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四、书面表达。
为了庆祝毛泽东同志的诞辰，12月26日，七年级的同学们来到了毛泽东同志的故乡——韶山。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，记录这次经历。
要点：
1. 当天天气、乘坐的交通工具；
2. 参与的活动，如唱红歌，朗诵毛泽东同志的诗词……
3. 个人感受和心得。
注意：
1. 短文需包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：sing revolutionary songs 唱红歌；read Mao Zedong's poems 朗诵毛泽东的诗词；the Communist Party of China 中国共产党
A Trip to Remember
We went on a school trip to Shaoshan on 26th December. It was really unforgettable!
为了庆祝毛泽东同志的诞辰，12月26日，七年级的同学们来到了毛泽东同志的故乡——韶山。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，记录这次经历。
要点：
1. 当天天气、乘坐的交通工具；
2. 参与的活动，如唱红歌，朗诵毛泽东同志的诗词……
3. 个人感受和心得。
注意：
1. 短文需包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：sing revolutionary songs 唱红歌；read Mao Zedong's poems 朗诵毛泽东的诗词；the Communist Party of China 中国共产党
A Trip to Remember
We went on a school trip to Shaoshan on 26th December. It was really unforgettable!
答案
It was sunny and warm that day. We went there by school bus happily. When we arrived, we first visited Chairman Mao's former house and learned a lot about his life. Then we got together on the square to sing revolutionary songs, some students also read Mao Zedong's poems loudly. All of us felt really excited. I think I should study hard now, to become a good person and make contributions to our country in the future.
解析
这是一篇七年级提纲类英语记叙文写作，写作要点如下：1. 文体为校园游记，主体时态统一使用一般过去时，符合七年级写作要求；2. 完整覆盖所有提示内容：首先交代当日天气和出行的交通工具，再依次介绍参与的各项活动，最后抒发个人的参观心得；3. 可适当补充细节让行文连贯，控制总词数在80左右，不得出现真实姓名、学校等隐私信息。
