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我们通过英语课本了解了Millie的日常安排,假设你是李华,请按照时间顺序,参照下面的思维导图,给Millie写一封信,描述你的一天。
注意:1.信中需包括思维导图中的提示内容,可适当发挥;2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3.不得出现你的任何真实信息;4.词数60~70,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Timo,
I'm Li Hua from Xi'an, China.
Yours,
Li Hua
我们通过英语课本了解了Millie的日常安排,假设你是李华,请按照时间顺序,参照下面的思维导图,给Millie写一封信,描述你的一天。
注意:1.信中需包括思维导图中的提示内容,可适当发挥;2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;3.不得出现你的任何真实信息;4.词数60~70,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Timo,
I'm Li Hua from Xi'an, China.
I'd like to share my school day routine with you.
Every school day, I get up at 6:30 in the morning. After washing and having breakfast, I go to school by bus. My classes start at 8:00 a. m., and I study various subjects such as maths, English and history.
At noon, I have lunch with my classmates in the school canteen, which is always enjoyable.
In the afternoon, I continue with my classes. School usually finishes at around 4:00 p. m.
After school, I often play sports like basketball with my friends, which helps me relax.
In the evening, I do my homework and spend some time reading before going to bed.
This is my school day routine.
I think I live a healthy life.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Timo,
I'm Li Hua from Xi'an, China. I'd like to share my school day routine with you.
Every school day, I get up at 6:30 in the morning. After washing and having breakfast, I go to school by bus. My classes start at 8:00 a. m., and I study various subjects such as maths, English and history. At noon, I have lunch with my classmates in the school canteen, which is always enjoyable. In the afternoon, I continue with my classes. School usually finishes at around 4:00 p. m. After school, I often play sports like basketball with my friends, which helps me relax. In the evening, I do my homework and spend some time reading before going to bed.
This is my school day routine. I think I live a healthy life.
Yours,
Li Hua
I'm Li Hua from Xi'an, China. I'd like to share my school day routine with you.
Every school day, I get up at 6:30 in the morning. After washing and having breakfast, I go to school by bus. My classes start at 8:00 a. m., and I study various subjects such as maths, English and history. At noon, I have lunch with my classmates in the school canteen, which is always enjoyable. In the afternoon, I continue with my classes. School usually finishes at around 4:00 p. m. After school, I often play sports like basketball with my friends, which helps me relax. In the evening, I do my homework and spend some time reading before going to bed.
This is my school day routine. I think I live a healthy life.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给收信人写一封信，描述自己的上学日，需按时间顺序，包含思维导图中的get up、go to school、have classes、have lunch、play sports等内容，适当发挥，词数60~70，开头和结尾已给出。解题思路：先梳理时间线，从早上起床开始，依次写上学、上课、午餐、课后运动，最后补充日常收尾内容，确保覆盖所有要点，语句通顺，符合书信格式和词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，引出要分享上学日的内容；
2. 按时间顺序依次描述：早上6:30起床，吃完早饭坐公交上学，8点开始上课，学习多门科目；中午和同学在食堂吃午餐；下午继续上课，4点左右放学，课后和朋友打篮球放松；晚上做作业、阅读后睡觉；
3. 收尾说明这是自己的上学日，生活健康；
4. 确保包含所有思维导图要点，语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Timo,
I'm Li Hua from Xi'an, China. I'd like to share my school day routine with you.
Every school day, I get up at 6:30 in the morning. After washing and having breakfast, I go to school by bus. My classes start at 8:00 a. m., and I study various subjects such as maths, English and history. At noon, I have lunch with my classmates in the school canteen, which is always enjoyable. In the afternoon, I continue with my classes. School usually finishes at around 4:00 p. m. After school, I often play sports like basketball with my friends, which helps me relax. In the evening, I do my homework and spend some time reading before going to bed.
This is my school day routine. I think I live a healthy life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、日常话题表达
【点评】
本题考查学生日常话题的英语写作能力，要求按时间顺序组织内容，涵盖给定要点并适当发挥，注重语句连贯性和书信格式，是初中英语基础写作的常见题型，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以李华的身份给收信人写一封信，描述自己的上学日，需按时间顺序，包含思维导图中的get up、go to school、have classes、have lunch、play sports等内容，适当发挥，词数60~70，开头和结尾已给出。解题思路：先梳理时间线，从早上起床开始，依次写上学、上课、午餐、课后运动，最后补充日常收尾内容，确保覆盖所有要点，语句通顺，符合书信格式和词数要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，引出要分享上学日的内容；
2. 按时间顺序依次描述：早上6:30起床，吃完早饭坐公交上学，8点开始上课，学习多门科目；中午和同学在食堂吃午餐；下午继续上课，4点左右放学，课后和朋友打篮球放松；晚上做作业、阅读后睡觉；
3. 收尾说明这是自己的上学日，生活健康；
4. 确保包含所有思维导图要点，语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
Dear Timo,
I'm Li Hua from Xi'an, China. I'd like to share my school day routine with you.
Every school day, I get up at 6:30 in the morning. After washing and having breakfast, I go to school by bus. My classes start at 8:00 a. m., and I study various subjects such as maths, English and history. At noon, I have lunch with my classmates in the school canteen, which is always enjoyable. In the afternoon, I continue with my classes. School usually finishes at around 4:00 p. m. After school, I often play sports like basketball with my friends, which helps me relax. In the evening, I do my homework and spend some time reading before going to bed.
This is my school day routine. I think I live a healthy life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、日常话题表达
【点评】
本题考查学生日常话题的英语写作能力，要求按时间顺序组织内容，涵盖给定要点并适当发挥，注重语句连贯性和书信格式，是初中英语基础写作的常见题型，能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
