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【写作要求】
假设你是李明，你的交换生朋友 Kevin 很喜欢你亲手制作的小礼物，他来信询问制作过程，请你给他回信，内容包括：
（1）你送的礼物是什么？
（2）你送此礼物的原因。
（3）制作的方法或过程。
注意：（1）词数不少于 70，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made.
Yours,
Li Ming
【思路分析】
1. 人称：第一人称和第二人称。
2. 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时。
3. 构思
①开头表明很高兴对方喜欢礼物。
②中间介绍礼物是什么、送礼物的原因以及制作过程。
③结尾希望对方亲自动手尝试制作。
【写作步骤】
1. 如何写好开篇
直接表达喜悦，如：
I'm very happy that you like my gift.
I'm so glad you are fond of my present.
I'm really pleased that you like the gift.
2. 如何写好中间
①描述礼物是什么：
It's a beautiful paper - cut.
It's a nice kite.
It's a beautiful Chinese knot.
②描述送礼物的原因：
I gave it to you because it's very special.
It represents good luck in traditional Chinese culture.
Because it means good luck.
③描述制作过程：
First, get a piece of paper and a pair of scissors.
Draw a picture on the paper.
Cut along the lines.
Stick it on a card.
3. 如何写好结尾
鼓励对方尝试，如：
You can try to make it. It's very easy.
I hope you can try to make it by yourself.
It will be great fun.
【范文借鉴】
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made.（开头表明很高兴对方喜欢礼物）
It's a beautiful paper - cut. I gave it to you because it's very special. It represents good luck in traditional Chinese culture. To make it, first, get a piece of red paper and a pair of scissors. Then, draw a lovely pattern on the paper. After that, cut along the lines carefully. Finally, stick it on a card.（中间介绍礼物是什么、送礼物的原因以及制作过程）
I hope you can try to make it by yourself. It will be great fun.（结尾希望对方亲自动手尝试制作）
Yours,
Li Ming
假设你是李明，你的交换生朋友 Kevin 很喜欢你亲手制作的小礼物，他来信询问制作过程，请你给他回信，内容包括：
（1）你送的礼物是什么？
（2）你送此礼物的原因。
（3）制作的方法或过程。
注意：（1）词数不少于 70，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made.
Yours,
Li Ming
【思路分析】
1. 人称：第一人称和第二人称。
2. 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时。
3. 构思
①开头表明很高兴对方喜欢礼物。
②中间介绍礼物是什么、送礼物的原因以及制作过程。
③结尾希望对方亲自动手尝试制作。
【写作步骤】
1. 如何写好开篇
直接表达喜悦，如：
I'm very happy that you like my gift.
I'm so glad you are fond of my present.
I'm really pleased that you like the gift.
2. 如何写好中间
①描述礼物是什么：
It's a beautiful paper - cut.
It's a nice kite.
It's a beautiful Chinese knot.
②描述送礼物的原因：
I gave it to you because it's very special.
It represents good luck in traditional Chinese culture.
Because it means good luck.
③描述制作过程：
First, get a piece of paper and a pair of scissors.
Draw a picture on the paper.
Cut along the lines.
Stick it on a card.
3. 如何写好结尾
鼓励对方尝试，如：
You can try to make it. It's very easy.
I hope you can try to make it by yourself.
It will be great fun.
【范文借鉴】
Dear Kevin,
I am glad that you like the small gift I made.（开头表明很高兴对方喜欢礼物）
It's a beautiful paper - cut. I gave it to you because it's very special. It represents good luck in traditional Chinese culture. To make it, first, get a piece of red paper and a pair of scissors. Then, draw a lovely pattern on the paper. After that, cut along the lines carefully. Finally, stick it on a card.（中间介绍礼物是什么、送礼物的原因以及制作过程）
I hope you can try to make it by yourself. It will be great fun.（结尾希望对方亲自动手尝试制作）
Yours,
Li Ming
答案
It's a beautiful paper-cut of a little cat. I gave it to you because I know you are very interested in Chinese traditional culture, and red paper-cuts also stand for good luck and warm wishes in our country. It's very easy to make. First, you need to get a piece of red paper and a pair of scissors. Then draw your favourite pattern on the paper. After that, cut along the lines carefully. Finally, you can stick the finished paper-cut on a small card to keep it well.
