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第三节 书面表达（共15分）
你的学校迎来了英国交换生团队，请你根据思维导图提示写一篇短文介绍学校食堂，帮助他们快速了解校园就餐情况。
注意：
1. 可适当增加信息；
2. 不少于80词。
Dear exchange friends,
I'd like to introduce our school canteen to you.
你的学校迎来了英国交换生团队，请你根据思维导图提示写一篇短文介绍学校食堂，帮助他们快速了解校园就餐情况。
注意：
1. 可适当增加信息；
2. 不少于80词。
Dear exchange friends,
I'd like to introduce our school canteen to you.
答案
Dear exchange friends,
I’d like to introduce our school canteen to you.
We have rich and healthy food here. It serves over 20 kinds of dishes every day, from traditional Chinese meals to simple Western food. To keep students fit, it does not serve deep-fried food or sugary drinks, and prepares at least 3 kinds of fresh fruit for us every school day. I still remember my first lunch here two years ago. The steamed fish with tofu tasted delicious and soft, and it reminded me of my grandma’s home cooking.
As for the environment, the dining hall is bright and clean. We have waste-sorting bins to support the zero-waste idea. The workers are also friendly, and we usually get our meals in less than 5 minutes even during busy lunch hours. What’s more, the dish prices are really student-friendly. Most dishes cost about 5 yuan, and an average meal costs about 10 yuan.
I strongly recommend that you eat in our canteen. I believe you will love the tasty food and pleasant dining atmosphere here!
I’d like to introduce our school canteen to you.
We have rich and healthy food here. It serves over 20 kinds of dishes every day, from traditional Chinese meals to simple Western food. To keep students fit, it does not serve deep-fried food or sugary drinks, and prepares at least 3 kinds of fresh fruit for us every school day. I still remember my first lunch here two years ago. The steamed fish with tofu tasted delicious and soft, and it reminded me of my grandma’s home cooking.
As for the environment, the dining hall is bright and clean. We have waste-sorting bins to support the zero-waste idea. The workers are also friendly, and we usually get our meals in less than 5 minutes even during busy lunch hours. What’s more, the dish prices are really student-friendly. Most dishes cost about 5 yuan, and an average meal costs about 10 yuan.
I strongly recommend that you eat in our canteen. I believe you will love the tasty food and pleasant dining atmosphere here!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇介绍学校食堂的书面表达，需结合思维导图的五个核心要点（食物评价、价格评价、服务评价、环境评价、个人建议）完成写作。首先开头点明介绍食堂的主题，接着依次从食物的种类、健康性展开描述，再说明食堂环境的特点、服务的便捷性，提及价格的合理性，最后给出推荐建议，适当补充细节让内容更丰富，满足不少于80词的要求。
【解析】
写作时按照思维导图结构依次展开：
1. 食物部分：说明食堂食物丰富健康，有多种中西餐，不提供油炸食品和含糖饮料，搭配新鲜水果，举例具体菜品增强真实感；
2. 环境部分：描述食堂明亮干净，设置垃圾分类箱；
3. 服务部分：说明工作人员友好，打饭速度快；
4. 价格部分：点明菜品价格亲民，符合学生消费；
5. 结尾部分：给出推荐，表达对食堂的喜爱，符合题目要求。
【答案】
Dear exchange friends,
I’d like to introduce our school canteen to you.
We have rich and healthy food here. It serves over 20 kinds of dishes every day, from traditional Chinese meals to simple Western food. To keep students fit, it does not serve deep-fried food or sugary drinks, and prepares at least 3 kinds of fresh fruit for us every school day. I still remember my first lunch here two years ago. The steamed fish with tofu tasted delicious and soft, and it reminded me of my grandma’s home cooking.
As for the environment, the dining hall is bright and clean. We have waste-sorting bins to support the zero-waste idea. The workers are also friendly, and we usually get our meals in less than 5 minutes even during busy lunch hours. What’s more, the dish prices are really student-friendly. Most dishes cost about 5 yuan, and an average meal costs about 10 yuan.
I strongly recommend that you eat in our canteen. I believe you will love the tasty food and pleasant dining atmosphere here!
【知识点】
英语书面表达；思维导图写作；应用文写作
【点评】
本文严格围绕思维导图要点展开，结构清晰，内容充实，适当补充了细节（如菜品举例、价格具体数值等），符合题目要求，语言流畅自然，适合用于介绍学校食堂。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一篇介绍学校食堂的书面表达，需结合思维导图的五个核心要点（食物评价、价格评价、服务评价、环境评价、个人建议）完成写作。首先开头点明介绍食堂的主题，接着依次从食物的种类、健康性展开描述，再说明食堂环境的特点、服务的便捷性，提及价格的合理性，最后给出推荐建议，适当补充细节让内容更丰富，满足不少于80词的要求。
【解析】
写作时按照思维导图结构依次展开：
1. 食物部分：说明食堂食物丰富健康，有多种中西餐，不提供油炸食品和含糖饮料，搭配新鲜水果，举例具体菜品增强真实感；
2. 环境部分：描述食堂明亮干净，设置垃圾分类箱；
3. 服务部分：说明工作人员友好，打饭速度快；
4. 价格部分：点明菜品价格亲民，符合学生消费；
5. 结尾部分：给出推荐，表达对食堂的喜爱，符合题目要求。
【答案】
Dear exchange friends,
I’d like to introduce our school canteen to you.
We have rich and healthy food here. It serves over 20 kinds of dishes every day, from traditional Chinese meals to simple Western food. To keep students fit, it does not serve deep-fried food or sugary drinks, and prepares at least 3 kinds of fresh fruit for us every school day. I still remember my first lunch here two years ago. The steamed fish with tofu tasted delicious and soft, and it reminded me of my grandma’s home cooking.
As for the environment, the dining hall is bright and clean. We have waste-sorting bins to support the zero-waste idea. The workers are also friendly, and we usually get our meals in less than 5 minutes even during busy lunch hours. What’s more, the dish prices are really student-friendly. Most dishes cost about 5 yuan, and an average meal costs about 10 yuan.
I strongly recommend that you eat in our canteen. I believe you will love the tasty food and pleasant dining atmosphere here!
【知识点】
英语书面表达；思维导图写作；应用文写作
【点评】
本文严格围绕思维导图要点展开，结构清晰，内容充实，适当补充了细节（如菜品举例、价格具体数值等），符合题目要求，语言流畅自然，适合用于介绍学校食堂。
【难度系数】
0.5
