2026年仁爱英语同步练习册八年级英语上册仁爱版第20页答案
六、书面表达。
工作不分贵贱,平凡的岗位也能为人们的生活作出贡献。请你根据下面表格中的信息,以“A Good Cleaner”为题,用英语写一篇短文,并在英语口语课上和你的同学分享。

Name Zhang Fan
Job a cleaner
Working hours from 5:30 a.m. to 8:30 a.m. every day
Daily work sweeps the roads and picks up rubbish in the city park
Feeling proud
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含表格中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现本人的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70个左右。
A Good Cleaner









答案

A Good Cleaner
Now I want to introduce a good cleaner to all of you. His name is Zhang Fan, and he is a common cleaner. He works from 5:30 a.m. to 8:30 a.m. every day. He sweeps the roads and picks up rubbish in the city park to keep the place clean. He says he feels very proud of his job, because he can bring a comfortable environment for all visitors.

解析

【分析】
本题要求以“A Good Cleaner”为题写英语短文,需整合表格中所有信息并适当发挥。解题思路:① 开头引出要介绍的清洁工;② 依次介绍姓名、职业、工作时间、日常工作;③ 结合表格中的“proud”补充说明他自豪的原因(如为大家带来干净环境);④ 控制词数在70左右,确保语句通顺、信息完整。
【解析】
写作遵循“总-分”结构:
1. 开头:点明要介绍的人物,如“Now I want to introduce a good cleaner to all of you.”;
2. 主体:依次呈现表格信息:姓名Zhang Fan,职业a cleaner,工作时间from 5:30 a.m. to 8:30 a.m. every day,日常工作sweeps the roads and picks up rubbish in the city park;
3. 结尾:结合“proud”补充合理内容,说明他自豪的原因(如为游客提供舒适环境),使短文完整;
4. 检查词数,确保符合要求,语句通顺无语法错误。
【答案】
A Good Cleaner
Now I want to introduce a good cleaner to all of you. His name is Zhang Fan, and he is a common cleaner. He works from 5:30 a.m. to 8:30 a.m. every day. He sweeps the roads and picks up rubbish in the city park to keep the place clean. He says he feels very proud of his job, because he can bring a comfortable environment for all visitors.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、信息整合写作
【点评】
本题考查学生整合表格信息并进行英语写作的能力,要求准确运用所学词汇和句式,体现对平凡岗位价值的理解,是基础写作题型,注重信息的完整性和语句的连贯性。
【难度系数】
0.5