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写作创新·读帖回帖 假设你是阳光中学七年级的学生 Andy，你是一名野生动物爱好者。近日，你登录了 WCS（国际野生生物保护学会）的网站，浏览了下方的帖子，请你根据网站留言板中的问题写一篇英文短文回帖。
注意：（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数 60 左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】（以下
部分仅供参考，希望同学们可以多开动脑筋、发散思维）
【实战演练】
I am Andy, a Grade 7 student from Sunshine Middle School. I love wild animals, and my favourite wild animals are
写作创新·读帖回帖 假设你是阳光中学七年级的学生 Andy，你是一名野生动物爱好者。近日，你登录了 WCS（国际野生生物保护学会）的网站，浏览了下方的帖子，请你根据网站留言板中的问题写一篇英文短文回帖。
注意：（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数 60 左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】（以下
部分仅供参考，希望同学们可以多开动脑筋、发散思维）【实战演练】
I am Andy, a Grade 7 student from Sunshine Middle School. I love wild animals, and my favourite wild animals are
tigers. Tigers are big and strong. They have orange fur with dark stripes. They live on small animals. However, there are not many tigers in the wild now. People hunt them for their fur or other parts of the body. Also, some people cut down forests to build houses, get wood or make farmland. As a result, there is less and less living space for them. It's time for us to take action to protect tigers now. We had better stop people from hunting them.
答案
One possible version:
I am Andy, a Grade 7 student from Sunshine Middle School. I love wild animals, and my favourite wild animals are tigers. Tigers are big and strong. They have orange fur with dark stripes. They live on small animals.
However, there are not many tigers in the wild now. People hunt them for their fur or other parts of the body. Also, some people cut down forests to build houses, get wood or make farmland. As a result, there is less and less living space for them.
It's time for us to take action to protect tigers now. We had better stop people from hunting them.
I am Andy, a Grade 7 student from Sunshine Middle School. I love wild animals, and my favourite wild animals are tigers. Tigers are big and strong. They have orange fur with dark stripes. They live on small animals.
However, there are not many tigers in the wild now. People hunt them for their fur or other parts of the body. Also, some people cut down forests to build houses, get wood or make farmland. As a result, there is less and less living space for them.
It's time for us to take action to protect tigers now. We had better stop people from hunting them.
解析
【分析】
本题为七年级英语书面表达题，需结合给定身份（阳光中学七年级学生Andy、野生动物爱好者）和开头完成回帖。解题思路：1. 选定熟悉的野生动物（如老虎，易描述）；2. 先明确最喜欢的动物，再描述其外形/习性体现喜爱；3. 说明该动物的濒危现状及原因；4. 发出简单保护呼吁，确保词数60左右、语句连贯，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，明确最喜欢的野生动物为tigers，符合身份设定；
2. 描述老虎的外形（big and strong, orange fur with dark stripes）和食性（live on small animals），展现对动物的了解；
3. 说明老虎濒危原因：人类猎杀（hunt for fur or body parts）、砍伐森林导致栖息地减少；
4. 发出保护呼吁（take action to protect tigers, stop hunting），完成写作，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I am Andy, a Grade 7 student from Sunshine Middle School. I love wild animals, and my favourite wild animals are tigers. Tigers are big and strong. They have orange fur with dark stripes. They live on small animals.
However, there are not many tigers in the wild now. People hunt them for their fur or other parts of the body. Also, some people cut down forests to build houses, get wood or make farmland. As a result, there is less and less living space for them.
It's time for us to take action to protect tigers now. We had better stop people from hunting them.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题类写作、英文短文写作
【点评】
本题围绕“野生动物保护”主题，考查七年级学生的语言组织和话题表达能力，要求结合给定身份完成短文，难度适中，符合初中低年级写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为七年级英语书面表达题，需结合给定身份（阳光中学七年级学生Andy、野生动物爱好者）和开头完成回帖。解题思路：1. 选定熟悉的野生动物（如老虎，易描述）；2. 先明确最喜欢的动物，再描述其外形/习性体现喜爱；3. 说明该动物的濒危现状及原因；4. 发出简单保护呼吁，确保词数60左右、语句连贯，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，明确最喜欢的野生动物为tigers，符合身份设定；
2. 描述老虎的外形（big and strong, orange fur with dark stripes）和食性（live on small animals），展现对动物的了解；
3. 说明老虎濒危原因：人类猎杀（hunt for fur or body parts）、砍伐森林导致栖息地减少；
4. 发出保护呼吁（take action to protect tigers, stop hunting），完成写作，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
I am Andy, a Grade 7 student from Sunshine Middle School. I love wild animals, and my favourite wild animals are tigers. Tigers are big and strong. They have orange fur with dark stripes. They live on small animals.
However, there are not many tigers in the wild now. People hunt them for their fur or other parts of the body. Also, some people cut down forests to build houses, get wood or make farmland. As a result, there is less and less living space for them.
It's time for us to take action to protect tigers now. We had better stop people from hunting them.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题类写作、英文短文写作
【点评】
本题围绕“野生动物保护”主题，考查七年级学生的语言组织和话题表达能力，要求结合给定身份完成短文，难度适中，符合初中低年级写作要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
