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假如你是李明,三天后将要在班级的英语课上进行分享,题目是“My Hobby”。请根据以下内容提示用英文写一篇短文。

注意:
1.在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.不得出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名;
3.词数80左右,作文的标题、开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
My Hobby
Hello, everyone. It's my honour to share something about my hobby with you.
That's all for my sharing. Thank you for listening.
假如你是李明,三天后将要在班级的英语课上进行分享,题目是“My Hobby”。请根据以下内容提示用英文写一篇短文。
注意:
1.在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.不得出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名;
3.词数80左右,作文的标题、开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
My Hobby
Hello, everyone. It's my honour to share something about my hobby with you.
That's all for my sharing. Thank you for listening.
答案
【高分范文】
My Hobby
Hello, everyone. It's my honour to share
something about my hobby with you.
My hobby is reading books and it started
when I was a second-grade student.
My parents are very pleased with my hobby
of reading. Whenever I ask them to buy some
books for me, they always take me to the
bookshops to pay for all the books I choose.
They think reading books is very helpful for
my growth and studying. I really enjoy reading
all kinds of books and I get to know more and
more about the world through the books.
Reading books is more than a hobby, so
I'll keep this hobby all my life.
That's all for my sharing. Thank you for
listening.
My Hobby
Hello, everyone. It's my honour to share
something about my hobby with you.
My hobby is reading books and it started
when I was a second-grade student.
My parents are very pleased with my hobby
of reading. Whenever I ask them to buy some
books for me, they always take me to the
bookshops to pay for all the books I choose.
They think reading books is very helpful for
my growth and studying. I really enjoy reading
all kinds of books and I get to know more and
more about the world through the books.
Reading books is more than a hobby, so
I'll keep this hobby all my life.
That's all for my sharing. Thank you for
listening.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李明的身份完成英语短文“My Hobby”,需结合思维导图的四个核心要点(爱好及持续时间、父母态度及原因、自身态度及原因、期望做法)写作,同时要适当拓展信息,词数控制在80左右,且开头结尾已给出。解题思路:先确定爱好为读书,明确持续时间;再说明父母支持的原因;接着表达自己坚持的态度及理由;最后衔接结尾,确保内容紧扣要点、语言通顺。
【解析】
根据思维导图要点,结合给定的开头结尾,组织符合要求的英文内容:先点明爱好是读书,始于二年级;再说明父母支持,原因是读书利于成长和学习;接着表达自己会坚持,因为能通过书籍了解更多世界;最后衔接结尾,保证语句流畅、符合词数要求。
【答案】
My Hobby
Hello, everyone. It's my honour to share something about my hobby with you.
My hobby is reading books and it started when I was a second-grade student. My parents are very pleased with my hobby of reading. Whenever I ask them to buy some books for me, they always take me to the bookshops to pay for all the books I choose. They think reading books is very helpful for my growth and studying. I really enjoy reading all kinds of books and I get to know more and more about the world through the books. Reading books is more than a hobby, so I'll keep this hobby all my life.
That's all for my sharing. Thank you for listening.
【知识点】
英语写作、观点表达
【点评】
本文紧扣思维导图所有要点,内容充实,语言流畅自然,符合班级分享的场景要求,是一篇符合题目要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求以李明的身份完成英语短文“My Hobby”,需结合思维导图的四个核心要点(爱好及持续时间、父母态度及原因、自身态度及原因、期望做法)写作,同时要适当拓展信息,词数控制在80左右,且开头结尾已给出。解题思路:先确定爱好为读书,明确持续时间;再说明父母支持的原因;接着表达自己坚持的态度及理由;最后衔接结尾,确保内容紧扣要点、语言通顺。
【解析】
根据思维导图要点,结合给定的开头结尾,组织符合要求的英文内容:先点明爱好是读书,始于二年级;再说明父母支持,原因是读书利于成长和学习;接着表达自己会坚持,因为能通过书籍了解更多世界;最后衔接结尾,保证语句流畅、符合词数要求。
【答案】
My Hobby
Hello, everyone. It's my honour to share something about my hobby with you.
My hobby is reading books and it started when I was a second-grade student. My parents are very pleased with my hobby of reading. Whenever I ask them to buy some books for me, they always take me to the bookshops to pay for all the books I choose. They think reading books is very helpful for my growth and studying. I really enjoy reading all kinds of books and I get to know more and more about the world through the books. Reading books is more than a hobby, so I'll keep this hobby all my life.
That's all for my sharing. Thank you for listening.
【知识点】
英语写作、观点表达
【点评】
本文紧扣思维导图所有要点,内容充实,语言流畅自然,符合班级分享的场景要求,是一篇符合题目要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
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