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有人说，世界上最美的遇见，是邂逅那个更加卓越的自己。变得更好，并不意味着你从不犯错，而是你始终在进步的道路上砥砺前行。我校英文专刊以“
1. What helps you meet a better self?
2. Why do you think it can make you a better self?
3. How will you do it in your daily life?
注意事项：
1. 补全题目，如 “Reading, Travelling, Developing good manners” 等；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 词数：80 词左右；
4. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
有人说，世界上最美的遇见，是邂逅那个更加卓越的自己。变得更好，并不意味着你从不犯错，而是你始终在进步的道路上砥砺前行。我校英文专刊以“
Reading
helps me meet a better self”为题，面向八年级开展征文活动，请你根据提示，写一篇短文参赛，分享你的成长故事，讲述你如何一步步遇见更好的自己。1. What helps you meet a better self?
2. Why do you think it can make you a better self?
3. How will you do it in your daily life?
注意事项：
1. 补全题目，如 “Reading, Travelling, Developing good manners” 等；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 词数：80 词左右；
4. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Reading
helps me meet a better self答案
Reading helps me meet a better self
Reading has a great influence on me. It helps me meet a better self.
I used to spend lots of time on computer games and my grades were very bad. My parents were truly angry with me. Then one day, my uncle who is a Chinese teacher told me to read instead of playing computer games.
I began to read 100,000 Whys. It was so interesting that I nearly forgot the computer games. I showed an interest in reading different kinds of books. Reading not only brings me knowledge, but also teaches me how to get on well with others and how to be a better person. I became more and more confident after reading so many books. Now, my grades have improved and my parents are satisfied with me.
Reading really helps me meet a better self. The more I read, the wiser I will be. I will keep reading to improve myself.
Reading has a great influence on me. It helps me meet a better self.
I used to spend lots of time on computer games and my grades were very bad. My parents were truly angry with me. Then one day, my uncle who is a Chinese teacher told me to read instead of playing computer games.
I began to read 100,000 Whys. It was so interesting that I nearly forgot the computer games. I showed an interest in reading different kinds of books. Reading not only brings me knowledge, but also teaches me how to get on well with others and how to be a better person. I became more and more confident after reading so many books. Now, my grades have improved and my parents are satisfied with me.
Reading really helps me meet a better self. The more I read, the wiser I will be. I will keep reading to improve myself.
解析
【分析】
首先，需先补全题目，选择贴近生活、易于展开的主题（如Reading），确保紧扣题目给出的三个要点展开。第一步，明确点明是什么帮助自己遇见更好的自己；第二步，结合合理的自身经历，对比前后变化，阐述该事物为何能让自己变得更好；第三步，规划未来在日常生活中的具体做法，呼应主题。写作时要注意结构清晰，开头点题，中间叙事说明原因，结尾总结并提出计划，同时控制词数，避免出现真实信息，使用符合八年级水平的英语表达。
【解析】
1. 补全标题：选择“Reading”作为核心主题，补全为“Reading helps me meet a better self”，主题明确且易挖掘素材。
2. 开头段：直接点题，用“Reading has a great influence on me. It helps me meet a better self.”引出全文，简洁明了。
3. 铺垫部分：描述过去的不良状态（沉迷游戏、成绩差、父母生气），并引出转折点（叔叔建议阅读），为下文的改变做铺垫。
4. 主体阐述：讲述阅读的具体经历（读《十万个为什么》爱上阅读），通过“not only...but also...”句式说明阅读带来的改变——获取知识、学会与人相处、变得自信、成绩提升，回应“为什么能让自己更好”的问题。
5. 结尾段：用“The more I read, the wiser I will be.”强化阅读的作用，提出未来“keep reading to improve myself”的计划，回应“日常怎么做”的要求，同时再次点题，使文章结构完整。
6. 语言规范：使用符合八年级学生水平的词汇和句式，避免复杂表达，确保语句通顺连贯，未出现真实姓名、校名等信息，词数符合题目要求。
【答案】
Reading helps me meet a better self
Reading has a great influence on me. It helps me meet a better self.
