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假设你是李华，学校英语社团将举办以“Protect Our Cultural Heritage”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。
提示：1. 文化遗产是国家的财富，很重要；2. 我们可以参观博物馆，了解更多文化遗产；
3. 向家人和朋友宣传保护文化遗产；4. 不损坏文物，从小事做起。
要求：1. 包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；2. 词数80—100，语句通顺，语法正确；3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Protect Our Cultural Heritage
Cultural heritage is very important for us.
审题指导：
体裁:说明文 时态:以一般现在时为主 人称:以第一人称为主
写作框架：
优秀范文：
Protect Our Cultural Heritage
Cultural heritage is is very important for¹ us. It is the treasure of our country and tells us our history.
We can do many things to protect it. First, we can visit museums to learn more about² cultural heritage. Second, we can
our family and friends the importance of³ protecting it. Third, we mustn’t damage any cultural relics when we visit them. If we all do our part⁴, our heritage will last for future generations to enjoy. Start with small things.
Let’s take action together to⁵ protect our great cultural heritage.
亮点词块
①is important for 对……重要
②learn about 了解
③the importance of……的重要性
④do our part 尽我们的职责；尽一份力
⑤take action to do 采取行动做……
假设你是李华，学校英语社团将举办以“Protect Our Cultural Heritage”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。
提示：1. 文化遗产是国家的财富，很重要；2. 我们可以参观博物馆，了解更多文化遗产；
3. 向家人和朋友宣传保护文化遗产；4. 不损坏文物，从小事做起。
要求：1. 包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；2. 词数80—100，语句通顺，语法正确；3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Protect Our Cultural Heritage
Cultural heritage is very important for us.
审题指导：
体裁:说明文 时态:以一般现在时为主 人称:以第一人称为主
写作框架：
优秀范文：
Protect Our Cultural Heritage
Cultural heritage is is very important for¹ us. It is the treasure of our country and tells us our history.
We can do many things to protect it. First, we can visit museums to learn more about² cultural heritage. Second, we can
our family and friends the importance of³ protecting it. Third, we mustn’t damage any cultural relics when we visit them. If we all do our part⁴, our heritage will last for future generations to enjoy. Start with small things.Let’s take action together to⁵ protect our great cultural heritage.
亮点词块
①is important for 对……重要
②learn about 了解
③the importance of……的重要性
④do our part 尽我们的职责；尽一份力
⑤take action to do 采取行动做……
答案
It is the treasure of our country and tells us our history.
We can do many things to protect it. First, we can visit museums to learn more about cultural heritage. Second, we can tell our family and friends the importance of protecting it. Third, we mustn't damage any cultural relics when we visit them. If we all do our part, our heritage will last for future generations to enjoy. We can start with small things in daily life.
Let's take action together to protect our great cultural heritage.
We can do many things to protect it. First, we can visit museums to learn more about cultural heritage. Second, we can tell our family and friends the importance of protecting it. Third, we mustn't damage any cultural relics when we visit them. If we all do our part, our heritage will last for future generations to enjoy. We can start with small things in daily life.
Let's take action together to protect our great cultural heritage.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语征文写作题，主题为“Protect Our Cultural Heritage”，要求以给定开头为基础，覆盖所有提示要点：①点明文化遗产是国家财富的重要性；②提出参观博物馆了解文化遗产；③向家人朋友宣传保护文化遗产的重要性；④不损坏文物，从小事做起。写作时需采用一般现在时，以第一人称为主，词数控制在80-100，语句通顺，可适当运用亮点词块提升表达效果。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头“Cultural heritage is very important for us.”，补充说明文化遗产是国家的财富，承载着历史，落实提示①；2. 分三点阐述具体保护措施：第一，通过参观博物馆了解更多文化遗产，落实提示②；第二，向家人和朋友宣传保护文化遗产的重要性，落实提示③；第三，参观时不损坏文物，从小事做起，落实提示④；3. 最后发出呼吁，号召共同行动，运用给定的亮点词块（如learn about, the importance of, do our part, take action等），确保语法正确、语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
It is the treasure of our country and tells us our history.
We can do many things to protect it. First, we can visit museums to learn more about cultural heritage. Second, we can tell our family and friends the importance of protecting it. Third, we mustn't damage any cultural relics when we visit them. If we all do our part, our heritage will last for future generations to enjoy. We can start with small things in daily life.
Let's take action together to protect our great cultural heritage.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、文化话题英语表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文严格遵循征文要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，运用指定亮点词块丰富表达，语言简洁通顺，符合词数要求，准确传达了保护文化遗产的主题，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语征文写作题，主题为“Protect Our Cultural Heritage”，要求以给定开头为基础，覆盖所有提示要点：①点明文化遗产是国家财富的重要性；②提出参观博物馆了解文化遗产；③向家人朋友宣传保护文化遗产的重要性；④不损坏文物，从小事做起。写作时需采用一般现在时，以第一人称为主，词数控制在80-100，语句通顺，可适当运用亮点词块提升表达效果。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头“Cultural heritage is very important for us.”，补充说明文化遗产是国家的财富，承载着历史，落实提示①；2. 分三点阐述具体保护措施：第一，通过参观博物馆了解更多文化遗产，落实提示②；第二，向家人和朋友宣传保护文化遗产的重要性，落实提示③；第三，参观时不损坏文物，从小事做起，落实提示④；3. 最后发出呼吁，号召共同行动，运用给定的亮点词块（如learn about, the importance of, do our part, take action等），确保语法正确、语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
It is the treasure of our country and tells us our history.
We can do many things to protect it. First, we can visit museums to learn more about cultural heritage. Second, we can tell our family and friends the importance of protecting it. Third, we mustn't damage any cultural relics when we visit them. If we all do our part, our heritage will last for future generations to enjoy. We can start with small things in daily life.
Let's take action together to protect our great cultural heritage.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、文化话题英语表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文严格遵循征文要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，运用指定亮点词块丰富表达，语言简洁通顺，符合词数要求，准确传达了保护文化遗产的主题，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
