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八、书面表达(满分 25 分)
仁者爱人，乐善好施是中华民族的传统美德。9 月 5 日是国际慈善日，你校为了宣传慈善，打算在假期以“Willing Hands, Willing Hearts”为主题开展演讲大赛。假设你是李华，打算参加此项活动，谈谈你的慈善认知和规划，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英文演讲稿。要点如下：
1. What kind of charity do you want to introduce?
2. What can you do for this charity?
3. Why do we need to help people in need?
(参考机构：Project Hope 希望工程，ORBIS 国际眼科飞行医院组织，UNICEF 联合国儿童基金会...)
注意事项：
1. 演讲稿须包括所给提示内容，可作适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数 90 左右，演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Good morning, everyone! On the occasion of International Charity Day, I feel honored to share my thoughts under the theme “Willing Hands, Willing Hearts.”
Thank you for your listening!
仁者爱人，乐善好施是中华民族的传统美德。9 月 5 日是国际慈善日，你校为了宣传慈善，打算在假期以“Willing Hands, Willing Hearts”为主题开展演讲大赛。假设你是李华，打算参加此项活动，谈谈你的慈善认知和规划，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇英文演讲稿。要点如下：
1. What kind of charity do you want to introduce?
2. What can you do for this charity?
3. Why do we need to help people in need?
(参考机构：Project Hope 希望工程，ORBIS 国际眼科飞行医院组织，UNICEF 联合国儿童基金会...)
注意事项：
1. 演讲稿须包括所给提示内容，可作适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数 90 左右，演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Good morning, everyone! On the occasion of International Charity Day, I feel honored to share my thoughts under the theme “Willing Hands, Willing Hearts.”
Thank you for your listening!
答案
Good morning, everyone! On the occasion of International Charity Day, I feel honored to share my thoughts under the theme “Willing Hands, Willing Hearts.”
I'd like to introduce Project Hope to you. It is a great charity that helps children in poor areas get access to education by building schools and providing study materials.
For this charity, I can donate my pocket money and used storybooks. I will also call on my classmates to collect usable old stationery and send them to those kids. Besides, I'll write letters to encourage them to keep chasing their dreams.
We need to help people in need because every child has the right to education. A small act of kindness can change a kid's whole life. When we give a hand, we spread love and make the world a warmer place.
Thank you for your listening!
I'd like to introduce Project Hope to you. It is a great charity that helps children in poor areas get access to education by building schools and providing study materials.
For this charity, I can donate my pocket money and used storybooks. I will also call on my classmates to collect usable old stationery and send them to those kids. Besides, I'll write letters to encourage them to keep chasing their dreams.
We need to help people in need because every child has the right to education. A small act of kindness can change a kid's whole life. When we give a hand, we spread love and make the world a warmer place.
Thank you for your listening!
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务是撰写以“Willing Hands, Willing Hearts”为主题的演讲稿，开头和结尾已给定，需完成三个核心要点：介绍慈善机构、说明自身可做的事、阐述帮助他人的原因。解题思路：第一步，选取合适的参考慈善机构（如Project Hope）；第二步，围绕三个要点组织具体内容：说明该机构的服务对象与作用，列举自身能参与的慈善行动，解释帮助他人的意义；第三步，调整语句，确保连贯通顺，词数符合要求，不涉及真实信息。
【解析】
写作时，首先承接开头，明确介绍Project Hope，说明其帮助贫困地区孩子获得教育的功能；接着阐述自身能为该慈善做的事：捐赠零花钱、旧故事书，号召同学收集可用旧文具，写信鼓励孩子追梦；然后说明帮助他人的原因：每个孩子有受教育权，小善举可改变孩子人生，传递爱让世界更温暖；最后衔接结尾，确保语句流畅，符合演讲稿格式，词数约90词。
【答案】
Good morning, everyone! On the occasion of International Charity Day, I feel honored to share my thoughts under the theme “Willing Hands, Willing Hearts.”
I'd like to introduce Project Hope to you. It is a great charity that helps children in poor areas get access to education by building schools and providing study materials.
For this charity, I can donate my pocket money and used storybooks. I will also call on my classmates to collect usable old stationery and send them to those kids. Besides, I'll write letters to encourage them to keep chasing their dreams.
We need to help people in need because every child has the right to education. A small act of kindness can change a kid's whole life. When we give a hand, we spread love and make the world a warmer place.
Thank you for your listening!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、慈善主题写作
【点评】
本篇演讲稿紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有要点，内容具体充实，语言通顺自然，符合演讲稿的格式要求，准确传达了对慈善的认知与规划，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次写作任务是撰写以“Willing Hands, Willing Hearts”为主题的演讲稿，开头和结尾已给定，需完成三个核心要点：介绍慈善机构、说明自身可做的事、阐述帮助他人的原因。解题思路：第一步，选取合适的参考慈善机构（如Project Hope）；第二步，围绕三个要点组织具体内容：说明该机构的服务对象与作用，列举自身能参与的慈善行动，解释帮助他人的意义；第三步，调整语句，确保连贯通顺，词数符合要求，不涉及真实信息。
【解析】
写作时，首先承接开头，明确介绍Project Hope，说明其帮助贫困地区孩子获得教育的功能；接着阐述自身能为该慈善做的事：捐赠零花钱、旧故事书，号召同学收集可用旧文具，写信鼓励孩子追梦；然后说明帮助他人的原因：每个孩子有受教育权，小善举可改变孩子人生，传递爱让世界更温暖；最后衔接结尾，确保语句流畅，符合演讲稿格式，词数约90词。
【答案】
Good morning, everyone! On the occasion of International Charity Day, I feel honored to share my thoughts under the theme “Willing Hands, Willing Hearts.”
I'd like to introduce Project Hope to you. It is a great charity that helps children in poor areas get access to education by building schools and providing study materials.
For this charity, I can donate my pocket money and used storybooks. I will also call on my classmates to collect usable old stationery and send them to those kids. Besides, I'll write letters to encourage them to keep chasing their dreams.
We need to help people in need because every child has the right to education. A small act of kindness can change a kid's whole life. When we give a hand, we spread love and make the world a warmer place.
Thank you for your listening!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、慈善主题写作
【点评】
本篇演讲稿紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有要点，内容具体充实，语言通顺自然，符合演讲稿的格式要求，准确传达了对慈善的认知与规划，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
