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阳光中学的学生参加了一个国际夏令营。假如你是七年级一班的王冰，在这次国际夏令营中，你将向来自世界各地的营员介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。请以“My Favourite Chinese Festival”为题，结合下面的问题提示，用英文写一篇短文，介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
要点提示： 1. What is the festival and when is it?
2. How do people celebrate it?
3. What do you do and how do you feel?
注意事项： 1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favourite Chinese Festival
Hello, everyone. I'm very glad to share something about my favourite Chinese festival with you.
My favourite Chinese festival
阳光中学的学生参加了一个国际夏令营。假如你是七年级一班的王冰，在这次国际夏令营中，你将向来自世界各地的营员介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。请以“My Favourite Chinese Festival”为题，结合下面的问题提示，用英文写一篇短文，介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。
要点提示： 1. What is the festival and when is it?
2. How do people celebrate it?
3. What do you do and how do you feel?
注意事项： 1. 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favourite Chinese Festival
Hello, everyone. I'm very glad to share something about my favourite Chinese festival with you.
My favourite Chinese festival
is the Lantern Festival. The festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month. It is a big day full of fun. People around China celebrate this festival by eating tangyuan, a kind of sweet dumplings. There are usually lantern shows in cities and towns. The colorful lanterns are really beautiful. I love guessing the riddles and I often have fun on the festival. I think the Lantern Festival is an exciting one you can't miss.
答案
One possible version:
Hello,everyone. I'm very glad to share something about my favourite Chinese festival with you.
My favourite Chinese festival is the Lantern Festival. The festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month. It is a big day full of fun. People around China celebrate this festival by eating tangyuan, a kind of sweet dumplings. There are usually lantern shows in cities and towns. The colorful lanterns are really beautiful. I love guessing the riddles and I often have fun on the festival. I think the Lantern Festival is an exciting one you can't miss.
(80 words)
Hello,everyone. I'm very glad to share something about my favourite Chinese festival with you.
My favourite Chinese festival is the Lantern Festival. The festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month. It is a big day full of fun. People around China celebrate this festival by eating tangyuan, a kind of sweet dumplings. There are usually lantern shows in cities and towns. The colorful lanterns are really beautiful. I love guessing the riddles and I often have fun on the festival. I think the Lantern Festival is an exciting one you can't miss.
(80 words)
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务：以“My Favourite Chinese Festival”为题介绍中国传统节日，需覆盖三个要点：节日名称与时间、庆祝方式、个人活动与感受，词数80左右，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 选定具体传统节日（如元宵节）；2. 对应要点组织内容：先点明节日及时间，再写庆祝习俗，最后描述个人活动和感受；3. 确保语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】根据题目要求，结合要点提示，写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头，点明最喜欢的节日是元宵节，说明其时间为农历正月十五；2. 介绍庆祝方式：吃汤圆、看灯展；3. 描述个人活动（猜灯谜）及感受，最后总结节日的意义，确保内容完整、语句通顺，词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Hello,everyone. I'm very glad to share something about my favourite Chinese festival with you.
My favourite Chinese festival is the Lantern Festival. The festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month. It is a big day full of fun. People around China celebrate this festival by eating tangyuan, a kind of sweet dumplings. There are usually lantern shows in cities and towns. The colorful lanterns are really beautiful. I love guessing the riddles and I often have fun on the festival. I think the Lantern Festival is an exciting one you can't miss.
【知识点】英语书面表达；节日介绍
【点评】本文覆盖了题目所有要点，内容完整，语句通顺，符合词数要求，准确介绍了元宵节的相关信息及个人感受，是一篇符合要求的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】根据题目要求，结合要点提示，写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头，点明最喜欢的节日是元宵节，说明其时间为农历正月十五；2. 介绍庆祝方式：吃汤圆、看灯展；3. 描述个人活动（猜灯谜）及感受，最后总结节日的意义，确保内容完整、语句通顺，词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Hello,everyone. I'm very glad to share something about my favourite Chinese festival with you.
My favourite Chinese festival is the Lantern Festival. The festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first lunar month. It is a big day full of fun. People around China celebrate this festival by eating tangyuan, a kind of sweet dumplings. There are usually lantern shows in cities and towns. The colorful lanterns are really beautiful. I love guessing the riddles and I often have fun on the festival. I think the Lantern Festival is an exciting one you can't miss.
【知识点】英语书面表达；节日介绍
【点评】本文覆盖了题目所有要点，内容完整，语句通顺，符合词数要求，准确介绍了元宵节的相关信息及个人感受，是一篇符合要求的书面表达。
【难度系数】0.5
