生日是人们一年中最重要的日子之一，人们通常会用不同的方式进行庆祝。你的生日在哪一天呢？你是怎样庆祝的？请写一写吧。

My birthday is on October 10th. I usually celebrate my birthday by having a small party at home. My parents will prepare a birthday cake and some delicious food. My close friends come to my house, and we sing birthday songs, eat cake, and play games together. Sometimes, I also receive some nice gifts from my family and friends. I really enjoy these happy moments on my birthday.

【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先要明确题干要求的两个核心必填要素：一是清晰说明自己的生日具体日期，二是详细介绍自己的生日庆祝方式。我们可以按照总-分-总的思路来构思：第一步先开门见山直接点明生日日期，注意英文里具体日期前要搭配介词on；第二步展开补充庆祝相关的细节，先总述自己常用的庆祝形式，再分别说明家人的准备、和朋友共同开展的活动，还可以加入收生日礼物的小细节，让内容饱满不空洞；最后收尾表达自己对生日的喜爱，让文章结构完整。全程用一般现在时描述常规的庆祝习惯，符合语境要求，避免时态混乱。
【解析】
写作可按照三步完成：
1. 开篇点题：用标准句式直接说明自己的生日日期，完成题干第一个要求，示例：My birthday is on October 10th.
2. 主体展开：先总述自己的常规庆祝方式，再依次补充父母的准备工作、来访好友和自己共同开展的活动，还可以加入收礼物的细节，丰富内容，依次写出：I usually celebrate my birthday by having a small party at home. My parents will prepare a birthday cake and some delicious food. My close friends come to my house, and we sing birthday songs, eat cake, and play games together. Sometimes, I also receive some nice gifts from my family and friends.
3. 结尾收尾：抒发自己对生日时刻的喜爱之情，收束全文：I really enjoy these happy moments on my birthday.
全文时态统一为一般现在时，符合描述日常习惯的语境，逻辑通顺表意清晰即可。
【答案】
My birthday is on October 10th. I usually celebrate my birthday by having a small party at home. My parents will prepare a birthday cake and some delicious food. My close friends come to my house, and we sing birthday songs, eat cake, and play games together. Sometimes, I also receive some nice gifts from my family and friends. I really enjoy these happy moments on my birthday.
【知识点】
1. 英文日期表达
2. 一般现在时运用
3. 英语记叙文写作
【点评】
本篇习作完全覆盖题干要求的全部核心信息，内容细节充实，逻辑清晰连贯，所用句式简单地道，没有语法错误，完整展现了生日庆祝的全过程，情感表达自然真挚，完全符合该类基础写作题的得分要求。
【难度系数】
0.7

请根据思维导图和所给提示，描述杨玲生日派对的情形。
要求：1. 内容涵盖提供的所有信息；2. 条理清晰，意思连贯，词句丰富；3. 不少于 40 词（不包括已给内容）。
Today is Yang Ling's birthday. It's on . We are having a party in her house. Look! It's time for the cake. Yang Ling is making a wish. She wants to . We at the party.

Today is Yang Ling's birthday. It's on March the twelfth. We are having a party in her house. Look! The boys are playing games. The girls are singing songs. They are so happy. Yang Ling's father is making a fruit salad. Yang Ling's mother is cooking nice food. It's time for the cake. Yang Ling is making a wish. She wants to have a nice doll and dance well. We have a good time at the party.

【分析】
这是一道图表提示型的英语补全写作题，解题思路非常清晰：第一步先定位每个空缺对应的思维导图板块：第一个空对应date板块，直接提取日期信息，注意英文日期的规范表达；第二个空对应activities板块，前面有提示词Look，说明要描述当下正在发生的所有派对活动，全部使用现在进行时，把男孩、女孩、爸爸、妈妈的活动全部梳理出来，还可以加少量衔接词让语句更通顺；第三个空对应wishes板块，把两个愿望用连词and连接即可；第四个空对应feelings板块，提取对应的感受短语，最后检查所有信息点都覆盖、时态正确、字数符合要求就完成作答。
【解析】
1. 第一空：对应思维导图date栏的March 12，英文日期规范书写为March the twelfth，填入后交代清楚生日的具体时间。
2. 第二空：对应activities栏的全部信息，结合提示词Look，使用现在进行时描述正在发生的场景：先写男孩们正在玩游戏，再写女孩们正在唱歌，补充一句They are so happy烘托氛围，接着写杨玲的爸爸正在做水果沙拉，杨玲的妈妈正在烹饪美味的食物，所有活动信息全部覆盖，逻辑连贯。
3. 第三空：对应思维导图wishes栏的两个愿望，用and连接，填入have a nice doll and dance well，符合许愿的语境。
4. 第四空：对应思维导图feelings栏的内容，填入have a good time，收尾点明派对的愉悦氛围。
【答案】
Today is Yang Ling's birthday. It's on March the twelfth. We are having a party in her house. Look! The boys are playing games. The girls are singing songs. They are so happy. Yang Ling's father is making a fruit salad. Yang Ling's mother is cooking nice food. It's time for the cake. Yang Ling is making a wish. She wants to have a nice doll and dance well. We have a good time at the party.
【知识点】
现在进行时，英文日期表达，情景写作
【点评】
本题依托思维导图给出全部写作信息点，降低了写作的自由发挥难度，重点考查学生提取图表信息、结合正确时态组织连贯语句的能力，只要不遗漏给定信息、时态使用正确，很容易写出符合要求的短文。
【难度系数】
0.8