I hope you can try to make it by yourself when you have time. It will be great fun.
I hope you can try to make it by yourself when you have time. It will be great fun.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：以李明的身份给交换生Kevin回信，需涵盖三个核心内容：礼物类型、送礼原因、制作过程，同时遵循给定的书信格式（开头结尾已提供），注意人称（第一、第二人称）和时态（以一般现在时为主），词数不少于70。解题思路：第一步确定具有中国特色的礼物（如小猫剪纸）；第二步结合Kevin的兴趣说明送礼原因；第三步按顺序清晰描述制作步骤；第四步结尾鼓励对方尝试，确保符合书信的交际语气和要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇承接已给内容，明确礼物是小猫剪纸；2. 说明送礼原因：结合Kevin对中国传统文化的兴趣，点明剪纸代表好运和祝福的文化意义；3. 按“first→then→after that→finally”的顺序，清晰写出制作剪纸的具体步骤；4. 结尾用友好的语气鼓励Kevin尝试制作，符合书信的交际目的，同时保证词数达标，语言自然流畅。
【答案】
It's a beautiful paper-cut of a little cat. I gave it to you because I know you are very interested in Chinese traditional culture, and red paper-cuts also stand for good luck and warm wishes in our country. It's very easy to make. First, you need to get a piece of red paper and a pair of scissors. Then draw your favourite pattern on the paper. After that, cut along the lines carefully. Finally, you can stick the finished paper-cut on a small card to keep it well. I hope you can try to make it by yourself when you have time. It will be great fun.
【知识点】
英语书信写作；一般现在时；中国传统文化表达
【点评】
本篇作文完全符合题目要求，涵盖了所有规定要点，语言准确流畅，逻辑清晰，结合了中国传统文化元素，语气亲切自然，符合李明与Kevin的朋友关系，是一篇优秀的英语书信习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作任务：以李明的身份给交换生Kevin回信，需涵盖三个核心内容：礼物类型、送礼原因、制作过程，同时遵循给定的书信格式（开头结尾已提供），注意人称（第一、第二人称）和时态（以一般现在时为主），词数不少于70。解题思路：第一步确定具有中国特色的礼物（如小猫剪纸）；第二步结合Kevin的兴趣说明送礼原因；第三步按顺序清晰描述制作步骤；第四步结尾鼓励对方尝试，确保符合书信的交际语气和要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开篇承接已给内容，明确礼物是小猫剪纸；2. 说明送礼原因：结合Kevin对中国传统文化的兴趣，点明剪纸代表好运和祝福的文化意义；3. 按“first→then→after that→finally”的顺序，清晰写出制作剪纸的具体步骤；4. 结尾用友好的语气鼓励Kevin尝试制作，符合书信的交际目的，同时保证词数达标，语言自然流畅。
【答案】
It's a beautiful paper-cut of a little cat. I gave it to you because I know you are very interested in Chinese traditional culture, and red paper-cuts also stand for good luck and warm wishes in our country. It's very easy to make. First, you need to get a piece of red paper and a pair of scissors. Then draw your favourite pattern on the paper. After that, cut along the lines carefully. Finally, you can stick the finished paper-cut on a small card to keep it well. I hope you can try to make it by yourself when you have time. It will be great fun.
【知识点】
英语书信写作；一般现在时；中国传统文化表达
【点评】
本篇作文完全符合题目要求，涵盖了所有规定要点，语言准确流畅，逻辑清晰，结合了中国传统文化元素，语气亲切自然，符合李明与Kevin的朋友关系，是一篇优秀的英语书信习作。
【难度系数】
0.5
