佳作赏析
请以“My day”为题，写一篇短文介绍你的一天，不少于5句话。
My day
This is my day. It's seven thirty.
I get up. It's eight o'clock. I have breakfast. It's eight twenty. It's time to go to school. It's twelve o'clock. It's time to have lunch. After school,
——描述自己的日常作息及活动安排
I play football with my friends. It's nine thirty. I go to bed. It is a busy but happy day.
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参考范文：
My day
This is my day.
It's six thirty. I get up and brush my teeth.
It's seven o'clock. I have milk and eggs for breakfast.
It's seven forty. It's time to go to school.
I have four classes in the morning.
At twelve o'clock, I have lunch at school.
After school, I fly kites with my friends in the park.
It's six o'clock. I go home and have dinner with my family.
It's nine o'clock. It's time to go to bed.
I have a very happy day.

【分析】
本题要求以“My day”为题写英语短文，介绍日常作息，不少于5句话。解题思路：1. 确定时态为一般现在时，用于描述日常习惯性动作；2. 按时间顺序梳理一天的关键活动，如起床、早餐、上学、午餐、课后活动、晚餐、睡觉等，用时间点引出对应活动（采用“It's... I...”结构）；3. 确保内容连贯、逻辑清晰，句子数量达标。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开篇点题，点明主题是介绍自己的一天；
2. 按时间顺序依次描述各时段的活动，每部分用时间点引导，使用一般现在时，涵盖起床、早餐、上学、课程、午餐、课后活动、晚餐、睡觉等核心内容；
3. 结尾总结感受，使短文结构完整、内容饱满。
【答案】
参考范文：
My day
This is my day.
It's six thirty. I get up and brush my teeth.
It's seven o'clock. I have milk and eggs for breakfast.
It's seven forty. It's time to go to school.
I have four classes in the morning.
At twelve o'clock, I have lunch at school.
After school, I fly kites with my friends in the park.
It's six o'clock. I go home and have dinner with my family.
It's nine o'clock. It's time to go to bed.
I have a very happy day.
【知识点】
一般现在时、日常作息表达、英语短文写作
【点评】
本题考查学生用英语描述日常作息的基础写作能力，需掌握时间表达和相关活动词汇，按时间顺序组织内容，注重语言的连贯性和准确性，是英语学习中常见的实用写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.5

请根据图片提示，以“My day”为题写一篇短文，介绍你的一天。

My day

One possible version:
My day
This is my day. It's seven o'clock. I get up. It's seven thirty. I have breakfast. It's twelve ten. It's time for lunch. It's six thirty. It's time to have dinner. It's nine o'clock. I go to bed. What a busy day!

【分析】首先观察图片中的时间节点和对应活动：7:00起床，7:30吃早餐，12:10吃午餐，6:30吃晚餐，9:00睡觉。解题时需按时间顺序，用简单英语句子串联这些活动，围绕“My day”主题，使用一般现在时描述日常作息，确保语句通顺、逻辑清晰。
【解析】根据图片信息，依次对应时间与活动：7点起床，7点半吃早饭，12点10分午饭，6点半晚饭，9点睡觉。将这些内容组织成连贯短文，采用小学阶段常用简单句型，如“It's... I...”“It's time for...”等，完成“My day”的写作。
【答案】One possible version:
My day
This is my day. It's seven o'clock. I get up. It's seven thirty. I have breakfast. It's twelve ten. It's time for lunch. It's six thirty. It's time to have dinner. It's nine o'clock. I go to bed. What a busy day!
【知识点】一般现在时、日常活动表达、时间表达
【点评】本题结合图片情境考查英语写作能力，要求学生准确提取图片信息，用简单英语描述日常作息，难度适中，适合小学阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】0.3