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八、书面表达(19 分)
请根据下面的提示，以“My Best Friend”为题写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友 Linda。
要求:1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；2. 短文须包括所有信息，省略号部分适当发挥 1～2 句；3. 词数 80 左右。
My Best Friend
I have a wonderful friend named Linda. I'd like to tell you something about her.
请根据下面的提示，以“My Best Friend”为题写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友 Linda。
要求:1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；2. 短文须包括所有信息，省略号部分适当发挥 1～2 句；3. 词数 80 左右。
My Best Friend
I have a wonderful friend named Linda. I'd like to tell you something about her.
She is tall and slim with a round face. She has a great sense of humour and often tells us jokes that make us laugh.
Linda is generous and enjoys sharing her things with her friends. She is always friendly and ready to help others in need. Her hobbies include reading and doing sport. She reads English newspapers and magazines every day. After school, she plays baseball with her classmates. In the future, she wants to become a teacher to teach children.
答案
八、
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇记叙文。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语义连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍琳达的外貌和性格特点；第二步，介绍琳达的品行及业余爱好；第三步，介绍琳达的未来计划。
[词句积累]
①a great sense of humour很有幽默感 ②in need在困难中
③in the future在未来
④She has a great sense of humour and often tells us jokes that make us laugh. (that引导定语从句)
One possible version:
My Best Friend
I have a wonderful friend named Linda. I'd like to tell you something about her. She is tall and slim with a round face. She has a great sense of humour and often tells us jokes that make us laugh.
Linda is generous and enjoys sharing her things with her friends. She is always friendly and ready to help others in need. Her hobbies include reading and doing sport. She reads English newspapers and magazines every day. After school, she plays baseball with her classmates.
In the future, she wants to become a teacher to teach children.→动词不定式作目的状语
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇记叙文。②时态:一般现在时。③提示:根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语义连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍琳达的外貌和性格特点；第二步，介绍琳达的品行及业余爱好；第三步，介绍琳达的未来计划。
[词句积累]
①a great sense of humour很有幽默感 ②in need在困难中
③in the future在未来
④She has a great sense of humour and often tells us jokes that make us laugh. (that引导定语从句)
One possible version:
My Best Friend
I have a wonderful friend named Linda. I'd like to tell you something about her. She is tall and slim with a round face. She has a great sense of humour and often tells us jokes that make us laugh.
Linda is generous and enjoys sharing her things with her friends. She is always friendly and ready to help others in need. Her hobbies include reading and doing sport. She reads English newspapers and magazines every day. After school, she plays baseball with her classmates.
In the future, she wants to become a teacher to teach children.→动词不定式作目的状语
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先完成审题：明确主题是介绍好友Linda，体裁为记叙文，整体使用一般现在时写作即可，要求覆盖表格给出的全部信息，还要适当补充1-2句未来计划的内容，总词数控制在80左右。接下来梳理写作思路：第一步先对应表格的“特点”模块，介绍Linda的外貌和幽默的性格；第二步对应“品行”模块，写出她乐于分享、友善、热心助人的特质；第三步对应“业余爱好”模块，介绍她阅读和运动的爱好；最后补充符合逻辑的未来计划内容，写作过程中注意用上积累的相关短语，保证语句连贯，不要遗漏任何给定要点，避免基础语法错误。
【解析】
我们按照三步法完成合规写作：
1. 承接题目给出的开头句，首先描写外貌性格：写出“She is tall and slim with a round face”点明外形，再用常用短语表达她很有幽默感，经常讲笑话逗大家开怀大笑，完成第一部分要点覆盖。
2. 接下来依次介绍品行和爱好：先说明Linda大方慷慨，愿意和朋友分享自己的物品，待人友善，随时准备帮助有需要的人；再介绍她的爱好：热爱阅读，每天阅读英文报纸和杂志，也喜欢运动，放学后常和同学们一起打棒球，把所有给定的提示信息全部自然融入行文。
3. 最后补充合理的未来计划：说明她未来想要成为一名老师，教孩子们知识，符合补充1-2句内容的要求，最后通读全文调整语句流畅度，把总词数控制在要求的范围内。
【答案】
My Best Friend
I have a wonderful friend named Linda. I'd like to tell you something about her. She is tall and slim with a round face. She has a great sense of humour and often tells us jokes that make us laugh.
Linda is generous and enjoys sharing her things with her friends. She is always friendly and ready to help others in need. Her hobbies include reading and doing sports. She reads English newspapers and magazines every day. After school, she plays baseball with her classmates.
In the future, she wants to become a teacher to teach children.
【知识点】
人物类英语写作，一般现在时应用，短文谋篇布局
【点评】
这是初中英语非常典型的要点提示类人物介绍作文，所有核心信息都通过表格明确给出，学生只需要把中文提示准确转化为通顺的英文表达，补充符合逻辑的未来计划内容即可完成写作，整体门槛不高。写作时要注意不要遗漏给定要点，适当使用积累的高分短语和简单的定语从句、不定式结构，就能有效提升作文的得分档次，同时注意控制词数符合题干要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先完成审题：明确主题是介绍好友Linda，体裁为记叙文，整体使用一般现在时写作即可，要求覆盖表格给出的全部信息，还要适当补充1-2句未来计划的内容，总词数控制在80左右。接下来梳理写作思路：第一步先对应表格的“特点”模块，介绍Linda的外貌和幽默的性格；第二步对应“品行”模块，写出她乐于分享、友善、热心助人的特质；第三步对应“业余爱好”模块，介绍她阅读和运动的爱好；最后补充符合逻辑的未来计划内容，写作过程中注意用上积累的相关短语，保证语句连贯，不要遗漏任何给定要点，避免基础语法错误。
【解析】
我们按照三步法完成合规写作：
1. 承接题目给出的开头句，首先描写外貌性格：写出“She is tall and slim with a round face”点明外形，再用常用短语表达她很有幽默感，经常讲笑话逗大家开怀大笑，完成第一部分要点覆盖。
2. 接下来依次介绍品行和爱好：先说明Linda大方慷慨，愿意和朋友分享自己的物品，待人友善，随时准备帮助有需要的人；再介绍她的爱好：热爱阅读，每天阅读英文报纸和杂志，也喜欢运动，放学后常和同学们一起打棒球，把所有给定的提示信息全部自然融入行文。
3. 最后补充合理的未来计划：说明她未来想要成为一名老师，教孩子们知识，符合补充1-2句内容的要求，最后通读全文调整语句流畅度，把总词数控制在要求的范围内。
【答案】
My Best Friend
I have a wonderful friend named Linda. I'd like to tell you something about her. She is tall and slim with a round face. She has a great sense of humour and often tells us jokes that make us laugh.
Linda is generous and enjoys sharing her things with her friends. She is always friendly and ready to help others in need. Her hobbies include reading and doing sports. She reads English newspapers and magazines every day. After school, she plays baseball with her classmates.
In the future, she wants to become a teacher to teach children.
【知识点】
人物类英语写作，一般现在时应用，短文谋篇布局
【点评】
这是初中英语非常典型的要点提示类人物介绍作文，所有核心信息都通过表格明确给出，学生只需要把中文提示准确转化为通顺的英文表达，补充符合逻辑的未来计划内容即可完成写作，整体门槛不高。写作时要注意不要遗漏给定要点，适当使用积累的高分短语和简单的定语从句、不定式结构，就能有效提升作文的得分档次，同时注意控制词数符合题干要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
