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（二）书面表达
假如近期你校英文报正在开展以 “Should friends be similar or different?” 为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇短文投稿。
作文要求：语句连贯，词数70左右。
写作指导
（1）审题定调
文体：
（2）思路构建
假如近期你校英文报正在开展以 “Should friends be similar or different?” 为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇短文投稿。
作文要求：语句连贯，词数70左右。
写作指导
（1）审题定调
文体：
议论文
时态：一般现在时
人称：第一人称和第三人称
（2）思路构建
答案
(1) 议论文；一般现在时；第一人称和第三人称
One possible version:
Should friends be similar or different?
I think it doesn't matter whether a friend is similar to me or not.
My best friend is Judy. We are similar in many ways. We are both tall and slim, and we are both outgoing—we enjoy meeting new people. However, we are also different. For example, she likes doing sport very much, while I prefer reading. But we still have a great time together.
So being the same or different isn't important. What truly matters is that we can be happy together, care about each other, and help each other when needed.
One possible version:
Should friends be similar or different?
I think it doesn't matter whether a friend is similar to me or not.
My best friend is Judy. We are similar in many ways. We are both tall and slim, and we are both outgoing—we enjoy meeting new people. However, we are also different. For example, she likes doing sport very much, while I prefer reading. But we still have a great time together.
So being the same or different isn't important. What truly matters is that we can be happy together, care about each other, and help each other when needed.
解析
【分析】首先审题确定文体为议论文，时态用一般现在时，人称结合第一人称和第三人称；接着围绕主题“Should friends be similar or different?”，先明确自身观点，再列举朋友间相似与不同的具体事例，最后总结核心观点，确保语句连贯、词数符合要求。
【解析】第一步：审题定调，根据征文主题确定文体为议论文，时态用一般现在时，人称使用第一人称表达观点、第三人称介绍朋友；第二步：思路构建，先点明“朋友相似或不同都没关系”的观点，再举例说明朋友间的相似之处（外貌、性格）和不同之处（爱好），最后总结真正重要的是相处愉快、互相帮助；第三步：组织语言，确保语句连贯，词数约70左右，完成短文写作。
【答案】(1) 议论文；一般现在时；第一人称和第三人称
One possible version:
Should friends be similar or different?
I think it doesn't matter whether a friend is similar to me or not.
My best friend is Judy. We are similar in many ways. We are both tall and slim, and we are both outgoing—we enjoy meeting new people. However, we are also different. For example, she likes doing sport very much, while I prefer reading. But we still have a great time together.
So being the same or different isn't important. What truly matters is that we can be happy together, care about each other, and help each other when needed.
【知识点】英语书面表达、议论文写作、时态与人称运用
【点评】本题为英语书面表达基础题型，考查学生的审题能力、观点表达能力及语言组织能力，要求学生围绕主题清晰阐述观点，结合具体事例支撑，符合初中英语写作的基本要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】第一步：审题定调，根据征文主题确定文体为议论文，时态用一般现在时，人称使用第一人称表达观点、第三人称介绍朋友；第二步：思路构建，先点明“朋友相似或不同都没关系”的观点，再举例说明朋友间的相似之处（外貌、性格）和不同之处（爱好），最后总结真正重要的是相处愉快、互相帮助；第三步：组织语言，确保语句连贯，词数约70左右，完成短文写作。
【答案】(1) 议论文；一般现在时；第一人称和第三人称
One possible version:
Should friends be similar or different?
I think it doesn't matter whether a friend is similar to me or not.
My best friend is Judy. We are similar in many ways. We are both tall and slim, and we are both outgoing—we enjoy meeting new people. However, we are also different. For example, she likes doing sport very much, while I prefer reading. But we still have a great time together.
So being the same or different isn't important. What truly matters is that we can be happy together, care about each other, and help each other when needed.
【知识点】英语书面表达、议论文写作、时态与人称运用
【点评】本题为英语书面表达基础题型，考查学生的审题能力、观点表达能力及语言组织能力，要求学生围绕主题清晰阐述观点，结合具体事例支撑，符合初中英语写作的基本要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.6
