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Ⅶ.书面表达(满分20分)
假如你的朋友Nick来自美国,请根据下列提示介绍一下他。不少于70词。
内容提示:
1.他今年十三岁,会说汉语和英语,兴趣广泛;
2.他的寄宿家庭(host family)离学校约六千米,他通常绿色出行,因为他推崇低碳(low-carbon)环保;
3.他目前在一所双语(bilingual)学校就读,学校有很多规则;
4.他欣赏中国文化,正在学习中国功夫;
5.熊猫是他最喜欢的动物,他希望能去四川看熊猫。
假如你的朋友Nick来自美国,请根据下列提示介绍一下他。不少于70词。
内容提示:
1.他今年十三岁,会说汉语和英语,兴趣广泛;
2.他的寄宿家庭(host family)离学校约六千米,他通常绿色出行,因为他推崇低碳(low-carbon)环保;
3.他目前在一所双语(bilingual)学校就读,学校有很多规则;
4.他欣赏中国文化,正在学习中国功夫;
5.熊猫是他最喜欢的动物,他希望能去四川看熊猫。
答案
One possible version:
Nick is my good friend from America. He is thirteen and can speak both English and Chinese. He has many hobbies,such as music,basketball and kung fu. His host family is about six kilometres from school,so he usually rides a bike to live a low-carbon life. Now he studies in a bilingual school with lots of rules,but he likes them because they make him polite. Nick loves Chinese culture. He is learning Chinese kung fu now. His favourite animal is pandas,and he hopes to visit Sichuan to see them soon.
Nick is my good friend from America. He is thirteen and can speak both English and Chinese. He has many hobbies,such as music,basketball and kung fu. His host family is about six kilometres from school,so he usually rides a bike to live a low-carbon life. Now he studies in a bilingual school with lots of rules,but he likes them because they make him polite. Nick loves Chinese culture. He is learning Chinese kung fu now. His favourite animal is pandas,and he hopes to visit Sichuan to see them soon.
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务为介绍来自美国的朋友Nick，需覆盖所有给定提示点，字数不少于70词。写作时先开篇点明Nick的身份，再依次介绍其年龄、语言能力、兴趣爱好，接着说明寄宿家庭的位置及绿色出行的原因，然后介绍就读的双语学校，再写对中国文化的喜爱和学习中国功夫的情况，最后点明其最喜欢的动物及愿望；写作中要使用正确的英语词汇、时态（一般现在时描述常态，现在进行时描述正在进行的动作），语句衔接自然，避免生硬罗列要点。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明身份：Nick is my good friend from America.
2. 介绍基本情况：He is thirteen and can speak both English and Chinese. He has many hobbies,such as music,basketball and kung fu.
3. 说明寄宿家庭与出行方式：His host family is about six kilometres from school,so he usually rides a bike to live a low-carbon life.
4. 介绍就读学校：Now he studies in a bilingual school with lots of rules,but he likes them because they make him polite.
5. 提及中国文化与功夫：Nick loves Chinese culture. He is learning Chinese kung fu now.
6. 说明最喜欢的动物与愿望：His favourite animal is pandas,and he hopes to visit Sichuan to see them soon.
将以上内容按逻辑衔接，形成完整通顺的短文，覆盖所有提示要点，满足字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Nick is my good friend from America. He is thirteen and can speak both English and Chinese. He has many hobbies,such as music,basketball and kung fu. His host family is about six kilometres from school,so he usually rides a bike to live a low-carbon life. Now he studies in a bilingual school with lots of rules,but he likes them because they make him polite. Nick loves Chinese culture. He is learning Chinese kung fu now. His favourite animal is pandas,and he hopes to visit Sichuan to see them soon.
【知识点】
英语书面表达（介绍类）、时态运用、常用短语搭配
【点评】
该书面表达完全覆盖题目要求的所有提示要点，内容完整充实，语句连贯自然，用词准确恰当，时态使用正确，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，达到了不少于70词的规定，是一篇优秀的介绍类短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本次写作任务为介绍来自美国的朋友Nick，需覆盖所有给定提示点，字数不少于70词。写作时先开篇点明Nick的身份，再依次介绍其年龄、语言能力、兴趣爱好，接着说明寄宿家庭的位置及绿色出行的原因，然后介绍就读的双语学校，再写对中国文化的喜爱和学习中国功夫的情况，最后点明其最喜欢的动物及愿望；写作中要使用正确的英语词汇、时态（一般现在时描述常态，现在进行时描述正在进行的动作），语句衔接自然，避免生硬罗列要点。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明身份：Nick is my good friend from America.
2. 介绍基本情况：He is thirteen and can speak both English and Chinese. He has many hobbies,such as music,basketball and kung fu.
3. 说明寄宿家庭与出行方式：His host family is about six kilometres from school,so he usually rides a bike to live a low-carbon life.
4. 介绍就读学校：Now he studies in a bilingual school with lots of rules,but he likes them because they make him polite.
5. 提及中国文化与功夫：Nick loves Chinese culture. He is learning Chinese kung fu now.
6. 说明最喜欢的动物与愿望：His favourite animal is pandas,and he hopes to visit Sichuan to see them soon.
将以上内容按逻辑衔接，形成完整通顺的短文，覆盖所有提示要点，满足字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Nick is my good friend from America. He is thirteen and can speak both English and Chinese. He has many hobbies,such as music,basketball and kung fu. His host family is about six kilometres from school,so he usually rides a bike to live a low-carbon life. Now he studies in a bilingual school with lots of rules,but he likes them because they make him polite. Nick loves Chinese culture. He is learning Chinese kung fu now. His favourite animal is pandas,and he hopes to visit Sichuan to see them soon.
【知识点】
英语书面表达（介绍类）、时态运用、常用短语搭配
【点评】
该书面表达完全覆盖题目要求的所有提示要点，内容完整充实，语句连贯自然，用词准确恰当，时态使用正确，符合初中英语书面表达的要求，达到了不少于70词的规定，是一篇优秀的介绍类短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
