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（2025·江苏宿迁经济技术开发区第一实验学校调研）动物是人类的朋友。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My favourite animal”的征文比赛。请根据表格提示，写一篇短文参赛。
【要求】1. 词数80左右。
2. 要点齐全，不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节使文章连贯、通顺。
My favourite animal
（2025·江苏宿迁经济技术开发区第一实验学校调研）动物是人类的朋友。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My favourite animal”的征文比赛。请根据表格提示，写一篇短文参赛。
【要求】1. 词数80左右。
2. 要点齐全，不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节使文章连贯、通顺。
My favourite animal
I have a lovely dog, and it's my favourite animal. It's black and brown and its legs are very short. I call it Leo. It's two years old.
It likes chicken and beef very much. It likes playing with me. We go to the park every evening. When I am lying on the grass, it will sit near me.
It can help me do many things and make me smile. It can accompany me when my parents are not at home.
All my friends love my dog very much! What a lovely dog!
答案
One possible version:
My favourite animal
I have a lovely dog, and it's my favourite animal. It's black and brown and its legs are very short. I call it Leo. It's two years old.
It likes chicken and beef very much. It likes playing with me. We go to the park every evening. When I am lying on the grass, it will sit near me. It can help me do many things and make me smile. It can accompany me when my parents are not at home. All my friends love my dog very much! What a lovely dog!
I love my dog and it loves me too!
My favourite animal
I have a lovely dog, and it's my favourite animal. It's black and brown and its legs are very short. I call it Leo. It's two years old.
It likes chicken and beef very much. It likes playing with me. We go to the park every evening. When I am lying on the grass, it will sit near me. It can help me do many things and make me smile. It can accompany me when my parents are not at home. All my friends love my dog very much! What a lovely dog!
I love my dog and it loves me too!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确核心要求：主题为“My favourite animal”，词数80左右，需要完整覆盖表格给出的全部要点。第一步可以先选择自己熟悉的动物作为写作对象，比如常见的宠物狗，大幅降低写作难度；第二步按照提示维度梳理内容逻辑：开篇直接点明自己最喜欢的动物，接着依次介绍它的颜色、外形等外貌特征，再描述它的饮食、作息活动等生活习性，最后写出至少两个喜爱它的理由；第三步组织语言，用自然的英语衔接各个内容点，不要生硬逐字翻译，适当补充小细节让文章更生动，最后检查要点是否遗漏、语法是否有误，调整词数符合要求即可。
【解析】
1. 确定文体与时态：本文属于介绍事物的说明文，整体以一般现在时作为核心时态，符合日常介绍类写作的表达习惯。
2. 谋篇布局：
① 开篇点题：直接说明自己最喜欢的动物是小狗，补充名字、年龄信息，同时介绍它的毛色、短腿等外貌特征，对应表格的名称、外貌板块。
② 主体介绍习性：说明它喜爱的食物，日常喜欢傍晚出门活动的特点，对应表格的生活习性板块。
③ 收尾说明喜爱原因：写出两个核心理由，一是它总能逗自己开心，二是父母不在家时可以陪伴自己，最后收尾呼应主题，表达对小狗的喜爱。
3. 润色调整：添加少量衔接细节，保证语句连贯流畅，控制总词数符合要求，避免出现语法错误。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite animal
I have a lovely dog, and it's my favourite animal. It's black and brown and its legs are very short. I call it Leo. It's two years old.
It likes chicken and beef very much. It likes playing with me. We go to the park every evening. When I am lying on the grass, it will sit near me. It can help me do many things and make me smile. It can accompany me when my parents are not at home. All my friends love my dog very much! What a lovely dog!
I love my dog and it loves me too!
【知识点】
英语主题写作，一般现在时应用，事物描述表达
【点评】
本题是初中英语非常经典的生活化主题写作，给出的提示要素清晰明确，学生很容易结合自身养宠物或者观察动物的经历展开叙述，既考查了学生基础的英语语句组织能力，也引导学生留心观察生活、表达真情实感，写作时注意不要遗漏提示要点，适当补充小细节就能让文章更有感染力。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确核心要求：主题为“My favourite animal”，词数80左右，需要完整覆盖表格给出的全部要点。第一步可以先选择自己熟悉的动物作为写作对象，比如常见的宠物狗，大幅降低写作难度；第二步按照提示维度梳理内容逻辑：开篇直接点明自己最喜欢的动物，接着依次介绍它的颜色、外形等外貌特征，再描述它的饮食、作息活动等生活习性，最后写出至少两个喜爱它的理由；第三步组织语言，用自然的英语衔接各个内容点，不要生硬逐字翻译，适当补充小细节让文章更生动，最后检查要点是否遗漏、语法是否有误，调整词数符合要求即可。
【解析】
1. 确定文体与时态：本文属于介绍事物的说明文，整体以一般现在时作为核心时态，符合日常介绍类写作的表达习惯。
2. 谋篇布局：
① 开篇点题：直接说明自己最喜欢的动物是小狗，补充名字、年龄信息，同时介绍它的毛色、短腿等外貌特征，对应表格的名称、外貌板块。
② 主体介绍习性：说明它喜爱的食物，日常喜欢傍晚出门活动的特点，对应表格的生活习性板块。
③ 收尾说明喜爱原因：写出两个核心理由，一是它总能逗自己开心，二是父母不在家时可以陪伴自己，最后收尾呼应主题，表达对小狗的喜爱。
3. 润色调整：添加少量衔接细节，保证语句连贯流畅，控制总词数符合要求，避免出现语法错误。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite animal
I have a lovely dog, and it's my favourite animal. It's black and brown and its legs are very short. I call it Leo. It's two years old.
It likes chicken and beef very much. It likes playing with me. We go to the park every evening. When I am lying on the grass, it will sit near me. It can help me do many things and make me smile. It can accompany me when my parents are not at home. All my friends love my dog very much! What a lovely dog!
I love my dog and it loves me too!
【知识点】
英语主题写作，一般现在时应用，事物描述表达
【点评】
本题是初中英语非常经典的生活化主题写作，给出的提示要素清晰明确，学生很容易结合自身养宠物或者观察动物的经历展开叙述，既考查了学生基础的英语语句组织能力，也引导学生留心观察生活、表达真情实感，写作时注意不要遗漏提示要点，适当补充小细节就能让文章更有感染力。
【难度系数】
0.7