I used to spend lots of time on computer games and my grades were very bad. My parents were truly angry with me. Then one day, my uncle who is a Chinese teacher told me to read instead of playing computer games.
I began to read 100,000 Whys. It was so interesting that I nearly forgot the computer games. I showed an interest in reading different kinds of books. Reading not only brings me knowledge, but also teaches me how to get on well with others and how to be a better person. I became more and more confident after reading so many books. Now, my grades have improved and my parents are satisfied with me.
Reading really helps me meet a better self. The more I read, the wiser I will be. I will keep reading to improve myself.
【知识点】
半命题英语写作、成长主题表达、记叙文写作结构
【点评】
本文完全符合题目要求，补全的标题贴合征文主题，内容完整覆盖所有要点：明确指出阅读是帮助自己遇见更好的自己的关键，通过前后对比的经历详细阐述阅读带来的积极改变，最后提出未来坚持阅读的具体计划。语言流畅自然，运用了“not only...but also...”“the more...the more...”等经典句式，结构清晰，开头点题、中间叙事、结尾升华，情感真挚，符合八年级学生的英语写作水平。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，需先补全题目，选择贴近生活、易于展开的主题（如Reading），确保紧扣题目给出的三个要点展开。第一步，明确点明是什么帮助自己遇见更好的自己；第二步，结合合理的自身经历，对比前后变化，阐述该事物为何能让自己变得更好；第三步，规划未来在日常生活中的具体做法，呼应主题。写作时要注意结构清晰，开头点题，中间叙事说明原因，结尾总结并提出计划，同时控制词数，避免出现真实信息，使用符合八年级水平的英语表达。
【解析】
1. 补全标题：选择“Reading”作为核心主题，补全为“Reading helps me meet a better self”，主题明确且易挖掘素材。
2. 开头段：直接点题，用“Reading has a great influence on me. It helps me meet a better self.”引出全文，简洁明了。
3. 铺垫部分：描述过去的不良状态（沉迷游戏、成绩差、父母生气），并引出转折点（叔叔建议阅读），为下文的改变做铺垫。
4. 主体阐述：讲述阅读的具体经历（读《十万个为什么》爱上阅读），通过“not only...but also...”句式说明阅读带来的改变——获取知识、学会与人相处、变得自信、成绩提升，回应“为什么能让自己更好”的问题。
5. 结尾段：用“The more I read, the wiser I will be.”强化阅读的作用，提出未来“keep reading to improve myself”的计划，回应“日常怎么做”的要求，同时再次点题，使文章结构完整。
6. 语言规范：使用符合八年级学生水平的词汇和句式，避免复杂表达，确保语句通顺连贯，未出现真实姓名、校名等信息，词数符合题目要求。
【答案】
Reading helps me meet a better self
Reading has a great influence on me. It helps me meet a better self.
I used to spend lots of time on computer games and my grades were very bad. My parents were truly angry with me. Then one day, my uncle who is a Chinese teacher told me to read instead of playing computer games.
I began to read 100,000 Whys. It was so interesting that I nearly forgot the computer games. I showed an interest in reading different kinds of books. Reading not only brings me knowledge, but also teaches me how to get on well with others and how to be a better person. I became more and more confident after reading so many books. Now, my grades have improved and my parents are satisfied with me.
Reading really helps me meet a better self. The more I read, the wiser I will be. I will keep reading to improve myself.
【知识点】
半命题英语写作、成长主题表达、记叙文写作结构
【点评】
本文完全符合题目要求，补全的标题贴合征文主题，内容完整覆盖所有要点：明确指出阅读是帮助自己遇见更好的自己的关键，通过前后对比的经历详细阐述阅读带来的积极改变，最后提出未来坚持阅读的具体计划。语言流畅自然，运用了“not only...but also...”“the more...the more...”等经典句式，结构清晰，开头点题、中间叙事、结尾升华，情感真挚，符合八年级学生的英语写作水平。
【难度系数】
0.7
