd better take our temperature and
see a doctor. If we have the flu, we should
wear a mask to protect others.
From now on, let's take good care of
ourselves!
1. 主题词块
①have a sore throat
②have a runny nose
③have a fever
④eat too much/many
⑤have a stomachache/headache/toothache
⑥suffer from
⑦take sb's temperature
⑧do a test
⑨have the flu
⑩wear a mask
⑪fall off ⑫what's more
⑬do harm to/be harmful to
⑭from now on
2. 句型仿写
①To stay healthy, there are many things
we should do.
②We should exercise regularly to stop us
from getting sick.
③If we have the flu, we should wear a
mask to protect others.
【连句成篇】
How to Stay Healthy?
Health is important to everyone.
To stay healthy, there are many things
we should do. First, we should eat more
vegetables and fruit instead of eating too much
junk food, which is harmful to our bodies.
What's more, we should exercise regularly
to stop us from getting sick. When we have a
sore throat, have a runny nose, or have a
fever, we'd better take our temperature and
see a doctor. If we have the flu, we should
wear a mask to protect others.
From now on, let's take good care of
ourselves!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作，要求以“How to Stay Healthy”为题完成短文。需遵循思维导图的结构：开篇点明健康的重要性，主体分点介绍保持健康的方法，结尾发出号召。写作时要使用第一人称、一般现在时，运用给定的主题词块和句型仿写，确保词数达标且无真实信息，让文章结构清晰、内容连贯。
【解析】
1. 开篇：直接点题，写出“Health is important to everyone.”，明确主题。
2. 主体：先写过渡句“To stay healthy, there are many things we should do.”，接着分点阐述：
First部分：运用主题词块“eat too much”“be harmful to”，说明要多吃蔬果、少吃垃圾食品，因为垃圾食品有害健康；
What's more部分：运用“exercise regularly”“stop ... from doing”，说明定期锻炼能防止生病；
补充生病时的做法：用“take sb's temperature”“see a doctor”，以及“have the flu”“wear a mask”，结合句型仿写，说明生病时的应对方式。
3. 结尾：用“From now on, let's take good care of ourselves!”发出号召，完成全文。
【答案】
How to Stay Healthy?
Health is important to everyone.
To stay healthy, there are many things we should do. First, we should eat more vegetables and fruit instead of eating too much junk food, which is harmful to our bodies. What's more, we should exercise regularly to stop us from getting sick. When we have a sore throat, have a runny nose, or have a fever, we'd better take our temperature and see a doctor. If we have the flu, we should wear a mask to protect others.
From now on, let's take good care of ourselves!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，健康主题词汇，句型仿写
【点评】
本文严格遵循题目要求和思维导图结构，开篇点题，主体分点清晰，结尾号召有力；运用了给定的主题词块和句型，内容充实、逻辑连贯，符合英语写作的规范，是一篇优秀的短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语应用文写作，要求以“How to Stay Healthy”为题完成短文。需遵循思维导图的结构：开篇点明健康的重要性，主体分点介绍保持健康的方法，结尾发出号召。写作时要使用第一人称、一般现在时，运用给定的主题词块和句型仿写，确保词数达标且无真实信息，让文章结构清晰、内容连贯。
【解析】
1. 开篇：直接点题，写出“Health is important to everyone.”，明确主题。
2. 主体：先写过渡句“To stay healthy, there are many things we should do.”，接着分点阐述：
First部分：运用主题词块“eat too much”“be harmful to”，说明要多吃蔬果、少吃垃圾食品，因为垃圾食品有害健康；
What's more部分：运用“exercise regularly”“stop ... from doing”，说明定期锻炼能防止生病；
补充生病时的做法：用“take sb's temperature”“see a doctor”，以及“have the flu”“wear a mask”，结合句型仿写，说明生病时的应对方式。
3. 结尾：用“From now on, let's take good care of ourselves!”发出号召，完成全文。
【答案】
How to Stay Healthy?
Health is important to everyone.
To stay healthy, there are many things we should do. First, we should eat more vegetables and fruit instead of eating too much junk food, which is harmful to our bodies. What's more, we should exercise regularly to stop us from getting sick. When we have a sore throat, have a runny nose, or have a fever, we'd better take our temperature and see a doctor. If we have the flu, we should wear a mask to protect others.
From now on, let's take good care of ourselves!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，健康主题词汇，句型仿写
【点评】
本文严格遵循题目要求和思维导图结构，开篇点题，主体分点清晰，结尾号召有力；运用了给定的主题词块和句型，内容充实、逻辑连贯，符合英语写作的规范，是一篇优秀的短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
