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Mike 是你远在英国的好朋友,请根据提示对他进行介绍,让同学们了解英国学生的生活。
提示:1.多才多艺,会下国际象棋、打鼓和拉小提琴。
2.生活习惯很好,早上7点起床,然后刷牙、洗脸,吃完早饭去上学;晚上洗完澡,按时睡觉。
注意:1. 短文必须包含上面的所有信息,可适当发挥; 2.词数60~70。
审题指导:
1.体裁:记叙文
2.时态:一般现在时
3.人称:以第三人称为主
写作框架:
优秀范文:
亮点词块
①play the drums and the violin 打鼓和拉小提琴
②brush one's teeth 刷牙
③take a shower 冲澡
④learn from sb. 向某人学习
高分句子
⑤It's not only fast but also convenient. (not only...but also...连接并列成分)它不仅快而且方便。
⑥Then it's time to go home. (It's time to do sth. "是时候做某事了。")然后是时候回家了。
Mike 是你远在英国的好朋友,请根据提示对他进行介绍,让同学们了解英国学生的生活。
提示:1.多才多艺,会下国际象棋、打鼓和拉小提琴。
2.生活习惯很好,早上7点起床,然后刷牙、洗脸,吃完早饭去上学;晚上洗完澡,按时睡觉。
注意:1. 短文必须包含上面的所有信息,可适当发挥; 2.词数60~70。
审题指导:
1.体裁:记叙文
2.时态:一般现在时
3.人称:以第三人称为主
写作框架:
优秀范文:
亮点词块
①play the drums and the violin 打鼓和拉小提琴
②brush one's teeth 刷牙
③take a shower 冲澡
④learn from sb. 向某人学习
高分句子
⑤It's not only fast but also convenient. (not only...but also...连接并列成分)它不仅快而且方便。
⑥Then it's time to go home. (It's time to do sth. "是时候做某事了。")然后是时候回家了。
答案
Hello, everyone! I have a good friend in Britain. He is Mike. He is talented. He can play chess. He can play the drums and the violin. He is a boy with good habits. He always gets up at 7:00 in the morning, brushes his teeth and then washes his face. After breakfast, he goes to school by subway. It's not only fast but also convenient. He has seven lessons a day. He has lunch at school. And school finishes at five. Then it's time to go home. In the evening, he goes to bed on time after taking a shower. I think I must learn from him and make myself better.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语记叙文写作题，要求介绍英国朋友Mike，需明确：体裁为记叙文，时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，必须包含两大要点：①多才多艺（会国际象棋、打鼓、拉小提琴）；②良好生活习惯（早上7点起床，洗漱、吃早饭上学；晚上洗澡后按时睡觉），可适当发挥，词数控制在60~70，可运用给定的亮点词块和高分句式。写作时先引出人物，再依次写才艺、生活习惯，最后加简单感悟，注意动词第三人称单数变形，确保所有要点覆盖。
【解析】
1. 开头引出人物：Hello, everyone! I have a good friend in Britain. He is Mike.
2. 描述才艺：He is talented. He can play chess, play the drums and the violin.
3. 描述生活习惯：He has good living habits. He gets up at 7:00 in the morning, brushes his teeth and washes his face. After breakfast, he goes to school. In the evening, he takes a shower and goes to bed on time.
4. 适当发挥并运用指定句式：补充上学方式（by subway），用“not only...but also...”和“It's time to do sth.”，如“After breakfast, he goes to school by subway. It's not only fast but also convenient.”，最后加简单感悟，控制词数在要求范围内，确保时态正确、要点齐全。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I have a good friend in Britain. He is Mike. He is talented. He can play chess. He can play the drums and the violin. He is a boy with good habits. He always gets up at 7:00 in the morning, brushes his teeth and then washes his face. After breakfast, he goes to school by subway. It's not only fast but also convenient. He has seven lessons a day. He has lunch at school. And school finishes at five. Then it's time to go home. In the evening, he goes to bed on time after taking a shower. I think I must learn from him and make myself better.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般现在时，英语常用短语
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示信息，运用了给定的亮点词块和高分句式，时态准确，人称一致，适当发挥自然合理，词数符合要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语记叙文写作题，要求介绍英国朋友Mike，需明确：体裁为记叙文，时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，必须包含两大要点：①多才多艺（会国际象棋、打鼓、拉小提琴）；②良好生活习惯（早上7点起床，洗漱、吃早饭上学；晚上洗澡后按时睡觉），可适当发挥，词数控制在60~70，可运用给定的亮点词块和高分句式。写作时先引出人物，再依次写才艺、生活习惯，最后加简单感悟，注意动词第三人称单数变形，确保所有要点覆盖。
【解析】
1. 开头引出人物：Hello, everyone! I have a good friend in Britain. He is Mike.
2. 描述才艺：He is talented. He can play chess, play the drums and the violin.
3. 描述生活习惯：He has good living habits. He gets up at 7:00 in the morning, brushes his teeth and washes his face. After breakfast, he goes to school. In the evening, he takes a shower and goes to bed on time.
4. 适当发挥并运用指定句式：补充上学方式（by subway），用“not only...but also...”和“It's time to do sth.”，如“After breakfast, he goes to school by subway. It's not only fast but also convenient.”，最后加简单感悟，控制词数在要求范围内，确保时态正确、要点齐全。
【答案】
Hello, everyone! I have a good friend in Britain. He is Mike. He is talented. He can play chess. He can play the drums and the violin. He is a boy with good habits. He always gets up at 7:00 in the morning, brushes his teeth and then washes his face. After breakfast, he goes to school by subway. It's not only fast but also convenient. He has seven lessons a day. He has lunch at school. And school finishes at five. Then it's time to go home. In the evening, he goes to bed on time after taking a shower. I think I must learn from him and make myself better.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作，一般现在时，英语常用短语
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示信息，运用了给定的亮点词块和高分句式，时态准确，人称一致，适当发挥自然合理，词数符合要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
