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Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
假如你叫李林,你来自美国纽约的朋友Anna给你发了一封邮件。请你仔细阅读这封邮件,根据所述内容给Anna回一封邮件。
要求:1.应包含邮件中所有要点,可以适当发挥;
2.词数不少于80;
3.邮件中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息。
Dear Li Lin,
How is it going? Now I'm in New York with my family. The life here is relaxing. It's 8 a. m. We are having breakfast at home. The weather is sunny. It's 9 p. m. in China, right? Can you tell me the weather in your hometown? And what are you and your family members doing? How do you feel? I'm looking forward to your email.
Yours,
Anna
假如你叫李林,你来自美国纽约的朋友Anna给你发了一封邮件。请你仔细阅读这封邮件,根据所述内容给Anna回一封邮件。
要求:1.应包含邮件中所有要点,可以适当发挥;
2.词数不少于80;
3.邮件中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息。
Dear Li Lin,
How is it going? Now I'm in New York with my family. The life here is relaxing. It's 8 a. m. We are having breakfast at home. The weather is sunny. It's 9 p. m. in China, right? Can you tell me the weather in your hometown? And what are you and your family members doing? How do you feel? I'm looking forward to your email.
Yours,
Anna
答案
One possible version:
Dear Anna,
I'm so glad to have your email. And I like to talk about the weather and my family members' activities with you.
It's 9 p. m. in China. It's windy and cloudy now. The weather report says it will be rainy later.
My grandparents are watching TV right now, and they think it's interesting. My mother is cleaning the kitchen and my father is doing the dishes. They always keep our room tidy. My sister is playing the piano because she has a piano competition this weekend. As for me, I'm doing my homework.
We are all busy but happy.
Yours,
Li Lin
Dear Anna,
I'm so glad to have your email. And I like to talk about the weather and my family members' activities with you.
It's 9 p. m. in China. It's windy and cloudy now. The weather report says it will be rainy later.
My grandparents are watching TV right now, and they think it's interesting. My mother is cleaning the kitchen and my father is doing the dishes. They always keep our room tidy. My sister is playing the piano because she has a piano competition this weekend. As for me, I'm doing my homework.
We are all busy but happy.
Yours,
Li Lin
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，任务是给美国朋友Anna回邮件，需覆盖她提出的三个核心问题：家乡的天气、自己和家人正在做的事、当下的感受。解题思路：①遵循邮件格式（开头称呼、结尾署名）；②用现在进行时描述正在发生的动作（对应问题中的“正在做”）；③依次回应天气、家人活动、自身活动，适当补充细节使内容连贯；④确保词数达标，不出现真实个人信息。
【解析】1. 开头：礼貌回应Anna的邮件，说明将回答她的问题；2. 回应天气：点明中国当前时间（对应Anna提到的纽约时间），描述家乡天气，可补充天气预告内容；3. 描述家人活动：用现在进行时分别说明祖父母、父母、姐姐的活动，体现家庭日常；4. 自身活动：说明自己正在做的事；5. 结尾：表达全家的整体感受，呼应邮件主题。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Anna,
I'm so glad to have your email. And I like to talk about the weather and my family members' activities with you.
It's 9 p. m. in China. It's windy and cloudy now. The weather report says it will be rainy later.
My grandparents are watching TV right now, and they think it's interesting. My mother is cleaning the kitchen and my father is doing the dishes. They always keep our room tidy. My sister is playing the piano because she has a piano competition this weekend. As for me, I'm doing my homework.
We are all busy but happy.
Yours,
Li Lin
【知识点】英语邮件写作、现在进行时、日常话题英语表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，聚焦日常交流场景，要求学生准确回应问题，正确运用现在进行时描述动作，兼顾邮件格式与内容连贯性，难度适中，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用水平。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 开头：礼貌回应Anna的邮件，说明将回答她的问题；2. 回应天气：点明中国当前时间（对应Anna提到的纽约时间），描述家乡天气，可补充天气预告内容；3. 描述家人活动：用现在进行时分别说明祖父母、父母、姐姐的活动，体现家庭日常；4. 自身活动：说明自己正在做的事；5. 结尾：表达全家的整体感受，呼应邮件主题。
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Anna,
I'm so glad to have your email. And I like to talk about the weather and my family members' activities with you.
It's 9 p. m. in China. It's windy and cloudy now. The weather report says it will be rainy later.
My grandparents are watching TV right now, and they think it's interesting. My mother is cleaning the kitchen and my father is doing the dishes. They always keep our room tidy. My sister is playing the piano because she has a piano competition this weekend. As for me, I'm doing my homework.
We are all busy but happy.
Yours,
Li Lin
【知识点】英语邮件写作、现在进行时、日常话题英语表达
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，聚焦日常交流场景，要求学生准确回应问题，正确运用现在进行时描述动作，兼顾邮件格式与内容连贯性，难度适中，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用水平。
【难度系数】0.5
