六、书面表达
2025常州期末人无礼则不立,请以"How to be a person with good manners"为题,根据以下要点为学校的英语演讲比赛写一篇演讲稿。

要求:
1. 要点齐全、条理清楚、表达准确、语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 80个词左右,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。
How to be a person with good manners
As the saying goes, "Manners make the man." A person with good manners behaves politely. As teenagers, what should we do to show good manners?

Let's practise good manners to make ourselves better people!

One possible version:
How to be a person with good manners
As the saying goes, "Manners make the man." A person with good manners behaves politely. As teenagers, what should we do to show good manners?
In public places, we should always keep our voice down and wait in line patiently. It's important not to push or talk loudly.
At the dinner table, we should eat with our mouths closed and not talk with food inside. It's polite to wait for everyone to finish eating before we leave the table.
In school, we must follow all the school rules. It's a good habit to greet teachers with a warm smile. We should respect our classmates.
Let's practise good manners to make ourselves better people!

【分析】
首先，我们要明确这是一篇英语演讲稿写作题，主题是如何做一个有礼貌的人，需要覆盖公共场合、餐桌、校园三个场景的礼仪要点。解题思路如下：
1. 先承接题目给出的开头，自然过渡到具体礼仪的阐述；
2. 公共场合部分直接使用题目给出的“轻声细语，排队等候”，用英语准确转化表达；
3. 餐桌礼仪需自拟至少2点，要选取符合日常礼仪规范的内容，比如吃饭闭嘴、不边吃边说话、等所有人吃完再离桌等，用简洁的英语表述；
4. 校园礼仪同样自拟至少2点，比如问候老师、遵守校规、尊重同学等，贴合校园生活实际；
5. 最后注意语句通顺、条理清晰，控制总词数在要求范围内，结尾使用题目给出的内容完成收尾。
【解析】
1. 开篇承接题目给出的开头，用设问自然引出下文对不同场合礼仪的介绍；
2. 第一段落写公共场合礼仪：用“In public places, we should always keep our voice down and wait in line patiently. It's important not to push or talk loudly.”准确对应题目给出的要点，语言符合英语表达习惯；
3. 第二段落写餐桌礼仪：选取“eat with our mouths closed”“not talk with food inside”“wait for everyone to finish eating before we leave the table”这些符合日常礼仪的内容，用“It's polite to...”等句式组织，逻辑清晰；
4. 第三段落写校园礼仪：用“follow all the school rules”“greet teachers with a warm smile”“respect our classmates”这些贴合校园场景的礼仪点，清晰传达校园礼仪要求；
5. 最后衔接题目给出的结尾，完成整篇演讲稿，确保要点齐全、语言通顺，符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
How to be a person with good manners
As the saying goes, "Manners make the man." A person with good manners behaves politely. As teenagers, what should we do to show good manners?
In public places, we should always keep our voice down and wait in line patiently. It's important not to push or talk loudly.
At the dinner table, we should eat with our mouths closed and not talk with food inside. It's polite to wait for everyone to finish eating before we leave the table.
In school, we must follow all the school rules. It's a good habit to greet teachers with a warm smile. We should respect our classmates.
Let's practise good manners to make ourselves better people!
【知识点】
1. 日常礼仪英语表达
2. 英语演讲稿写作
3. 情景话题写作
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，分场景清晰阐述了不同场合的礼仪规范，结构条理分明，语言简洁准确，符合演讲稿的表达风格，既覆盖了所有要点，又严格控制了词数，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6